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Poor Ravi got jealous š
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Whoah!! This was absolute fun to read
Loved the way you made Shiva turning the tableš¤£š¤£
Poor Ravi got jealous š
So Waiting for next drabble ā¤ļø
This was such a fun read !!!! Jealousy is always such a fun sequence to play around with š
Two of my favourite kinds!!!!
Jealousy story and "getting caught while romancing" ones.....
Wouldn't mind a Pg-13 rated one sometimes later. āŗļø
Great story! Very well writtenšš„³
Hey guys, Asfiya here. I started writing this as drabble but it got bigger & turned into OS. Hope you guys wont have problem with this Enjoy!
Fight ft. Family
"Hamesha aapki manmaani nahi chalegi, Dhara bhabhi" Shiva was outside the house when he heared Rishita taunting his bhabhi. Not again! Why dont this woman let everyone live in peace??His blood boiling in anger, How could she still have guts to insult their mother figure Dhara Bhabhi like that?
Clenching his fists, Shiva was about to enter the house to give Rishita a proper piece of mind today,,Just then his phone rang breaking the spell of his thoughts. Seeing a call from store, He picked it up only to know there has been some collision at the store. Shiva refused to come now but kaku requested him to come as Gautam was outside to meet a dealer then. Sniffing with irritation, Shiva left for the store, promising himself to give it back to Rishita after he returns!
***
Dhara felt heartbroken hearing the harsh words coming from Rishita. She can't believe the girl she gave so much love, thought to be her younger sister along with Raavi, is behaving this bad today. She knew Rishita isnāt habituated living in joint family, She came from a very different atmosphere so It'll take time for her to adjust.Thats why She & Gaumbi never said anything to her as they thought She'll adjust with time.
But No! Instead of enhancing, her behaviour is degrading day by day! Thank God Gaumbi isnāt at home today, otherwise how hurt He would have been seeing Rishita taunting her like this? Dhara being the sweetest soul caring about Gaumbi, ignoring how hurt she herself is!
"Rishita!" Dev tried to speak but only to get cut off by her! As always He failed to stop his wife, feeling ashamed of her behaviour yet not having enough courage to protest!
"Mujhe kyu rok rahe ho Dev? Maine galat kuch thodi bola hai.Ye hamesha humpe apna hukum chalati hai.Hum inke naukar nahi hai jo inki har baat maane!" She hissed.
"Aap humari bhabhi se aise baat nahi kar sakti" Krish shouted unable to control his anger now.
Dhara signaled him to stop by nodding her head but He said, "Mat roko mujhe, bhabhi.Jisko kehna chahiye tha wo toh kuch kehne se rahe. Lekin Main aapke baremei kuch galat sunke chup nahi reh sakta" Krish taunted looking at Dev with sheer disappointment in his eyes while Dhara looked at Krish with tears sparkling in her eyes, Her little baccha has grown up so much!
"Pehli baar tune sahi jagah pe bola hai, Krish" Raavi said coming forward while Krish rolled his eyes at her. "Main hamesha sahi jagah pe hi bolta hu, bhabhi" He complained like kid which made Dhara & Raavi smile at him!
"Arey wah! Yaha toh inka alag hi natak shuru hogaya!" Rishita taunted with a boring look, spoiling their moment which made Raavi angry.
"Natak lag raha tumhe ye sab, Rishita? Arey natak toh tum kar rahi ho! Tumhe sharam nahi aati Dhara di se aise baat karte huye?" Raavi asked glaring at her.
"Ab Tum bhi mujhe sunaogi, Raavi? Tumhari zindagi bhi toh inhone hi barbaad ki hai uss Shiva se shadi karwaake" Rishita argued.
"Dhara di ne humare saath jo bhi kiya hai, wo unki aur humari bich ki baat hai. Tum inn sab mei mat pado, Rishita" Raavi warned her getting angry.
"Kyu na padu? Dhara bhabhi sab ke mamle mei taang adati hai toh wo mahaan aur main karu toh galat? Aisa kyu?" Rishita almost barked making Raavi the most angry as possible.
"Kyuki tum mei aur Dhara di mei bohot fark hai. Dhara di ne iss parivaar ke liye, Dev-Shiva-Krish ke liye jo kiya hai na wo tum/main ya koi aur kabhi nahi kar sakta tha! Isliye unke samne zuban sambhalke baat karna" Raavi said while Dhara smiled with tears in her eyes, her old Raavi is back again!
"Aur rahi baat Meri Shiva se shadi karneki toh let me tell you ki Main Shiva ke saath khush hu" Raavi declared when everyone widened their eyes! Dhara with happiness, Krish with surprise & Dev-Rishita with shock!
Little did They know someone else was listening this too, with a plenty of wonder in his eyes & a tinge of Happiness in His heart!
