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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: cutical

Part 55

Feeling geet pain 😭 its really final nail in cofin to lost everything in one sec maan hurt her so much 😡

Wow what a mind blowing man this maan is he is worried about chahat pain n heartbroke but not about geet whom he broken beyond repair n forced

Her to sign the papers for once he not thi.ks about geet sacrfice n thinking that he done a sin to come near n cheating chahat when realty his that he played with geet trust blind man😡

Maan parents right abhi cares n loves geet

Maan should go through same pain n heartbteak from which geet gone then realize what extent he had shattered geet


Maan thinks geet pain too,but he dont want to commit same mistake again and again

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: cutical

Part 54

Geet have slight hope that maan will come back bit she is now shattered after losing her memory she is still thinking about that selfish man happiness if it neans to hurt her😭


Hmm

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 55

Phenomenal update, well written

feeling for Geet....

she cannot see Maan get married

of cos his family sees Geet as his bride

well Maan did not sign the divorce papers

as expected Mr Khanna wants this to be done

not surprised that Maan is unable to sign

at least he thinks about Geet and how he hurt her

he decided to sign so that he will not break Chahat's heart

but neither him nor Chahat will be happy

Maan looks for Geet.

liked that the rain started....

its indeed a sign.....

Edited by khwaishfan - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Still Dadi trying for Maan and Geet to be together but Maan father want them separate. Let's see who win?

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Posted: 4 years ago

55

very painful update

maan not able to sign the divorce paper but try to do but rain wash way everything on paper

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update

Waiting for next update......

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Posted: 4 years ago

Very emotional update dear

Feeling very bad for geet

Maan is totally confused sole first he rejected geet and now he want to geet is in front of him

Watting for next update

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Posted: 4 years ago

This is destiny. No one can break maan geet apart not even them. That’s why he forgot yo sign and now rain smudges the signature. Not meant for chahat and maan.

Probably chahat realized now when she sees maan caressing geet name in the papers and how he keeps looking at as bad gkd geet


sad for everyone including chahat

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Posted: 4 years ago



Part 56

maine bhut socha asa mujhme kya kami thi

where did I lack

what was my mistake

that you left me and made someone else your life partner

maybe neither of us were at fault

after all, love cannot go wrong

love doesn’t give a choice to anybody

even If I want, I can’t deny that I love you

I love you maan

And you love chahat

.

Rain start drenching her, she loved rain but today she feeling sky also crying with her…

Is dard-e-dilki sifarish
Ab kar de koi yahaan
Ki mill jaaye isey woh baarish
Jo bhigaa de poori tarah

***********

He realized today, two women loves him so much first geet and second one Chahat.. already he breaks geet heart and no whe doesn’t want to give same pain to chahat…

Once chahat tell him

Maan never leave me

Maan : why you talking like that

Why I leave you

Chahat : pata nhi maan

Bs darr lagta hai

.

Mom ke jaane ke baad

Dad ne sb smbhala

Aur ab tum aayo ho meri zindagi me

Mein tumhe khona nhi chahati

.

Mein tumhare bina jee nhi paayungi Maan

Maan : pagal ho kya tum

Chahat : ha hu

Tum dur jaate ho na

Toh mujhe acha nhi lagta hai

Maan : mein bs Dehradun kuch dino keliye jaa rha hu

Humari shaadi ki baat bhi toh krni haina

Chahat : hmm

Jaldi aana

Maan : sure

*********

He signed the paper on first page,going turn another but before this rain starting… and ink start spelling out…

His name starts removing… Mr. Khanna take paper from his hand and said come with me now… he takes him to dinning area where sitting arrangement is covered with tent…

He wipes the paper with handkerchief and said now sign again… he held pain but his hand shivering to write again, before this he writes chahat place hand on him…

Chahat : ruko Maan

Maan look her with confused face…

Mr. Khanna : kya huya beta

Chahat : Papa ye shaadi nhi ho sakti hai

Khanna : par kyun

Chahat : maan

Aur geet ke bich mein kissi aur ki koi jagah nhi hai

Khanna : but you both love each other

Chahat : yes we love each other

He loves me like I lovehim

But he loves geet more than me

Maan : chahat

Tum

Chahat : maan maine tum dono ko dekha hai

Observe kiya hai

Mujhe laga tha

Phle dono ke liye forced marriage hai

When I get to know geet loves you

I said to her don’t plan our wedding

But she wants to do for you

For your happiness

With time I realized she want your company

Wo tumhare aas pass rehna chahti thi

Wo tumhe ehsaas dilana chahati thi

She loves you

Jis tarah wo tumhe pyaar krti hai

Aur koi tumhe pyaar nhi kr sakta hai

.

MEIN BHi NHI maan

I lose you

Maan : no chahat

Listen

I

Chahat : can you deny you not love her

.

Maan :

Chahat : bolo na

Maan : I don’t want to lie

I love her

I realized so late

And yes, I love her more than you

I am just idiot

I unable to understand own self

In all this I don’t want to hurt you

Chahat : am hurt Maan

Mein kyun tumhe Geet ki tarah pyaar nhi kr paayi

Kyun uska pyaar jeet gya

Aur mera haar gya

Maan : tum haari nhi ho chahat

Your love is pure

Chahat : Maan

In next birth I want to take birth as geet

Taki maan mujhe mile

She cried to hug him tightly…

Maan hugged her back….

Mr. Khanna is angry on Maan but he knows her daughter make her right choice too... he feeling helpless,Ram placed on Mr. Khanna shoulder …

Ram : sorry for all this

Mr. : galati sayad kissi ki nhi hai

We can’t change destiny….

Chahat break the hug and said jaayo maan

Geet ke pass jaayo

Usne bhut intzaar kiya hai

Khdo jaake usse apne dil ki baat

.

Maan : hmm

Chahat : why you crying

Tumhe toh khush hona chaiye

.

Dekho mein apna irada badlu

Usse phle chale jaayo

He caressed her cheek before going … and look last time towards family, all says best of luck to him…

Khanna take chahat in own arms…

Chahat : sorry dad

Khanna : no

You take right decision

Am proud of you

***********

precap : 1) Maan : geet ruko

.

Geet stop

.

You can’t do this with me

.

Geet : maan tum ek bhi kadam aange bde

Toh mein kud jaayungi

.

Maan : ok

Meri baat suno

2) ram : geet beta in papers pe sign krdo

Daadi : ram ye kis cheez ke paper hai

Ram : maa bs property ke hai

Abhi ne beje hai

Geet jaldi kro

Lawyer wait kr rhe hai

Geet : ji

Edited by priya_21 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

next story am going update SAUDA


but need time for this too

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