This is not Love- MG || Thread II (*Epilogue* Page 137) - Page 36

Posted: 2 years ago

great

geet is happy knowing maan is trying to help her to come out of her problem , she not able to hold her love for him but she took little different way to surprise him n to show her feelings 

Posted: 2 years ago

Let me just start off by saying I am already embarrassed for her. I am like oh shit she better hope Maans mom has some visual blindness issues for a few minutes. There goes the impression out the window. But anyways moving back to the beginning wow Maan really cares for her so much. He actually consulted on how to make her feel good when intimate. 

Posted: 2 years ago

Looking forward to their reaction πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Posted: 2 years ago

 Maan try to help geet this side touched geet heart and now she know he never forgot her she want to surprise maan but she het self got shock 

 Now how maan convince his mom

Posted: 2 years ago

Any possibility of another update soon?

Posted: 2 years ago

Working on the new update. Please hang on. Thank you for your patience

Posted: 2 years ago

Note: Apologies for late updates and not able to give the commentor award for few days. I was mad busy and also severely sick. I will try my best to catch-up. Thank you for your patience. Love you all



Part 78

 

Door khulta hai toh Geet whipes on the floor chapaak se

 

Mom is startled

 

Maan is taken aback

 

Geet appears with glowing horns; one hand on her waist andthe another holding the whip

 

Mom is freezed at her place

 

For a moment Maan also goes blank

 

Mom ka toh muhh khula ka khula hai

 

Geet is changing color to pink...her ears getting warm

 

Mom is losing color of her face

 

Maan is the one who springs into action

 

Both the ladies are stuck in their positions

 

Maan walks to Geet and guides her inside the bedroom, lightly wrapping his arm around her shoulder and covering her with his body

 

Geet ko bedroom mein bithaya

 

Door band kia peeche se

 

Bahar gaya

 

Mom ko andar laaya pakadke

 

Mom ko paani diya

 

Geet ke liye kitchen se paani le gaya

 

Geet ke liye paani le gaya toh dekha ki she dressed back into her usual clothes. 

 

Aur ragad ragad ke makeup hataa rahi hai

 

M-Geet. Come. Let’s go into the hall. Mom is there alone

 

G- No no. I am not going. You go

 

M- But she...

 

G- I can’t face her

 

She buries her face into her palms

 

G- I will be here till she goes. You go...take your time...I am here

 

Maan goes into the hall

 

He sits on the couch

 

He feels his throat is dried

 

Drinks the water … jo mom ke liye tha

 

M- Well..I am sorry...there was some confusion

 

Mom has a β€˜I told you look’ and a victory wala smug face

 

Mom- So you want me to convince me more about her?

 

M- I was not convincing anybody. I am an adult. I can decide for myself. If you can decide which man, you wanna sleep with and abandon everything for it then I can also decide with whom I want to be with

 

Mom- Maan! Watch your tongue

 

M- Why should I? Now you realize how I was feeling when you were saying sh*t about her

 

He says pointing towards the room Geet is cooped up in

 

Mom gets up

 

Mom- I can’t believe you have changed so much!

 

Her eyes are teary

 

Mom- And that too for a lowly woman like this...I can’t even....I can’t even believe she is a Doctor!

 

Before Maan could say anything, mom walks out

 

Maan exhales a deep breath he wasn’t aware he was holding

 

+++++

 

Once mom walks out, she realizes she got played

 

Mom ka aim tha to show discord and not let Maan & Geet be together and make Geet leave

 

But... It's mom herself who left, and no discord was sown

 

+++++++

 

Maan makes a tiny drink.

 

Gulps it and knocks on Geet’s door

 

M- Now get out you pesky timid rat

 

Geet is like 'rat kisko bola bey!'...uthke khadi huyi...then stops herself

 

Geet sits back

 

G- Is your mom still there?

 

M-Nope. Only devil slayer is here

 

He says smugly

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 2 years ago
Posted: 2 years ago

Loved it Nilanjana 

Awesome and interesting part

Loo poor Maan fas gaya Maa or pyar ke beech main πŸ˜†πŸ˜† 

Dono ke reaction were perfectly penned

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon😊

Posted: 2 years ago

Nice part...

Maan is trapped between Geet and his mom!

Well, that mom's plan toh paani mein gaya!

Mom ke liye jo paani tha, Maan pee gaya!


More of Maan and Geet, please!

In the next update!


Awesome way of writing!

Do continue soon!

And thank you for the PM.


Cheers!

Posted: 2 years ago

Nice update

Edited by swapna.p - 2 years ago


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