***
Shiva was about to enter the house when He heard Raavi saying that! His feet automatically stopped hearing her words. What did she just say? She is happy with him? Really? He was lost in his thoughts when he heard her saying,
"Infact Main khush hu ki meri shadi Dev se nahi hui! Kyuki Shiva jaisa bhi hai wo tumhare Dev se toh bohot accha hai. Wo uske tarah murti banke khada nahi rehta. Jaha stand lena chahiye waha Wo bolta hai. Uske baremei koi kuch bhi kahe wo kuch nahi kehta lekin uske family ke baremei koi ek word bhi bole toh Shiva bardash nahi karta, dhaal banke khada ho jaata hai apne family ke saamne. Isliye tum uske baremei kuch na hi bolo toh accha hoga"
Raavi said pointing at her, making Rishita shocked, Dev ashamed and Dhara-Krish extremely happy!
Shiva felt his heart flattering with each word of hers, His chipkali defending him in his absence? He could feel unknown happiness running through his vains! If he didnāt arrive at this moment, perhaps He would have missed this scene! But His eyes flared up when He saw Rishita coming towards Raavi in anger, understanding her motive, Shiva quickly went inside!!
Raavi couldnāt come up with an action seeing Rishita suddenly coming towards her but Before her hands could reach her, Raavi felt someone holding Rishita's hands tightly to prevent it from touching her face & a loud voice, "Himmat kaise huyi teri Raavi pe haath uthane ki?"
Raavi looked sideways to see none other than Shiva standing beside her, with a fierce expression on his face!
Raavi gulped looking at the angry Shiva, thinking Rishita is gone now. Moving eyes at Rishita, Raavi saw the similar expression on her face too as hers. She was gulping too, very much scared of Shiva. Infact She looked like some rat getting caught in the lion's cave! Now Raavi felt like laughing at Rishita's condition! As Her Shiva has come, the game is on now!
Seeing her doom in his eyes, Rishita quickly ran away freeing her hand from Shiva & hid behind Dev asking him to protect her from this dangerous man ahead! Staying mum for the whole time, Dev tried to speak to Shiva only to hear him roar,
"Mujhe kuch kehne se pehle tu apni biwi ko sambhal. Aur Usko kehna apne hadh mei rahe. Himmat kaisi hui iski meri biwi pe haath uthane ki?"
Raavi stared at the protective Shiva infront of her. The man though never says yet never fails to protect her from everything!
"Aur ek baat- Mujhse toh kuch kehna hi mat. Kyuki Tu Apni biwi se toh kuch keh nahi saka. Jab zarurat hoti hai tab teri zubaan chalti nahi. Ab bada aya biwi ki wakeel banne" Shiva taunted him with a disgusting look!
"Dekh Shiva, Rishita ne janbujke nahi kiya, shayad galti se haath uthane wali thi Raavi pe" Dev tried to justify but failed miserably as Shiva said, "Accha? Kal ko teri biwi gusse mei kuch bhi ulta-seedha kar degi phir tu yahi bolega?"
"Kahi kisika khoon kar de toh" Krish added with a terrifying expression which made Rishita roll her eyes at him.
"Rehne de, Krish. Kisko samjha rahe hum. Jo apne akal ko apni biwi ke pallu mei bandhke ghumta hai usko kya samjhana?" Shiva said in an extremely irritating voice only to add,
"Ek kaam karta hu, Main Janardhan ko hi phone karta hu. Ameer baap ki beti yaha adjust nai kar payi toh apne maike hi chali jaye. Aur sath mei tu bhi chala ja uska pallu pakadke"
"Shivaa" Dev shouted, holding Shiva's collar while Shiva did the same! Meanwhile Dhara tried to stop the brothers, seeing things getting out of hand but it seemed like They're in no mood to let each other go!
"Gaumbiii" Krish shouted, when two brothers looked at him with anger & said, "Tu Gaumbi ka naam leke hume behla nahi sakta, Krish. Gaumbi yaha nahi hai" Dev said. "Wo store ki kaam se bahar gaye hai, aane mei time lagega" Shiva added.
"Accha? Toh Mere piche ghar pe ye sab karte ho tum dono?" Gaumbi held ears of his two brothers tightly from both hands! "Aah! Gaumbi chodiye" saying they both struggled to get out of his hold!
"Chodunga, isse pehle tum dono ek dusre ko chodo" Gaumbi said. As they both left each other's collar, Gaumbi's grip on their ears loosened too!
"Krish mujhe sab bata ki yaha kya ho raha hai" Gaumbi looked at krish with a serious look & sighing, Krish started to explain him everything!
After listening the whole incident, Gaumbi sighed. He felt pity for Rishita today, rather than feeling sad for still not understanding the importance of having own family! God knows how much time It'll ever take for her to accept everything just the way Raavi did? He let out a sigh before giving final speech to Rishita!
