I Am Sorry PS-- Shakhi OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: Aimsha

Oh my my, what a progress of story you have made, you guys are so creative that any plot given to you you can write a fabulous story knitted around it, hats off, will wait eagerly to read more from you, stay safe.

Thankyou so much Aimsha for your ever and always motivating words.😘😘😘

Originally posted by: mehr05

Its very beautiful Shay!❤️

A broken Shaurya 😭

I loved the conversation. ❤️

Thanks Mehr🤗

Glad you loved it.

Originally posted by: Manju1066

Amazing as usual.loved it💕💕

Thanks Manju❤️

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Awesome.. loved it👍🏼

Please continue❤️

Loved it

Anokhi finally understood Shaurya's percpective

This was pure love. From how they were concerned about eo, took care to Anokhi agreeing with Shagun & leaving teary eyed, from Shaurya dissing Shagun off to him saving Anokhi, everything was perfect. He'll always be there for her no matter what, the crux of your story 🤗😊

Their scene at the end was heartwarming. Shaurya addressing the issue & asking for Anokhi's opinion is something I'd really like to see in the show too.

Enjoyed reading, it had logic & made lots of sense. Lovely work 🥳

Awesome 🥰🥰🥰🥰

Loved it🥰🥰🥰❤❤❤

Originally posted by: anjali9996

Awesome update

Really wanted to read something on the current track

Thanks for updating

Lovely os 😍😍

Thankyou so much Anjali❤️

Originally posted by: vijisridhar

It's good One shot, i enjoyed reading it. 👍

My only comment is you need not have made Shaurya weak at the end by making him plead with Anokhi to not leave him. i know you did that because Astha left him when he was younger. That shoukd not be the case now, he shoukd have made her stay with a lot of haq on his wife not weak.

Just my POV ✌️

Viji

Thanks Viji for your opinion. But he couldn't show his haq because for Anokhi still hadn't accepted the relationship. Soo he didn't want to force her again like he did with the wedding..

Soon that's why...

I wish makers see your writing and apply in your writing.. loved it..