part 65
Lisa is the future wife? Does Maan know this? Probably the mother and Lisa cooked up a scheme.
part 65
Lisa is the future wife? Does Maan know this? Probably the mother and Lisa cooked up a scheme.
part 66
Geet has quietly left. Even Maan is thinking they will just break up after the trip. There is no commitment from either side.
part 67
Now we are getting somewhere. She has ordered him to not marry Lisa.
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Part 69
M-I am fine as long as you are happy
He lays down beside her
She smiles...keeping her head in his chest
G- You never fail to impress me
M- I do?
He kisses her lightly on her eyes
As usual she naps after their intimate session
Maan stays awake just looking at her
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Geet ki neend khulti hai toh she says that she is hungry
They go to the gazebo where the cousins are having a small party
Dance-vance ho raha hai
G-You get stuff that I dont get. So we can try everything from the buffet...okay?
Maan ko bolke Geet plate leke food scouting pe nikal jaati hai
Her logic is she wants to try everything but not waste food
Geet was plucking food from Maan’s plate plus from her plate
G- God! I was so hungry! Why are you not eating? Eat
She puts her fork near Maan’s mouth. Feeding him
He haves it
Party chal rahi thi toh dance kar rahe the log
Ab dance chalu hote hi Geet mein Micheal Jackson ki aatma aa jaati hai
Toh she was dancing with everybody
Khaana bhi khaa liya toh energy bhi hai
Maan side mein khada tha near the bar apne kuch cousins ke saath
Geet was dancing with his younger cousins…college and schoolwale ladke
Lisa aake Maan se bakbak kar rahi thi
Thoda slow music baja toh...couples got together
Geet was dancing with the pet of one of the cousins. A white furry dog
Dog ko lap mein leke
Geet red ho gai thi nach nachke
Maan gets her some water
They move to stand a little away from the dance crowd; at a distance where they are still part of the party but don't have to scream to be heard
Maan observes Geet when she is having water and cooling down
Geet is drinking water and telling Maan how one should not drink iced water when they have worked out blah blah…health facts trivia
M- Hey Geet. Tell me. When I wasn't around …in those months…was it me you missed or did you just missed ordering me around?
Geet chokes a bit on water
*Cough cough*
Maan pats her back soothingly
She gives him a sharp look ki chot pahuchane ke baad malham lagane se kuch nahi hoga types
G -Who says I missed you at all
M- So you didn't miss me one bit? All the angst over me disappearing and not contacting you even once; it was all because you missed lording over someone? Glad I can fulfill the position again
Geet looks at Maan trying to figure out if he is being serious or joking
Is he teasing her or is he being sarcastic?
Did she go overboard with her attitude today?
G-Think what you want. If you feel I am bullying you, then we'll deal with it. That's how I am.
She looks at Maan’s expression, he doesn’t look amused at all
G - I mean…what? Just what are you trying to say huh? I am not…I didn't…you can do what you want….I am not holding you on a leash... what...?
She is trying to ease the situation
M - Hey I am just making casual conversation
He shrugs successfully easing the tension
G - Figures…only you can come up with this kind of casualconversation... Since you don't know how to kill time with small talk…why are you trying?
M- So that I can have you to myself for some time and avoid getting grilled later for talking to Lisa. Which let me clarify. I wasn't talking to her; she was talking to me and I was ignoring her
After being at a loss for few moments Geet snorts
G-Huh whatever... You are just bored and jealous that I am enjoying the party
Maan pushes away her hair behind her ear and pinches her chin lightly making her look up at him
M-Maybe you are right …watching you dance ... Enjoying yourself ... With some other guys... Perhaps I am little jealous
He pecks her lips lightly
M-and very likely want to keep you All to myself
He kisses her again a little longer now.
M-how about we enjoy rest of the party in our room?
He gives her a good hot kiss
Geet is feeling surprised and little overwhelmed and distracted by the kisses
Coming back to herself. She pushes Maan away lightly and looks around ki koi dekh to nahi raha
part 68
Both let out their insecurities openly this time.
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Why didn't she drag Maan off to the dance floor for the slow numbers? She can dance with the dog, but not him?
Haan yeh toh small talk ki queen hai. She blabbering about health facts and Maan is trying to make sense of thier togetherness. Good call Maan tell her whne you got to go use the bathroom as well god knows what she interrogate you about. I wonder if intimacy will be the way of expressing thier true feelings.
Wow fantastic update 👍😍
Chapter 69
Aww 🥰 maan & geet are getting all mushy ....... actually kind of sweet with them being all lovey/ dovey ♥️
It seems like geet was enjoying the party more than maan & that is a great idea loading up someone’s else’s plate too so you can try everything 😆
The funniest part was geet was dancing with Michael Jackson’s aatma 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Omg I can picture her trying to moonwalk & falling down 🤣🤣🤣
Then geet started dancing with a dog 🤣🤣🤣
ROFL ..,,. Too funny di , where do you come up with this stuff
Liked maan’s little confession at the end where he admitted he was jealous & he only wants her to himself awww so sweet
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Thank you di 🤗
hope you are well
Part 69
Stupendous update... well written
glad seeing them get closer
Ha ha Geet is hilarious
she dances with a dog
why couldn't she dance with Maan
at least they are not addressing things
great that Maan wanted to clear that he was not talking to Lisa
wow Maan is jealous
adore his possessiveness
that was a hot kiss
update soon
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