Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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Posted: 3 years ago

  Congratulations to all Winners


 Of Part 71 


That is just Amazing !!!!  


 and Congratulations to Early Bird Award Winners 


Well Done Everybody !!!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 71 


Rocking and Amazing 


Oh hell no !!! What is actually wrong with both Maan and Geet ? 

they want to be with each other yet their building this uncomfortable 

line between them 

and of course Maan fears rejection so he has made himself comfortable with this fact

and now he does not even ask Geet questions neither does he portray to his cousins 

that he is a real boyfriend 

both have this heavy cloud hanging on their heads that when the vacation is over  

they too should be apart or should even talk to each other 

yet all Maan's gestures say that he wants a relationship with Geet


Geet now anxious that her wishes will not be fulfilled so she ask Maan why he did 

not ask her to dance as if she was saying that he dislikes been with her in front of his family

but then Maan says he cannot dance well

and oh I just loved it when Geet dances all her crazy style and making Maan dance as well

and of course the cousins ae curious to know why the bed broke as they think 

Maan and Geet were intimate and as Geet giggles bring back the memory of their wild dancing

the cousins are convinced 


the vacation is over and both Maan and Geet have become silent lambs 

but its great to know that she is in love with Maan and her friends let her know 

there have been love from both sides its only the two puff heads Maan and Geet

does not understand this 


hopefully now Geet will make the first move 

waiting to see what happens next 

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Posted: 3 years ago

72–Very interesting.  Realization happens to geet eh. Nice and how it happens right. 


and she was in shock when she told her friends in India and that they were not surprised or shocked. That’s when she thinks.  Were they that obvious and only she did not know.   Yes yes — not only her friends but the whole world who reads this knows it!!! Da!!

they both are still not speaking their minds. He because of the fear of rejection again and she probably because it’s all new and a feeling of difference in status hmm


but I cracked up when I read about the bed breaking and people assuming things. They have no idea how silly and ridiculous these two are like we do lol


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Posted: 3 years ago

Indeed 😋 tubelight Geet. It was obvious to everyone else other than you 2. 

Loved the palang tod dance 😋🤭

Ab tho batti jali Geet ki. Let's see what will she do 🤔

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Posted: 3 years ago

Congrats to all the winners


Part 72

Spectacular update... terrifically written

liked that Geet is direct with Maan and questions him

Liked Geet's dance and efforts

at least he joined her

ha ha they broke the bed

of cos his cousins assume something else lol

sad that she left

her thoughts are reasonable

well no one made a move

not surprised that she thinks about Maan

finally she realises she loves Maan

as expected all her friends knew this

but better late than ever

hope she confesses asap

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Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome update dear 

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Did she really say she is in Love? This is like to good to be true. Are these the same friends that were doubting Maan early.... well looks like your friend is in love with a crazy person and you encouraging it the hypocrisy. Anyways the good news is she finally defined her feeling bad news she still hasnt told the most important person who needs to know or she just going to wait until he says it. 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Her Friends are always bang on,She thought they will be shocked and surprised when they knew,but here inturn she gets shocked seeing their response and it's leads to her thinking...

Now what will be next, looking forward to further 😍

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Posted: 3 years ago

Great part 

Finally Geet realizes her feeling 

Cant wait for her conversation with maan now 

Cont soon 

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 3 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 72)

 

 

Winners: UmaDevi97, Creampuff,Taahir004,

Runner Ups: waterlotus.19,Alamelu, Kkiran

Special Mention: Khwaishfan

 

EarlyBird Award (For readers having first 3 comments):  UmaDevi97,Creampuff, golden_aura

 

 

Congratulations to all the winners



Part 73

 

Apni friends ke aise casual reaction se toh ulta Geet koshock lagaa ki-

 

Was it so obvious between me & him?

 

Could everybody see it?

 

Everybody knew and could see love between then, excepther?

 

Was it so evident?

 

Was she the one who missed that she seriously loved him,and he did too?

 

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Meanwhile, Mona keeps pushing her to come to the wedding

 

Mona ke push karne pe Geet finally says yes

 

Mona is all excited ki -

 

Mona-You come to my place. We will get ready and have so much fun!

 

Ab wedding pe Maan ki mom bhi aayi hai

 

Mom becomes pale after seeing Geet there

 

Geet was looking beautiful in the lehenga

 

Since she wasn’t carrying those clothes either, she had to borrowf rom Mona

 

Geet locates Maan in the crowd with his cousins

 

Since wo relatives ke saath busy lag raha tha toh Geet ne jaake disturb nahi kiya

 

Her face automatically had an appreciative smile seeing him in Indian wear

 

He was looking dashing

 

She was walking along the venue, appreciating the grand decorations

 

Maan’s mom appears out of nowhere

 

Mom- What are you doing here?

 

Her tone was clearly condescending

 

G- Your son invited me

 

Geet replies

 

Mom- You! My son recently got clean of his habit...and you!I know what you are doing. I know gold-diggers like you. You are trying to secure your future by ruining my son's future

 

Geet has had enough

 

G- And how am I doing it?

 

She asks crossing her arms

 

Mom-You know how

 

Mom says looking accusingly at Geet

 

Geet rolls her eyes

 

G- You think I am a drug peddler or something? Seriously? Ia m a goddamn Doctor. I worked my ass off for pre-med, then med, then internship and still now

 

Mom- You have easy access to drugs

 

G-What????? Doctors have easy access to drugs?? Which drugs?How would a medical doctor access narcotic; or are you suggesting your son is addicted to anesthesia?

 

Geet laughs at her own joke angering the Mom more

 

G-And seriously, your son is a full-grown man who takes his decisions on his own. I guess you don't realize that but everyone else does.Maybe that's the reason he turned to narcotics. You are so close to him, why don’t you ask him upfront?

 

Geet walks away from his mom

 

After this verbal spat with Maan’s mom, she is mentally emotionally drained

 

She goes straight to wear Maan was

 

‘Can I borrow him for few moments, please?’

 

She asks the people Maan was busy with

 

She pulls him into a corner

 

Maan is visibly surprised with Geet’s changed demeanor

 

M- Hey Red Riding Hood!

 

He comments at his red lehenga and also trying to gauge her mood

 

G- Hey Wolf!

 

She replies half pouty half amuses at their kiddish banter

 

She buries her face into his chest

 

The moments of solace

 

Maan is taken aback

 

M- What happened, Geet?

 

G- Nothing. Just let me be like this

 

He nods, kissing her forehead gently

 

M- are you feeling, okay? Do you wanna take rest?

 

G- I wanna go home

 

He nods

 

M- Let me drop you to my apartment, you hostel is quite far,I can't leave the venue for that long

 

G- You want me stay with you tonight?

 

M- When do I not?

 

He says with a sly grin

 

She playfully hits his hand

 

G- Pervert!

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago