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Posted: 4 years ago
#61

61

maan is happy as geet ask him to call her

mona make geet comfortable which change geet's opinion about rich people

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Posted: 4 years ago
#62

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superb update

geet become relax with maan's family with their casual approach to her maan also ask geet not to think but enjoy

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Posted: 4 years ago
#63

part 61

I like Mona. Maan's cousins seem to be all friendly and nice.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#64

As far as the cousins are concerned, there is no stigma about the rehab. They are just happy he is out.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#65

part 62

The guys probably have a history of going overboard. Geet just doesn't know what they will do.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 62

Entertaining update..... terrifically written

loved how Maan introduced Geet

not surprised that Geet does want his family to judge her

Maan was correct that she should not over think things

his family seem nice

loved Maaneet's banter

they already behave like a couple

liked her concern

a doctor will always be a doctor lol

what are the guys up to?

update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
#67

Congrats for new thread

Great part

Hope maan and Geet are comfortable and accepts their feeling now

Cont soon

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 4 years ago
#68

Star Commentor Award (Part 62)

Winners: Creampuff, Kkiran,

Runner Ups: Taahir004, khwaishfan

Special Mention: waterlotus.19

Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): golden_aura, Kkiran, NeenaDd

Congratulations to all the winners


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Part 63

Other girls say to other boys ki

‘Boys control yourself and don’t go overboard like last time’

Geet is thinking ki watersports ke liye hi toh jaa raha hain, ye ladkiyan aise kyun kar rahi hain

Maan nikal jaata hai lapak ke

Girls are gossiping:

“Did you see...she is there”

“She is there with them”

“All the girls are here...why does she have to be there with the men”

“You know how men go crazy in their yacht parties”

“Is she is a yacht girl that she went with them?”

Geet ne puch hi liya ki ye log kya baat kar rahe hain Mona aurek do aur ke group ko

Wo aise mooh banate hain ki...bechari nadaan ladki kuch nahi pata

Innocent naive girl

Mona- so...it’s a guys thing

Geet look at her questioningly, not convinced with heranswer

Mona- So they are on a yacht party

G- Okay...but he said water sports

They roll their eyes n shake their head ki yacht party mein bhi kya problem hai, this girl is totally missing the point

Mona- Well...doesn’t matter...you will know...you are new...so…

G- What?

Mona- It’s a bachelor's….with strippers and all

G-Oh oh...ohhhhh

She widens her eyes with every realization

G- Okay...its ok

She says after calming herself down

Mona-But...

Dusri cousin signals her subtly ki nahi

G-But?

Mona-But ...nothing...enjoy

Mona & baaki cousins chali jaati hain

Geet doesn’t know how to react

Geet sochne lagti hai

She couldn't concentrate on her book anymore

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Ab raat ho gayi

Geet gai apne private villa cum hut mein after having dinner with the girls

Jaake so gayi

She was in deep slumber

She felt ki koi aaya andar and kept the warm hand on her

She knew it was Maan

She felt his body besides her after a while

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Subah hui

Maan felt the sunlight on his face

He wakes up, still tired

He locates Geet sitting on the edge of the pool dipping her feet

He walks to her and sits beside her

M-Hey

He moves towards her and presses his lips to the curve of her ear lightly

She doesn’t move back but she stiffens a bit curling her fingers

G-You were late last night

M-I was. I am sorry

G-Should have informed

M-Should have but my phone was not catching signal

G-Hmm

M-Were you worried?

G-Should I have been?

He shrugs

She feels like giving him a piece of her mind, but she knows it’s not rational and his response is not helping her in any way

G-Why don’t you show me yesterday's pictures?

He felt her question was not out of curiosity but out of ting of blame, annoyance and what not

She is in dilemma, whether she should burst out like a real girlfriend?

Also, if she bursts out then will her family judge her to be unclassy?

And also, she doesn’t want to come out as needy too

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#69

FYI for Geet she is needy. Dear Lord please help this girl in not making a fool out of herself and being self sabotaging. Maybe the cousins were just overdoing the whole bachelor thing , but now poor Maan will have to suffer the reaction. Like out with it Geet ask Maan is he was chilling with strippers instead of water sporting, be the big mouth you are because you need answers and then you with question his honesty lol I may be going overboard with my prediction but you know how she annoys me LOL

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Looking forward to see his response and how will this turns out...

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