24/03/21 A Jeeva Shiva SS part16 p. 33 epilogue p.34 - Page 8

Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

Awww

Thank-you so much🤗

If you could see me right now, you would see a big bright smile on my face.❤️

Then I wish that this big smile always remains on your face❤

Lovely update!!!

For a ACP, virat is slow 😂😂😂 Didi KO batana pada about dhoka....

Karishma is mast... And good thing that Mohit reached Pakhi on time...

Continue soon!!!! 

Happy writing!!!

Originally posted by: MSgayatri

Lovely update!!!

For a ACP, virat is slow 😂😂😂 Didi KO batana pada about dhoka....

Karishma is mast... And good thing that Mohit reached Pakhi on time...

Continue soon!!!! 

Happy writing!!!

Thank you🤗

See, I have kept his character just like in GHKKPM😉😆

I have always liked Karishma. She is fun. Ekdam dadho sutto😆

Omg, I know what ever virat did is very wrong , but my heart goes for him, he genuinely did it for samrat's happiness.... He pick up the knife... I don't want to think he is going to commit something wrong because he won't run from problems but he is too vulnerable now....😭😭

Wow you write so well

Hope to read some more and lot more 😀😀

Edited by maahi11 - 3 years ago

omg!!! it was heartbreaking to see virat in so much pain. what was the last part? i hope he is not going to do anything stupid and sai will stop him in time because honestly i think he has lost his ability to think rationally for the time being. he needs someone to hold him now.❤️❤️❤️

Oh my god...!!! I hope Virat doesn’t do anything stupid...he has made a mistake in the past but this shouldn’t be the consequences of it...his intention was pure and clear to give happiness to his brother...he has lost his ability to think rationally so I hope Sai helps him and understand the problem...thank you so much for update...please update the next part soon...👍🏻

Thanks for the update

Heartbreaking for both Virat and Samrat

Virat did a mistake but his intention was pure to give happiness to his brother

Virat is going an emotional breakdown 

Im sure Sai will help to understand the problem the fact

Eagerly waiting to read next update

Originally posted by: Saichintalli

Omg, I know what ever virat did is very wrong , but my heart goes for him, he genuinely did it for samrat's happiness.... He pick up the knife... I don't want to think he is going to commit something wrong because he won't run from problems but he is too vulnerable now....😭😭

yeah, guilt is very strong emotion. It can make any strong person vulnerable.