Raghvi OS : Love glitch - Page 2

Whattt?? 😲..Was that😆 ...such a great one 👏...not only raghav ..the shock hovered over a part of me 😆..wen i read that line ...u r such a beautiful writer keech ...🤗...keep writing gal...!!⭐️

This was good and different..

Originally posted by: ReemShah

This os was an absolute shocker..i had to actually stop twice and re-read to know if I was reading correctly.

This is so good- you showed the crisis of Raghav's feelings- and on which feelings he should act on.

I loved it

Thanks alot for reading for liking and for commenting. 🤗

And I sort of expected that shock. 😆

Originally posted by: Mihika

Like it?... Are you kidding me?

It's amazing and honestly every line of it screams love to me....

It is so engrossing❤️

No, I was not kidding. 😆

Thank you so much Mihika, means alot. ❤️

Originally posted by: xerxes12

This is so amazing❤️.

Forbidden love stories are so attractive I tell you....him being in the sane state is responsible to trap in dilemmas..and her being intoxicated gets the pleasure to fuel their desires, ultimately testing his endurance to resist.

The whole circumstance is well portrayed👏

Thank you so much. 🤗

That's so true. Forbidden love has another level of love, it just makes the whole story beautiful and that's the reason why I wrote it.

Originally posted by: Arati007

Its appearing more like Silsila badalte rishton ka.....lockdown effect watching too much TV😀

Hehe, I wrote it long before SBRK aired. Though inside my head, in this story the girl married the other guy in the end.

Thanks for reading. 🤗

Originally posted by: Avneel07

This was amazing. Wonderful. Keep writing more

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Thank you! 🤗

Originally posted by: Me000w

You are a wonderful writer 👍🏼

Keep writing on the forum! 😳

Thanks alot Tanu, means alot to me. 🤗

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

It was fantastic keechu!👏 how hot it was and the ending got me a bit sad, friend's fiance😭

Enjoyed it totally!

Keep writing!☺️

Hey Dishi, 🤗

It's been a while since we met here... 😆how have you been?

Thanks alot yaar. This story has a sad ending. She married Mandaar. 😆😈

Originally posted by: princy48

Whattt?? 😲..Was that😆 ...such a great one 👏...not only raghav ..the shock hovered over a part of me 😆..wen i read that line ...u r such a beautiful writer keech ...🤗...keep writing gal...!!⭐️

Princy 🤗

A one shot it was. 😆

Thanks alot for reading.

BTW do you remember an adiya story I posted in bp forum, which I left unfinished, masked feelings? This one shot is a part of that short story. 😳