ShaKhi Holi OS |~ His Favorite Color ~ (16+) - Page 5

Omg Rimi, I loved it. That was super hot 🔥🔥♥️😍 in the last Anokhi saying to be careful next time.. aww ☺️ ☺️ Awesome OS!!

OMG!!!!! What did I just read??? Kitna hot and amazing!!!!! SOMEONE FAN ME RIGHT NOW!!!! I have goosebumps!! I could imagine them, like omg! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ I could read this for days!!

Haaye Rimi😳

Kya aag lga di hai tune 🔥

This OS is too hot to handle.

How passionately anokhi was waiting for him and when other student just put tikka to him she couldn't tolerate it. Finally here we can see some jealously from her side also. Shaurya ko to jealous hote hue bahut dekha now it's time for Anokhi to jealous😉

Woww how Beautifully and in a romantic way they celebrated their holi. I am continuously blushing while reading.😳 and can't leave story in a mid way because each and every second I was thinking what will happen next. And last that lip kiss and the way you described it I was feeling like I am actually seeing both of them in that same position❤️

Beautifully written dear🤗

Keep writing more 😍

RIMI i have literally read and re-read this OS SO MANY TIMES!! IT IS SO HOT and now I don't even need to see holi in the show!! I love the way you write, it's hypnotizing and I just never want to stop reading!! THANK YOU FOR THIS BEAUTIFUL PIECE!!! *runs to read it for the millionth time*

Just one word beautiful ❤️😍😘

Originally posted by: anjani-pagli

Loved it....blushing Anokhi and naughty Shaurya haaye....☺️

Thank you 😳🤗

Originally posted by: Akanksha29100

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Rimi🤗🤗

Akanksha

My holi dreams *cries in happiness* My holi dreams *cries in happiness* My holi dreams *just cries nonstop*

Awwwww don't cry baby 😭🤪 I know Holi dreams are ☺️🤣😎

Mummmyyyyy *cries again*

Arre 🤣🤣🤣

This was so hot☺️

My ovaries .....

I can totally understand ☺️ they were on fire right ? 🔥🔥🔥🤣

You have no idea how I was all red while reading this. They were doing uhun uhun and I was painted all red.

Okay 😳 I'm glad I could do that 😆

Also, with his jaw.. All sharp and hard you went... I saw what you did there ! I saw what you did there! Caught you... 😎☺️

Arre Arre 😳 you seem to be the only one to get that ?🤪 good good 🤣☺️

And then we shifted from red to purple! ☺️

Uffff! The heat exceeding the temperature in my city ....

I know aaj kal bohot garmi hai Vaise bhi 🤣

Okay now on your writing, beautiful. Gorgeous ! Like I don't lose connect midway when I read something from you. It's magical. 🤗

That means a lot coming from you because i really admire your work ❤️

So I genuinely wish, you grow with your craft and keep exploring more.

Thank you so much!!!!🤗

Love u ❤️

Light and shine ❤️

Akanksha

Originally posted by: Shivikafan2

Beautiful ٩(♡ε♡)۶ 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

Thank you for this beautiful and Long update🥰🥰🥰🥰

Thanks a lot 🤗🤗

Kya karu mann toh tha aur likhne ka 🤣

Originally posted by: rikara94

'Ang se Ang lagana sajan hume aise rang lagana' ☺️☺️ iss gaane ka matalb agar kisi ko janna hai toh yeh OS padh le☺️☺️

Arre yaar Jyoti mujhe sharam aane rahi hai 🤣☺️

Oh god Rim, too much hotness in the air☺️

All thanks to their sizzling chemistry ☺️

Her wearing saree was giving me ideas, to where he gonna put colors☺️🤪

Yep! Zaroori tha na 😳🤣

Aww she was waiting for him coz se wanna become first to color him but🥺 anyways...shaurya ne toh pehle hi lgaya na tumhe☺️ woh bhi apne andaaz mein with giving love bites☺️

Asli color toh Shaurya ne chadhaya hai 🤣 ekdum natural 😎

Oh god he himself guided her to color him....that was☺️ and him turning her, nibbling her earlobe, coloring her shoulder, kissing her neck while sliding his hands down to her arms and then coloring belly....ufff that was on fire moment☺️🔥🔥🔥 i was blushing hard and still☺️☺️

Okieeeee ☺️ that is why it took me so long to write it 🤣☺️

And then his favvv color☺️ that kiss was ☺️ that has something...ugghh i can't just describe yar..that moemnt was too hot to handle☺️ every bit you have described during the kiss was amazing👍🏼☺️

Thank you 😳 first time i thought of describing it thoda aur detail me 😆

aww these too are😆 blushing like hell...dekho dekho nazar bhi nahi mila pa rahe...

Gosh Reema caught that love bite🤪

'koi baat nahi next time dhayan...i mean...' oh gosh☺️ you want next time also? Oh great...we too want this☺️ shaurya too☺️

Mann ki baat zabaan pe 🤣

Mujhe or bhi likhna hai...but i can't☺️

I can totally understand 🤣

Rim you are awesome in this genre👏 every little thing you have portrayed...is up to the mark👍🏼 and you always managed, to make us blushing like hell☺️

Thank you 😳 abb bas mujhe Fifty shades ka next series ka contract milne me der nahi lagegi 🤣🤣

Keep writing and humari garmi badhati raho🤪

Yes! Bilkul 😎

Love u 🤗

Holi OS likhne ke idea tune sabse pehle daala tha. I hope tujhe vo mila what u wanted 🤣

Originally posted by: Rudhitafan

🥵rimu☺️

Krishu 😳☺️ Samajh sakti hu 🤣