Congratulations to all Winners
Of Part 71
That is just Amazing !!!!
and Congratulations to Early Bird Award Winners
Well Done Everybody !!!
Congratulations to all Winners
Of Part 71
That is just Amazing !!!!
and Congratulations to Early Bird Award Winners
Well Done Everybody !!!
Part 71
Rocking and Amazing
Oh hell no !!! What is actually wrong with both Maan and Geet ?
they want to be with each other yet their building this uncomfortable
line between them
and of course Maan fears rejection so he has made himself comfortable with this fact
and now he does not even ask Geet questions neither does he portray to his cousins
that he is a real boyfriend
both have this heavy cloud hanging on their heads that when the vacation is over
they too should be apart or should even talk to each other
yet all Maan's gestures say that he wants a relationship with Geet
Geet now anxious that her wishes will not be fulfilled so she ask Maan why he did
not ask her to dance as if she was saying that he dislikes been with her in front of his family
but then Maan says he cannot dance well
and oh I just loved it when Geet dances all her crazy style and making Maan dance as well
and of course the cousins ae curious to know why the bed broke as they think
Maan and Geet were intimate and as Geet giggles bring back the memory of their wild dancing
the cousins are convinced
the vacation is over and both Maan and Geet have become silent lambs
but its great to know that she is in love with Maan and her friends let her know
there have been love from both sides its only the two puff heads Maan and Geet
does not understand this
hopefully now Geet will make the first move
waiting to see what happens next
72–Very interesting. Realization happens to geet eh. Nice and how it happens right.
and she was in shock when she told her friends in India and that they were not surprised or shocked. That’s when she thinks. Were they that obvious and only she did not know. Yes yes — not only her friends but the whole world who reads this knows it!!! Da!!
they both are still not speaking their minds. He because of the fear of rejection again and she probably because it’s all new and a feeling of difference in status hmm
but I cracked up when I read about the bed breaking and people assuming things. They have no idea how silly and ridiculous these two are like we do lol
Indeed 😋 tubelight Geet. It was obvious to everyone else other than you 2.
Loved the palang tod dance 😋🤭
Ab tho batti jali Geet ki. Let's see what will she do 🤔
Congrats to all the winners
Part 72
Spectacular update... terrifically written
liked that Geet is direct with Maan and questions him
Liked Geet's dance and efforts
at least he joined her
ha ha they broke the bed
of cos his cousins assume something else lol
sad that she left
her thoughts are reasonable
well no one made a move
not surprised that she thinks about Maan
finally she realises she loves Maan
as expected all her friends knew this
but better late than ever
hope she confesses asap
Awesome update dear
Did she really say she is in Love? This is like to good to be true. Are these the same friends that were doubting Maan early.... well looks like your friend is in love with a crazy person and you encouraging it the hypocrisy. Anyways the good news is she finally defined her feeling bad news she still hasnt told the most important person who needs to know or she just going to wait until he says it.
Her Friends are always bang on,She thought they will be shocked and surprised when they knew,but here inturn she gets shocked seeing their response and it's leads to her thinking...
Now what will be next, looking forward to further 😍
Great part
Finally Geet realizes her feeling
Cant wait for her conversation with maan now
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
Star Commentor Award (Part 72)
Winners: UmaDevi97, Creampuff,Taahir004,
Runner Ups: waterlotus.19,Alamelu, Kkiran
Special Mention: Khwaishfan
EarlyBird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): UmaDevi97,Creampuff, golden_aura
Congratulations to all the winners
Part 73
Apni friends ke aise casual reaction se toh ulta Geet koshock lagaa ki-
Was it so obvious between me & him?
Could everybody see it?
Everybody knew and could see love between then, excepther?
Was it so evident?
Was she the one who missed that she seriously loved him,and he did too?
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Meanwhile, Mona keeps pushing her to come to the wedding
Mona ke push karne pe Geet finally says yes
Mona is all excited ki -
Mona-You come to my place. We will get ready and have so much fun!
Ab wedding pe Maan ki mom bhi aayi hai
Mom becomes pale after seeing Geet there
Geet was looking beautiful in the lehenga
Since she wasn’t carrying those clothes either, she had to borrowf rom Mona
Geet locates Maan in the crowd with his cousins
Since wo relatives ke saath busy lag raha tha toh Geet ne jaake disturb nahi kiya
Her face automatically had an appreciative smile seeing him in Indian wear
He was looking dashing
She was walking along the venue, appreciating the grand decorations
Maan’s mom appears out of nowhere
Mom- What are you doing here?
Her tone was clearly condescending
G- Your son invited me
Geet replies
Mom- You! My son recently got clean of his habit...and you!I know what you are doing. I know gold-diggers like you. You are trying to secure your future by ruining my son's future
Geet has had enough
G- And how am I doing it?
She asks crossing her arms
Mom-You know how
Mom says looking accusingly at Geet
Geet rolls her eyes
G- You think I am a drug peddler or something? Seriously? Ia m a goddamn Doctor. I worked my ass off for pre-med, then med, then internship and still now
Mom- You have easy access to drugs
G-What????? Doctors have easy access to drugs?? Which drugs?How would a medical doctor access narcotic; or are you suggesting your son is addicted to anesthesia?
Geet laughs at her own joke angering the Mom more
G-And seriously, your son is a full-grown man who takes his decisions on his own. I guess you don't realize that but everyone else does.Maybe that's the reason he turned to narcotics. You are so close to him, why don’t you ask him upfront?
Geet walks away from his mom
After this verbal spat with Maan’s mom, she is mentally emotionally drained
She goes straight to wear Maan was
‘Can I borrow him for few moments, please?’
She asks the people Maan was busy with
She pulls him into a corner
Maan is visibly surprised with Geet’s changed demeanor
M- Hey Red Riding Hood!
He comments at his red lehenga and also trying to gauge her mood
G- Hey Wolf!
She replies half pouty half amuses at their kiddish banter
She buries her face into his chest
The moments of solace
Maan is taken aback
M- What happened, Geet?
G- Nothing. Just let me be like this
He nods, kissing her forehead gently
M- are you feeling, okay? Do you wanna take rest?
G- I wanna go home
He nods
M- Let me drop you to my apartment, you hostel is quite far,I can't leave the venue for that long
G- You want me stay with you tonight?
M- When do I not?
He says with a sly grin
She playfully hits his hand
G- Pervert!
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