SaiRat - First Holi- Jealous Viru part 6 on page 8 - Page 5

Posted: 3 years ago

Finally virat is back! But poor Sai. No one gets her pov. Her pain and hurt is coming across...she is really trying to help devi but everyone including ashwini have made her the villain. 

Posted: 3 years ago

awesome update 

sais pain was penned down beautifully 

sab iski khilaaf hogayi , acha decision liya sai neh just ignore them all and focus on her aim 

waiting for your next update 

Posted: 3 years ago

Long awaited hug...!!! Very nicely written... I liked how Sai is giving silent treatment to Aai and Virat at the end...please update next part soon...waiting excitedly...thank you so much for amazing update...👍🏻

Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome update.... it's hurting to see aai treating like that... I hope she realizes her mistake quickly... Good sai went to silent mode... I really want to see what will others do with silent mode... Plz update quickly... Can't wait

Posted: 3 years ago

I cant thank you enough you guys for making this so special....I wanted to wrap up but the kind of love and messages I got to update the next part is overwhelming..


I will again say  due to my hectic schedule because of covid I am unable to update on regular basis.


Bear it because it may contain few mistakes as I have typed this during office hours.

Congratulations guys we have completed 150 episodes today.


You just need to imagine this special bg music because you will feel more of Sai pain if you listen this song at bg while reading this SS. Without wasting much time let's start. 



Sairat Ki Holi (Part 1)


 Sai came out from washroom to get ready and Virat was about to talk when Pakhi entered.

Pakhi called Virat. Sai dint even see her. Virat said Sai listen to me. 

Sai being stern I need to go I have other work to finish then I have to study for my semesters as they are after Holi and went down.

Virat angrily look towards Pakhi and Said kya hua Pakhi aur kbhi to Knock krke aya kro..

Ho skta h mai aur Sai kuch important baat kr rhe ho.

Pakhi - Mai to tumhe bulane aayi thi pooja ke liye ..badi mami ne bheja tha.

Aur tum mujhse aise bat kyu kr rhe ho.

Virat- Pakhi abhi jao,mai baad me aata hu.

Pakhi - Pr Virat. Thik h tum aram se ana..Shayad tumhe mera is kamre me ana nhi acha lagta h tmhri biwi ki trah.

Virat - ab isme Sai Sai se aa gyi. Usne to kuch bhi nhi bola. Tum kab smjhogi use.

Pakhi- mujhe nhi smjhna us batmiz aur badmizaz ladki ko. Jiski wajah se din bhar ghar ki shanti bigdi rehti h.

Virat in mind - Jab ye mere samne usko itna bolte h toh bechari ko mere na rehte hue kya kya bola hoga.

Ab mujhe sai se bat krni hi hogi.

He hurriedly went downstairs.  

(Change of scene )

Virat and others went outside for Holi Puja.

Sai was working in the kitchen and helping in the pooja by ignoring others and not talking much. Kaku and gang feeling happy.

Aai,bua and Viru feeling terribly bad by her calm and silence. They were initating the talk but she was not responding to them in her usual way .


Bg music - Naina From Dangal


Jhootha jag rain basera

Saancha dard mera

Mrig-trishna sa moh piya

Naata mera tera

Naina.. jo saanjhe khwab dekhte the

Naina.. bichad ke aaj ro diye hain yun

Naina.. jo milke raat jaagte the

Naina.. sehar mein palken meechte hain yun

Juda huye kadam

Jinhone li thi ye kasam

Milke chalenge hardum

Ab baant'te hain ye gham

Bheege naina.. jo khidkhiyon se jhankte the

Naina.. ghutan mein band ho gaye hai yun


Her smile is vanished and then she went to her room.

And hugged her Aaba's photo and started sobbing and complaining 

Aaba I want you now,I cant handle this much work,pressure,studies ,ignorance ,hatred.

Friends in my college - enjoying movies,outing,lunches and dates . There days start at 9pm and ends with partying till late night.

My day starts at 5 and end at late night with studies.

Kaash Aaba Kassh aap hote to mai in sab se door apni life enjoy kr rhi hoti.

Their Virat and Aai got emotional and teary eyed  after listening to her conversation. They felt guilt stricken because it was a fact that in the mere age of 18 years she is working harder than others without complaining and then also not getting back the love she deserved.


