FF: PALLAVI by Jalebi Jane SEE NOTE PAGE 117 - Page 41

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Posted: 4 years ago

Damn girl what an update 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

Aayi knows !!! Now only Rambo Baba needs reality check 😂

Raghav thinking Pallu dressed up for him 😏

Can't wait for the next update ❤❤❤

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Posted: 4 years ago

I love love love love this update!! 👏

Aayi finally revealed about Mandar and his past and opened the cage for Pallavi to be free!

Somewhere deep down I'd always wished for Mandar to be living a dual life, the D-fam seems to be hella toxic; glad that happened and she aint married to him, however why keep her in the house then? Why not let her go back to Kolhapur? 😲

Pallavi feeling nervous seeing RR and expecting that he'd think she dressed up for him..haha cute! 😆

RR being the sarcastic devil we know he is, throughly enjoyed that!😈

Excited for the next update, Sister! 👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago

Your story is greatly indulging sis 👍

I just can't wait to read more...

By the way do you have wattpad acc if pls provide me with I'd I would love to see your other works as well

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Posted: 4 years ago

Such an interesting story.. love it... please update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Isamreen

Your story is greatly indulging sis 👍

I just can't wait to read more...

By the way do you have wattpad acc if pls provide me with I'd I would love to see your other works as well

Thank you for your interest, Sister. Pleased that you are enjoying the tale.

No. I don't post on Wattpad. DM if you would like to read my other work.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: nautankitadka

I love love love love this update!! 👏

Aayi finally revealed about Mandar and his past and opened the cage for Pallavi to be free!

Somewhere deep down I'd always wished for Mandar to be living a dual life, the D-fam seems to be hella toxic; glad that happened and she aint married to him, however why keep her in the house then? Why not let her go back to Kolhapur? 😲

Pallavi feeling nervous seeing RR and expecting that he'd think she dressed up for him..haha cute! 😆

RR being the sarcastic devil we know he is, throughly enjoyed that!😈

Excited for the next update, Sister! 👍🏼

So pleased you enjoyed the episode, Sister. I loved writing the scene in which Raghav is waiting at DSE for Pallavi and she arrives all excited about her newfound freedom. Of course, he believes it is his influence. hehe

Re: Kolhapur: My tale differs from MHRW in the sense that Pallavi went to college in Kolhapur but has no siblings. She was orphaned at a very young age. As such, she has no home to return to.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: virmantaarey

Damn girl what an update 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

Aayi knows !!! Now only Rambo Baba needs reality check 😂

Raghav thinking Pallu dressed up for him 😏

Can't wait for the next update ❤❤❤

🔥🔥🔥

Thank you, Sister. Pleased you enjoyed the episode.

Rambo Baba will be enlightened, I promise---but not for some time yet. hehe

He's that typical man-of-the-house---orders everyone around but the women behind him are doing all the heavy lifting. In every tale I've written, I've had one character I love to hate---but Baba makes me see red like no other.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Woah! Okay, reeling back😲.

So Vijay & Sharda or rather Sharda knew their son was always a Black Sheep & that's why had immediately turned Pallavi into a daughter rather than their son's widow. Pallavi isn't married to Mandar! Yay, Yay!! I have mixed thoughts about Aayi keeping this from Pallavi for so long. She should have told her sooner.


But I love how she's supportive of Pallavi & helps her to get dressed for basically a new start of her life⭐️.


I love love Raghav & Pallavi's 'tashan' filled conversations always. I sincerely hope that in a future episode, all I get to read is them having a conversation. It would be so humorous 😆 .


If u remember, I had imagined a similar scenario of Pallavi & Krishna talking'bt Raghav in the shop in the previous episode with him being suddenly present & you made it happen here, so ❤️ you for that.

You're welcome, Sister. I'm pleased you enjoyed the scene.

I'm as happy as you to know that Pallavi was never really married to Mandhar. Her new freedom is exciting for me to write about.

There will be more detail in coming episodes which will reveal precisely who know what and when about Mandhar's duplicity. It was what Pallavi alluded to when she said to Krishna "I have so much to tell you---". Keep reading!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Sisters,

There will be two episodes this Thursday, so keep an eye out for Episode 20 and 21 later today.

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Posted: 4 years ago

EPISODE 20: PRECAP*

“Tell me what you brought me here for,” she demanded.

Raghav glanced at his wrist-watch. “In two minutes. Once he brings the coffee. I don’t wish to be interrupted.”

Almost at the heel of his words, they were interrupted.

Not by the arrival of cappuccinos but the arrival of Sulochana.

“Pallavi?” Sulochana approached, with Rahul’s mother, Asha Aunty, in tow.


*I've decided to start posting episode precaps to generate some excitement. hehe

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