FF: PALLAVI by Jalebi Jane SEE NOTE PAGE 117 - Page 37

Originally posted by: nautankitadka

Omg!! So Aayi knows it was Pallavi in the video! But it is great she spoke to her alone and not in front of others. Though I'd have expected her mind will go to the other end of them being lovers, because somewhere she does know Pallavi deserves more and they've kept her in a cage. Pallavi is feeling a pull to Raghav ~ maybe because he is a breath of fresh air in the room she is otherwise trapped in day-in day-out. She needs some change in her life and she knows there is something more to the deal. As always, loved the bonding between Krishna and Pallavi. Awaiting their next meet now!

What you say above: "Though I'd have expected her mind will go to the other end of them being lovers, because somewhere she does know Pallavi deserves more and they've kept her in a cage."

Yes!--YES! That is precisely how I read this moment. It is deep guilt. Shh. I mustn't give spoilers to my own work. hehe. But I really appreciated your comment, Thank you, Sister,

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

I don't understand one thing why peeps don't listen to their child and believe in other peeps.

Believe me many of us irrespective of gender have been there maybe more women.

Couple of times I have even refused to answer , few times my bro has defused the situation. Finally bade papa said all kids are adults and never hide where they go and with whom why cross question and annoy.

Slapping adult kids for such things is a no no. Physical violence is something I cannot fathom

I totally agree, Sister---hitting anyone---old, young, man, woman, animal---is wrong-wrong-wrong.

However, in dramatic fiction a thappad can stand for an interruption in a sequence or a pathway. It unleashes something that is superior to what came before it. My brother and bhabhi had recommended to me that I watch the film -Thappad- because of how that slap works as a dramatic device.

Love how you infuse your comments on PALLAVI with your life experiences. Thank you for that perspective.

Originally posted by: ReemShah

This was not expected...I did not anticipate this to happen( Aayi knowing it was Pallu and the slap) and I love the minute details you put in the story about the other characters especially the ones close to Pallavi.

waiting to know what happens next

Thank you, Sister.

I confess, I got a bit excited/relieved that Aayi recognized her. As a writer you want your heroine to have allies---and without truth there are no allies. Looking forward to sharing the next few episodes.

Hey Jane apologies for not being able to comment.

As usual the chapters are very interesting. Raghav's treatment to Anjali is something that I wanted to see onscreen but nevermind I got it here.

Pallavi getting slapped is so very needed. She must not hide the shop and Mandaar truth anymore.❤️

Originally posted by: Mihika

Hey Jane apologies for not being able to comment.

As usual the chapters are very interesting. Raghav's treatment to Anjali is something that I wanted to see onscreen but nevermind I got it here.

Pallavi getting slapped is so very needed. She must not hide the shop and Mandaar truth anymore.❤️

Hey Sister,

I think we are on the same wavelength. I was just reading your incredible analysis of "Is Raghav in love?" I admire your mind. I hope you are in a career path which takes advantage of your precision thinking.

As always, thank you for your comment.

PS My name is Maya. I shouldn't assume that everyone knows who I am. hehe The 'Jane' in JalebiJane is a nod to my writing inspiration, Jane Austen.

Nice update ❤️

Pallavi got slapped poor girl🤔

Let the game begin between her and raghav 😎

Sisters, I just edited EPISODE 18 to add some details as to Pallavi's feelings for Raghav. I realized I wanted her to explain to us why she felt that fear and excitement. Wanting to see him but hoping not to. Thanks for your continued interest in my little tale.

Originally posted by: NESRIA

Nice update ❤️

Pallavi got slapped poor girl🤔

Let the game begin between her and raghav 😎

Thank you, Sister.

Pallavi is so out of her depth with Raghav. hehe

Got delayed by a day🙈!

Ch-17

Of course, peace at Deshmukh Niwas required two things: (1) Always do as Baba says. (2) Always let Kaku win. - Summed up the bane of all folks on the Forum 😒

When you came to the villa that night, I should not have called your fiancé. It was not my place to punish you,” he spoke quietly. - Thank you for writing this scene. I seriously have never approved of Raghav doing what he did in the show.

Farhad went on in this comical vein. - A humorous scene😆

I liked the whole flow of conversation b/w Mrs Tarabai Raje & Raghav. How she actually wants to give him a chance cos she can see he's capable.

Ch-18

The steamer dropped out of Krishna’s hand. “Mr Rao? No! I was speaking of Mr Jagdish—!”. - I don't know why I literally thought that Krishna was actually talking about Raghav but somehow Raghav has just entered the shop & is standing behind Pallavi & that's why Krishna changes the path/culprit of the conversation. To not embarrass Pallavi & herself infront of Raghav.

Then I read ahead & realized Ofcourse we aren't getting another meetup so soon.

How would she explain to Krishna that she had wanted to see Raghav and yet not see him as well. - I like the chain of thoughts that's initiated in Pallavi's mind already 😆.

Wow! Her Aayi here is actually acting like a proper mother & recognises her child when noone else did 😳 ..

I loved that Pallavi is not in denial of her attraction to Raghav..

Wen the family was talking abt the video, i too for a moment believed noone recognized her. But aayi did. But i respect her her for questioning Pallavi in private.

Worried wats gonna happen next