Love, Unrequited [Thread 2 : Pg 140] - Page 97

Originally posted by: cheers2all

It was a treat watching all the songs and reading all the comments.

P - The Aitbaar song was awesome. I had heard the movies songs long time ago, had almost forgotten. You are so right about dating the songs. I have been listening to quite a few bhoole bisre geet since last few days!

Yes, was listening to albums and realized even the videos were more meaningful and lovelier.

Kavi - The Phalguni Pathak song you shared is one of my favorites too! The song also has an umbrella 😉 Just saying 😆

Yeah, that cute umbrella.

GN - "Pehli mulakat mein...Pehli baar mein..." ==> So Nishit was a lost cause right from the time she stopped by his desk for the maps & badge? I always thought it was after he started to got her know more. Interesting!!

Did not post the song in story's context. I just like the song and it appeared in my suggestions so was sharing it with you all.

Never had a crush on Abhijeet Sawant, but I like his voice. Too bad he doesn't get too many projects. I only watched first 2-3 seasons of Indian Idol. There was one contestant - Amit Sana who had lovely voice.

Remember the name.

I didn't watch any seasons after that except the current one. The singers are quite talented. My favorites are Pawandeep, Ashish and Sireesha. But it's a torture watching the show as such. So much drama and fakeness. I fast forward all the junk and only listen to the songs.

Agree about drama and fake tears. Flirting with judges. I don't watch it on TV anymore. Because it feels like spending too much time. Mostly if they appear on my YT suggestions I click on it. Or I am searching for a song and their rendition appears.

Bigg boss...ahem, very embarrassed to say I enjoyed watching it. But gave up since last 4-5 years. They got overboard with all the yelling and fights. The last season I watched was Gauhar Khan waala.

This year I watched clips of BigBoss on colors YT channel when I would go to check on any new serials clippings on Colors channel. Just to pass time. I no more watch TV so whatever I watch it is in small clips on YT. 😅

Originally posted by: kizh72

Actually Kavi, the last few seasons have been really good. These folk are really weak, compared to some I’ve seen the last few seasons. Before saregama on Zee used to have the better singers

Yes the recent seasons have more talented singers, the show becoming very competitive.

Originally posted by: barrister

I'm so sorry I missed your reply! I was actually avoiding all recent comments for fear of spoilers..

But your reply 😲

You've decided to keep us on our toes until the very end?

Chaliye, I promise I'll keep begging you for a happy ending as long as I can! I've come to love these folks a bit too much.. 😳

I also have a request for you.. I saw you've added song recs for your chapters! If you find time, could you please add them to the respective chapters? It'll be really nice for those of us reading now to be able to listen to them while reading the chapters!

As for barrister babu, I don't mind at all. But I'd have to tell you I am not the barrister! The one who introduced me to IF and signed up for this account is the lawyer, hence the name!

If the above fact offends you, I've been told it does by some, you could call me Mana or Manu.. that's what my real name shortens down to! 😊

Thank you GN, you're sharing some amazing work with us! ♥️

I added Babu to Barrister because there's a show on air right now with the same name. Our neighbour watches it on loud volume. So it's stuck in my mind. 😆

Thank you, Manu for the wonderful comments. Through your comments I am living through the story all over again.

Also, we are 50 chapters in. If at any point you find it tedious and exhausting - it is a humungous task - to comment for every chapter, you can simply club all of what you liked and not, in one or two comments. I won't mind. But if you're okay commenting for each chapter. I don't mind that either.

Just don't feel pressurised or bound that you have to. 🤗

Originally posted by: Hermigran

I always read only Arshi fanfics on this forum but I was curious about your story and I had the inkling that tejas was not the main protagonist.

Thank you for reading it despite your reservations!

The first few chapters were meh for me but they still managed to make me read your story further and not leave it and I am so happy that I read it.I love love this story .

Again, have to thank you for not giving up on it. I am delighted it managed to win your heart.

I don't like tejas and sana at all.Atleast sana is very upfront about her indifference towards kirti but tejas seems manipulative.He tries to create misunderstanding between them by telling kirti that nishit is unreliable and a player and in front of nishit,he acts like there is something more between him and kirti.That totally fake phone call infront of prasanna made me so angry.l don't think nishit has a gf ,she seems to be his friend..but that's my guess.He doesn't want to admit his feelings for her as he thinks his feelings are unrequited and doesn't want to be vulnerable in front of her.He reacts by taking cues from her.If she appears disinterested ,he follows suit.

Loved reading your views on characters!

All in all,it is a very addictive story and I find it somewhat similar to Tiwari and sons but no offense to the writer,I find it much better as the conflict in that one seemed contrived and unreal.

I am embarrassed at the comparison. T&S is a story class apart. Her ability to spin a tale, her eyes to detail, her diction and sharp writing cannot be reproduced. The author is at a stage where amateurs like us can only dream to be.

I am a silent reader and I have never commented on any story on this forum as they were written long ago and I see no point in it but I read your post that u want to decrease the frequency of your updates,I couldn't help myself.I am totally selfish that way.Anyway,thanks for writing this story .Your writing is beautiful and pls pls don't leave it midway on a cliffhanger.

Thank you

Thank you. Flattered that you felt enough for the story to break your silence.

Will try to maintain the continuity.

I just hope you are not put off by coming up contrived situations where you'd have to suspend your belief. 😅

Originally posted by: Ginnosuke_Nohar

Thank you. Flattered that you felt enough for the story to break your silence.

Will try to maintain the continuity.

I just hope you are not put off by coming up contrived situations where you'd have to suspend your belief. 😅

Naah.. I love this story Everyone has different taste.I just couldn't like that one.But u keep writing,I need to read 50 more chapters from you😎

"All in all,it is a very addictive story and I find it somewhat similar to Tiwari and sons but no offense to the writer,I find it much better as the conflict in that one seemed contrived and unreal.

I am embarrassed at the comparison. T&S is a story class apart. Her ability to spin a tale, her eyes to detail, her diction and sharp writing cannot be reproduced. The author is at a stage where amateurs like us can only dream to be."

Glad GN you were humble and addressed this. It is perfectly alright to not like a story..but it is not ok to compare and diss Tewari in this thread.

Originally posted by: Ginnosuke_Nohar

I just hope you are not put off by coming up contrived situations where you'd have to suspend your belief. 😅

Feel sorry for Kirti and Nishit. They are being played by their Friends, family and fate.

they have never opened up because of their own insecurities. Nishit knows some of her insecurities then why didn’t he atleast say things to assure her or propose her? Does he really have girl friends or is he always pretending..or he realizes what’s an casual affair versus what’s going to get real and he is scared?

I am shocked Kirti goes and marries Mayank..at the hospital I almost thought Nishit and Kirti were heading to registrar office..you totally took us by surprise twist.

Mayank is now acting indifferent seeing Kirti helpless? Or he is realizing his was one sided love and won’t be reciprocated? Now that he is married, will he change his stance? I am dreading to see this phase..or read about the torment they will go through.

So urmi knows Kirti is her daughter and still harbors no feelings for her..and she plans to play with Nishit feelings. Talk about enemies around you..there are several who want to brake them apart and probably successful. Will that be the end of their love story? Hope not..

hope all is well ok your end GN. Have a great day!

Originally posted by: cheers2all

I had to go and check what this gif meant. 😅

Originally posted by: bakwas_serial

"All in all,it is a very addictive story and I find it somewhat similar to Tiwari and sons but no offense to the writer,I find it much better as the conflict in that one seemed contrived and unreal.

I am embarrassed at the comparison. T&S is a story class apart. Her ability to spin a tale, her eyes to detail, her diction and sharp writing cannot be reproduced. The author is at a stage where amateurs like us can only dream to be."

Glad GN you were humble and addressed this. It is perfectly alright to not like a story..but it is not ok to compare and diss Tewari in this thread.

Thank you both for saying this!