Saans hairaan hai

Mann pareshaan hai

Ho rahi si kyun ruaansa ye meri jaan hai

Kyun nirasha se hai

Aas haari huyi

Kyun sawaalon ka utha sa

Dil mein toofaan hai

Naina.. thhe aasmaan ke sitaare

Naina.. grahan mein aaj toot'te hain yun

Naina.. kabhi jo dhoop senkte thhe

Naina.. thehar ke chhaaon dhoondhte hain yun


Virat was about to go inside the room when Ashwini stopped him by saying 

Godu Ruk ja ..ye aansu har kisike samne nhi nikalte h..aur fir shayd tu jayega toh use ye lage ki ab usse rone ke liye bhi puchna padega.

Jab uska mann halka hoga wo khud niche aayegi.

 There everyone waiting for Sai to come and start the Holi pooja with Virat as this is their first pooja.

Virat was tensed and he was sensing kahin wo depression fir se kuch....

Then Sai came with the pale face and weak smile.

Kaku started taunting Ae jungli mulgi tu so rhi thi. Yahan hum sab tera intezar kr rhe the pooja ke liye aur tu so rhi thi.

Apne Aaba ke ghar me bhi yahi krti thi.

Aai - Vahini wo to bechari Aaba ke ghar me rajkumari ki trah rehti thi lekin yahan pr.

Virat got angry with kaku's statement .

Sai- Sorry Kaku ,wo thoda sa sir dard tha isliye

Virat- Sorry agar tmhri tabiyat sahi nhi h,toh plz apne kamre jakar aaram kro.

Sai - Nhi Virat sir it's ok.

Then some new faces entered . They are relatives of Kaku.

Kaku started happily greeting them and ordered Sai to bring sweets and water for them.

Karishma was bit terrified with someone's presence and went inside with Sai.

Sai sensed something and asked Kya hua Karishma. Tum pareshan kyu ho.

Then a boy entered started greeting both the girls. Karishma's is terrified he extend his hand but Karishma dint revert. 

He folded his hand and said Namaste abhinav.

He smirked 

He extended his hand to Sai- Sai too said Namste. Mai aapko nhi janti.

Abhi- Koi bat nhi ek bar janlogi to bhulogi nhi . Kyu karishma vahini.

He then went outside . Karishma was about to  tell something to Sai.

Kaku called Sai kitni der lagegi fir se so gyi kya ?

There at hall 

New members.

Abhi mom-who is she ?

Badi sundar h ladki. Pehli bar dekh rhe h isko.

Abhi Father- Ye maid to nhi lagti?

Virat nhi ye meri wife h ?

And another boy entered - and looked at Sai - Tum yahan

Sai- Tum yahan kaise Mr.

Everyone was like how do they know each other.

He said ye Sai hai. Aai baba aapko batya tha na.

They came and hugged Sai. Sai felt relaxed after getting such love after long. 

They said Din bhar tumhare bare me hi baat krta h rehta h ye ladka

Ladka Name-Veer

Studying with Sai in same college . He is two year senior to her.

How they met ?

Virat reaction to their bonding?

His mother big statement towards Sai?

Sai happiness back ?

Edited by tinafans - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

It's awesome loved it plz continue. 

Posted: 3 years ago

Heartbreaking to see Sai cry and vent her sadness to her aabaa! She is so lonely...

Posted: 3 years ago

Lovely start!!!


Sai missing her aaba..... Too much too soon for her .... An even then ppl around are not that nice to her....


This abhi guy, I hope he did not hurt karishma... She looks terrified of him..

 An he does come across as the ladki chedo category....


Sai got some friend home.... That is soo nice for her.... Now kaku will atleast pretend to like sai in front of her guests....


Virat getting jealous.... Looks very nice...


Continue soon!!! 


Happy writing!!!

Posted: 3 years ago

awesome update 

loved it 

but really felt bad seeing her like this

waiseh yeah veer kon hai looks like virat will be jealous seeing their bond 

waiting for ur next update

Posted: 3 years ago

Sai ‘s pain is heart wrenching ... 💔 I hope all goes good with new character’s  entry... hope she gets someone for her emotional support ... loved it... please update the next part soon... can’t wait for it...👍🏻



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