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Posted: 4 years ago
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Such a beautiful OS. I thought it would be epic beizzati of the family or Didi in a comic way but it was quite serious. I am waiting for the day Virat will speak to her this way. 😆

Coming back to your OS. I loved the dialogues a lot. Pakhi is so delusional. Even after he clearly said he loves his wife, she doesn't understand what he wants to tell her.

I am glad he left the house. I would love to read what Sai would do now ? Accept him or reject him.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Lovely OS. This is the same Virat we would like to see in the future episodes. Giving it back to his so called family and his best friend Pakhi who has turned into a psycho. And, then rectify his mistake and start a new life with Sayi.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awesome OS. Written very well.

Mast mast bezzati 😆

Please write more stories..

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Posted: 4 years ago
#14

Thanks guys!

yeah I tried to write something in this track finally did this piece as finding truth part was so complicated to write. Thanks to Siya for writing that part!



I have something in mind for virat and sai meeting. Not fully formed though!


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Tagging you after reading your OS!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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loved it. finally hamare buddu ips ko pakhi ki niyat samajh mein aayi. chalo der ayi durusth ayi.❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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beautiful OS

loved it

i loved the way virat showed pakhis her real place

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This os is like the best scenario.... Awesome... But I really don't want to high my expectations with CVS we have .... Between u nailed it... Pura bezzathi Didi ka🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thanks everyone for the comments. It is raining OSs today!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thanks for the tag dear. Sorry for commenting this late. Next time aisa nahi hoga 🙈.

I miss a lot of tags because of a lot of notifications.


Awesome! The dialogues were all too good 👌👌.


Waise I must say, I liked this Virat. Spasht shabdon mein bolta hai 😆. Direct confrontation with his family was good. Best way to go about it. No beating around the bush. I loved how you have involved Aai in it.

Gang ka khulasa aur didi ka bhi? Wah 🥳🥳

I really liked Pakhi's scene. As you have mentioned at the bottom of the page, he has maintained that respect while speaking without insulting her. How can he actually? I really liked how you had thought through it 👏. She is in a delusion, he has just come to know about it. He has come to know from her that she hasn't ever moved on and married only for him 😒. I liked what you did for Pakhi too in the story. She looked a little classy like RK from KD and not our didi ❤.

Right questions asked, right amount if information revealed.

There was another beauty in it. Virat not only realised Pakhi's feelings, he immediately related it to Sai's words and behavior ❤. Kaash aisa soch pata. Anyone would, why is Virat also failing to think these in the show?

He has not only told Pakhi that he loves Sai, has also said that he has not felt like this before. This means a lot ❤. Accha hai saaf suthra Virat, ab sach toh pata chal gaya, biwi ko kaise manane waala hai . Quarters bhi mil gaya. Did you not say Aai had a hand in it? ❤. She is a sweetheart.


Gc superfast express ko leke aao. Are you planning to continue this? Would love to read what happens next 😍.

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