Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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part 65

Lisa is the future wife? Does Maan know this? Probably the mother and Lisa cooked up a scheme.

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part 66

Geet has quietly left. Even Maan is thinking they will just break up after the trip. There is no commitment from either side.

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part 67

Now we are getting somewhere. She has ordered him to not marry Lisa.

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Part 69

 

M-I am fine as long as you are happy

 

He lays down beside her

 

She smiles...keeping her head in his chest

 

G- You never fail to impress me

 

M- I do?

 

He kisses her lightly on her eyes

 

As usual she naps after their intimate session

 

Maan stays awake just looking at her

 

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Geet ki neend khulti hai toh she says that she is hungry

 

They go to the gazebo where the cousins are having a small party

 

Dance-vance ho raha hai

 

G-You get stuff that I dont get. So we can try everything from the buffet...okay?

 

Maan ko bolke Geet plate leke food scouting pe nikal jaati hai

 

Her logic is she wants to try everything but not waste food

 

Geet was plucking food from Maan’s plate plus from her plate

 

G- God! I was so hungry! Why are you not eating? Eat

 

She puts her fork near Maan’s mouth. Feeding him

 

He haves it

 

Party chal rahi thi toh dance kar rahe the log

 

Ab dance chalu hote hi Geet mein Micheal Jackson ki aatma aa jaati hai

 

Toh she was dancing with everybody

 

Khaana bhi khaa liya toh energy bhi hai

 

Maan side mein khada tha near the bar apne kuch cousins ke saath

 

Geet was dancing with his younger cousins…college and schoolwale ladke

 

Lisa aake Maan se bakbak kar rahi thi

 

Thoda slow music baja toh...couples got together

 

Geet was dancing with the pet of one of the cousins. A white furry dog

 

Dog ko lap mein leke

 

Geet red ho gai thi nach nachke

 

Maan gets her some water

 

They move to stand a little away from the dance crowd; at a distance where they are still part of the party but don't have to scream to be heard

 

Maan observes Geet when she is having water and cooling down

 

Geet is drinking water and telling Maan how one should not drink iced water when they have worked out blah blah…health facts trivia

 

M- Hey Geet. Tell me. When I wasn't around …in those months…was it me you missed or did you just missed ordering me around?

 

Geet chokes a bit on water

 

*Cough cough*

 

Maan pats her back soothingly

 

She gives him a sharp look ki chot pahuchane ke baad malham lagane se kuch nahi hoga types

 

G -Who says I missed you at all

 

M- So you didn't miss me one bit? All the angst over me disappearing and not contacting you even once; it was all because you missed lording over someone? Glad I can fulfill the position again

 

Geet looks at Maan trying to figure out if he is being serious or joking

 

Is he teasing her or is he being sarcastic?

 

Did she go overboard with her attitude today?

 

G-Think what you want. If you feel I am bullying you, then we'll deal with it. That's how I am.

 

She looks at Maan’s expression, he doesn’t look amused at all

 

G - I mean…what? Just what are you trying to say huh? I am not…I didn't…you can do what you want….I am not holding you on a leash... what...?

 

She is trying to ease the situation

 

M - Hey I am just making casual conversation

 

He shrugs successfully easing the tension

 

G - Figures…only you can come up with this kind of casualconversation... Since you don't know how to kill time with small talk…why are you trying?

 

M- So that I can have you to myself for some time and avoid getting grilled later for talking to Lisa. Which let me clarify. I wasn't talking to her; she was talking to me and I was ignoring her

 

After being at a loss for few moments Geet snorts

 

G-Huh whatever... You are just bored and jealous that I am enjoying the party

 

Maan pushes away her hair behind her ear and pinches her chin lightly making her look up at him

 

M-Maybe you are right …watching you dance ... Enjoying yourself ... With some other guys... Perhaps I am little jealous

 

He pecks her lips lightly

 

M-and very likely want to keep you All to myself

 

He kisses her again a little longer now.

 

M-how about we enjoy rest of the party in our room?

 

He gives her a good hot kiss

 

Geet is feeling surprised and little overwhelmed and distracted by the kisses

 

Coming back to herself. She pushes Maan away lightly and looks around ki koi dekh to nahi raha 

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
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part 68

Both let out their insecurities openly this time.

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part 69

Why didn't she drag Maan off to the dance floor for the slow numbers? She can dance with the dog, but not him?

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Haan yeh toh small talk ki queen hai. She blabbering about health facts and Maan is trying to make sense of thier togetherness. Good call Maan tell her whne you got to go use the bathroom as well god knows what she interrogate you about. I wonder if intimacy will be the way of expressing thier true feelings.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Wow fantastic update 👍😍

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Chapter 69 

Aww 🥰 maan &  geet are getting all mushy .......   actually kind of sweet with them being all lovey/ dovey ♥️

It seems like geet was enjoying the party more than maan & that is a great idea loading up someone’s else’s plate too so you can try everything 😆

The funniest part was geet was dancing with Michael Jackson’s aatma 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Omg I can picture her trying to moonwalk  & falling down 🤣🤣🤣

Then geet started dancing with a dog 🤣🤣🤣

ROFL ..,,. Too funny di , where do you come up with this stuff 

Liked maan’s little confession at the end where he admitted he was jealous & he only wants her to himself awww so sweet 

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Thank you di 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

hope you are well


Part 69

Stupendous update... well written

glad seeing them get closer

Ha ha Geet is hilarious

she dances with a dog

why couldn't she dance with Maan

at least they are not addressing things

great that Maan wanted to clear that he was not talking to Lisa

wow Maan is jealous

adore his possessiveness

that was a hot kiss

update soon