"Dekho Rishita, hum jaante hai tumhe iss family mei adjust karne mei thodi problem hoti hogi kyuki tumhe aadat nahi hai iss environment ki. Lekin humne tumhe uske liye time diya tha. Time ke saath sab log khudko sambhal lete hai, Raavi ko hi dekh lo. Shadi ke time uski bhi toh marzi nahi thi lekin ab usne apna liya na sab kuch? Reh rahi hai na khushi khushi humare saath?Toh phir tum kyu nahi reh sakti?"
Gaumbi said calmly at Rishita while passing his smile to Raavi, being proud of her for accepting everything with time!
"Aur ek baat yaad rakhna, Rishita. Parivaar sabke paas nahi hota. Bohot log taraste hai ek family ke liye. Tumhe bhagwan ne diya hai toh khushi se raho sabke saath. Aur ye toh tumhe pata hi hoga ki Taali ek haath se nahi bajti. So, Hum tumhe comfortable karneki kitni bhi koshish kare lekin agar tumhare taraf se effort nahi hai toh hum kuch nahi kar sakte" Gaumbi said to Rishita in a cold tone, making Dev lower his head in shame! Today he's feeling the most embarrassed man only because of his wife!
Rishita stood there with blank face. She's not sure how to react. Maybe she was ashamed or maybe not? It wasn't clear from her expressions. As she tried to go from there when she heard Shiva saying, "Ae amir baap ki beti.... I mean mere bhai ki biwi" (Shiva changed his tone as he saw Dhara glaring at him)
"Aise kaha ja rahi ho baat adhuri chodke?" Shiva glared at her.
"M-Matlab?" Rishita stammered.
"Matlab ye ki Jaane se pehle Raavi aur Dhara bhabhi ko Sorry bolke jao" Shiva said in a sharp yet cold tone.
"Main kyu sorry kahu? Mujhe nahi bolna kisiko Sorry" Rishita refused looking away, her boasting self wont let her apologise.
"Dev apni biwi ko bol bhabhi aur meri biwi se maafi maange warna....."
"S-Sorry" Before anyone could say anything Rishita almost flew from there!
"Dar gayi bichari" Krish laughed at watching her going while Dhara glared at her- "Krish!!"
"Rishita.." saying so, Dev went behind her.
"Lo, Bhaag gaya joru ka gulaam" Krish taunted his brother who almost ran to hide his face out of shame. "Krish, bada bhai hai tera wo" Gaumbi glared at him.
"Haan, Ab sab mujhe hi bolo. Chhota hona hi galat hai. Sab mujhe hi daant te hai" Krish huffed making everyone smile!
***
"Ae Chipkali, Aise daant kya phaad rahi hai? Mujhe bhuk lagi hai. Kuch khane ko de" Shiva glared at Raavi watching her smiling.
"Tu bolega tab mujhe pata chalega na ki tujhe khana chahiye! Mujhe kya sapna ayega ki tujhe bhuk lagi hai abhi?" Raavi rolled her eyes at him!
"Ae gadheri, dukaan se kaam karke aya hua aadmi bhuka hi hota hai. Lekin tujhmei itni bhi akal nahi hai. Waise Akal hone ke liye dimag hona chahiye jo tujhme hai hi nahi" Shiva smirked teasing his chipkali.
"Shivaaaaa" Raavi shouted with irritation only to hear Dhara & Gaumbi saying,
"Hey Somnath, Inn dono ka kya hoga?!!"
"Inka alag kissa chal raha hai, bhabhi. Dusro se ye dono ek dusre ke liye ladenge, Lekin aapas mei inki ladai kabhi khatam nahi hogi" Krish said making ShiVi blush, reminding how they both defended & fought for each other just a few Moment ago!
Then their eyes met, things that words couldnāt speak, eyes spoke with ease! No matter how much they Fight with each-other but With others, They will definitely Fight for each other..Always! Their heart agreed.
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That's for today!š
Don't forget to tell me how It wasš³
Thank youā¤ļø
I like it when Rishita gets bajaoed in an OS ( for now at least)
Krish and his comments are fab :)
Drabble or OS we love it :)
Nice os Asfiya!
ShiVi openly defending each other and then fighting to death which each other is common for them 𤣠I think we'll see something like this in the show soon!
Dev and rishita's bashing by shiva and Raavi is always enjoyable š¤£
PS: the longer the length is, the better for us š
Loved itā¤ļø
Last scene was perfectšš¼
Raavi blasting Dev is probably my favourite thing! Shiva and Raavi are goals here ā¤ļø
Krish š¤£
This was amazing! š
I loved how you wrote keeping the shivi flavour enactš
From fighting for themselves to fight with each otherš¤£š¤£
Krish was fab as usualšš¼
Keep writing, We dont mind osš
It was tooo good. Protective ShiVi are always cute to read. šæ