ShiVi OS: In the Shower (collab with Neha) - Page 4

This was amazing, loved reading it!

Shiva, Raavi and the shower is an explosive, magical combination

I can't wait to see something like this on screen too! ❤️

Originally posted by: ananyakhetarpal

This was amazing

Their emotions and the intimacy was 🔥🔥

Beautifully written ❤️

Thank you! ❤️

Originally posted by: Honey272

That was so hot!😳 Please do write more :)

Thank you so much! ❤️

Originally posted by: vivpri

Wow... i am blushing 😃🥰

thank you so much! ❤️

Originally posted by: Malika1993.06

Hayee meri jaan 🤗

What an amazing os Aisa scenes kab milega dhekne ko show mein 😛 after 200+ episodes 😔

But thanks to wonderful writers who makes our day go beautiful by their wonderful works Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us 🤗

thank you so much! ❤️

i'm waiting for such scenes in the show too.. 200+ matlab aur 5 months wait karna padega 😕

i hope makers hum par meherban ho jaye and we get something faster 😆

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

This was sooo good...

Loveeed this os..

thank you! ❤️

Originally posted by: hedwig_potter

Whoa, its so nice!!!!😍😍

I loved reading it👏❤️

Mujhe part 2 chaiye!!!! Pretty please🤗

thank you so much!❤️

@howler: apparently, humne itna achcha likh diya ki part 2 ki maang ho rahi hai😆

Originally posted by: katheriene

This was such a lovely os❤️

Shivi's romance was hot 🔥

thank you! ❤️

Originally posted by: CheerlessIM

Awsome 💯💯💯💯🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

Somnath ki sabse beautiful ladki

Aur sabse hot ladka😍😍😍

Perfect 👏

thank you so much! ❤️

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

Aww.. that was like a dream. 😆

Loved it. ❤️

thank you ❤️