Sairat SS - Bass aap theek ho jao (hospital scene) pt3 updated pg 8 - Page 13

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Archishakashyap

So finally you are back . I am so happy and the moment I saw you have tagged me I was so freaking excited to read . Everyday I thought "when will she start writing?" .

This was soo good. I cannot appreciate you enough for this trust me . I LOVED ITTTTTTTT

I will be waiting for more os because I guess abhi sairat scenes are on the wayyyy❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Keep tagging me .

Lol❤️

Hope you are fine .


Ha ha ha, yeah I am back 😍. I am doing good, thanks ❤. Thanks for such a warm welcome ❤


Thanks, very happy to know that you loved it ❤

Yeah, plan to write more OS from now on. I have been busy and then the whole track was like that, didn't feel like writing stories 🙈.


Will tag you in my OS and SS for sure 😊. Pleasure all mine.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: linakusharberry

Awesome update yaar

Loved it

So virat is trying to make sai jealous badiya hai ji

Iam loving their banter maza arahi hai

Waiting for your next update

Thank you Lina 😊

Oh yeah, he is trying to make her jealous 🤣🤣.

Have posted the next part dear. How have you been? Been a long time we interacted. Have you been busy?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: laksh

Yeah, no doubts on Sai's capabilities 🤣


@bold ho bhi saktha hai, inka koi bharosa nahi 🤣🤣


Oh god, mujhe socially distanced romance show nahi dekhni hai. How difficult was it for me to even type both the words together, next to each other. It is likw typing Virat and Didi's name together 🤣🤣


After all these episodes and sairat story even I don't want to see social distance couple anymore... Ab it's high time ki we need more sairat scenes but CVS lagnahi Raha hai ki they are going to stop copy paste soon... So it's better I move on now... Just hanging because of hope ... Aur kuch episodes

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Deevu

Lovely ❤️

I am sure the writers of this forum are way ahead of tv serial cvs

Thank you 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: HIMAP

Arre yaar abhi abhi sai thoda melt hogayi, khyu phir se apni hi hath se apni life barbaad kar rahi ho... mazza tho side pe rakh, pehle apni jindagi ko bacha lo nurse jane ke baad...

Lol 🤣🤣, he will be safe, don't worry 🤣🤣. Have updated the 3rd part too 😆, may be you have read it already.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: laksh

Yeah, how I wish he gets to know these soon



Same here

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ssoujanya

Wow....superb....loved it....❤️

Nurse here is rocking.... visitors are not allowed

Naughty Virat.... kamal sir ki beti.....aayi ki bahu.... nurse bhi na..."matlab bhai ki...." tit for tat...😆

Acha hua pakhi nahi hai yaha... mahi tho she would have been in cloud 9 and she would be imagining dangerous things in mind...😈

Now virat is in naught mission....making baiko jealous..... Virat.... zyada mat karo...there biwi ka koi bharosa nahi...kuch bhi kar sakthi hai...🤣

Excited for next part.... please give next part really soon....waiting....

Thank you 😍

Nurse ka kya kahoon, Sai ko hi visitor bana diya 🤣.

@bold glad you liked it 🤣. I enjoyed writing it 🤣🤣.


Oh god, I didn't want to write anythimg about Pakhi. Good that they are in hospital. Ho sake toh poora hafta bhi rahe na, would be great 🤣


I am just repying to all the comments, I know that you have already commented on the 3rd part 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Tasu06

This is so beautiful😍

Virat felt relieved seeing Sai.

Pakhi didi always want bezzati for herselfsmiley37

"Aapko pasand ho ya na ho, mein tabhi jaaongi jab aap theek ho jayenge" haayyysmiley42

Hope we get rakhsha dhaaga scene in ghum also🤞smiley36 waiting for itsmiley42

Love the emotional conversation between themsmiley42

Veeru wants baiko to sit with himsmiley9

Amazing dear love it❤

Thank you 😍

I know, have replied to your other comments. I am replying to all the comments 2nd part that I couldn't read.

Yeah, very badly waiting for Raksha Dhaaga scene

Yeah, Viru wants her to close to him always 😍.

I want them to have an emotional conversation . Whatever we want, looks like we can only write it in our stories 🤣🤣.


Thanks for the comments ❤

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Posted: 4 years ago

I know right . Honestly the only place I come to enjoy sairat scenes is here. I was waiting for youuuuu to continue writing.


I am looking forward to all the os / ss 🥺🥺❤️❤️. Ab regular updates banta hai

Show to dekhna hi chor diya . 🥺

Lots of love❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

Oh.my.god.

I loved both the chapters Lakshmi. This was just so cool.

The first part was emotional for me, but it was damn amazing. And the second part,waah,kya hi bolu.

You knocked out didi so quick, such talented writers are there here, hum thode line mein hi didi ko out kar dete hai🤣

Kamal sir ki beti aur Aai ke bete ne ek ward ke madat se hi kamaal kar diya.

I loved the doctor, and special mention to the brave and courageous nurse out there. She has guts man. She better keep tubes away from Sai, and I suspect Virat 00 also stay mum for a change, nail bruises by your wife in this condition might not be good🤣

Fantastic update.

Post the next part soon🤗

P.S.: Sorry dear,couldn't check earlier ,just came online. Have a bit Covid crisis in my home. Thankyou for this.❤

Thanks dear ❤. Mujhe dekho, pehle part 3 ke comments ka reply kiya, abhi 1st aur 2nd part ke comments ka reply kar rahi hoon 🙈.


Hmm, when I wrote the first part, I realised that it was really emotional. Infact, I changed it into an SS because it was getting too lengthy and also because I wanted to cover emotional moments and romantic moments too 😉.


Saxh kaha tumne, Didi ko aise bahar kar diya jaise woh kuch hai hi nahi 🤣🤣. Show mein jhelna pad raha hai, I had no patience this time to handle her in my story 🤣🤣.


Ab Saas ke bete ke badle kabhi toh Aai ki bahu ya Kamal sir ki beti milni chahiye na 🤣🤣


Doctor Sai se bahut khush hain, woh kar oaa rahi hai jo woh khud kabhi kar nahi paate ek police officer ke saath 🤣🤣.

Nurse toh dekha hi hoga 3rd part mein bhi, kaafi courageous hai, ab Viru ke saath usko bhi kuch pal bithana tha, toh woh Sai ko theek se samajh nahi paayi. Virat toh phir bhi jaantha hai 🤣🤣.

Waise, safe exit his hua, no nail bruises 😉.


Sorry dear, visited forum very late today and first thing I did was post the next update which I had typed in a word document. The minute I use forum, I get distracted and lose the flow too. So started to check all tags and replies quite late.


Covid crisis? Sab theek toh hai? How are you and everyone at home? Hope all are fine.

Take care dear 🤗❤️.

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