ShiVi SS- Ulajh kar tujhse- Part 6 pg 28(28.9.21) - Page 8

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Posted: 4 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: White-Lilac

Tumne jo uljhan paida ki hai usse sab toot ke bikharne wale hai koi nahi bachega 😆


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace


So to hai. Mujhe to kisine yeh keh bhi diya ki aisi tragic story they won’t read🙂

Hmm bohot logon ko nahi pasand hota hai sad stories padhna. Padh ke upset hone se better wo log padhe hi na sochte hai but at least they shouldn't say something like this to the writer. Writer sab stories same kyu likhe bhala.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace


Thank you so much!!

Yeah I do hope it is different.

Raavi is breaking down. Shiva’s choice is already made.

She is pregnant and yes he is extremely soft with her.

Like u said there is more than what meets the eye. So keep patience and carry on👍👍👍🌺🙂

I will wait for it❤️

Stories with a hint of tragedy, sacrifice, and turmoil are always a delight to read for me. I believe love grows stronger in difficult situations.i don't know if your story will have a happy ending or not, but sometimes incomplete love stories exhibit the purest form of love.

Keep writing 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#74

Maine padh liya tha 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Sab ulaj gaya 😭 but you portrayed all the emotions beautifully

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: White-Lilac

Hmm bohot logon ko nahi pasand hota hai sad stories padhna. Padh ke upset hone se better wo log padhe hi na sochte hai but at least they shouldn't say something like this to the writer. Writer sab stories same kyu likhe bhala.


Nahin nahin that reader didn’t at all mean it offensively. After commenting that I thought that it came out all wrong. So I deleted it. The reader meant in a very non critical way and the reader is a very special one for me because they have been pressing me to write more, encouraging me when I felt no motive just bu some words. And even their words didn’t offend me at all.

I write stories. Thats my hobby. Reading and not reading it their choice and never had anyone’s choice in these matters affected or offended me. So let that be clarified🙂

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

I will wait for it❤️

Stories with a hint of tragedy, sacrifice, and turmoil are always a delight to read for me. I believe love grows stronger in difficult situations.i don't know if your story will have a happy ending or not, but sometimes incomplete love stories exhibit the purest form of love.

Keep writing 🤗


Aww Warm and kind words. My favorite. Stories of sacrifice turmoil and tragedy always makes me antsy yet My readers have time and again complained about me always writing stuff that turn them to sobbing mess🤣


Thank you so much for being so sweet.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: White-Lilac

Maine padh liya tha 🤣


I know I saw😛

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace


Nahin nahin that reader didn’t at all mean it offensively. After commenting that I thought that it came out all wrong. So I deleted it. The reader meant in a very non critical way and the reader is a very special one for me because they have been pressing me to write more, encouraging me when I felt no motive just bu some words. And even their words didn’t offend me at all.

I write stories. Thats my hobby. Reading and not reading it their choice and never had anyone’s choice in these matters affected or offended me. So let that be clarified🙂

Then it's alright... I thought you might be feeling bad about it par koi nahi sab theek hai 👍🏼

But it's true whether to read a story or not, it totally depends on the reader. One can give it a try, if it interests you then you can go on with it warna bhool jaao simple.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Scarysea

Sab ulaj gaya 😭 but you portrayed all the emotions beautifully


Ulajhna hi tha. Naam rakha hai to asar to hoga hi na😛

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