Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 62

Entertaining update..... terrifically written

loved how Maan introduced Geet

not surprised that Geet does want his family to judge her

Maan was correct that she should not over think things

his family seem nice

loved Maaneet's banter

they already behave like a couple

liked her concern

a doctor will always be a doctor lol

what are the guys up to?

update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Congrats for new thread 

Great part 

Hope maan and Geet are comfortable and accepts their feeling now 

Cont soon 

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 3 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 62)

Winners:  Creampuff, Kkiran,

Runner Ups: Taahir004, khwaishfan

Special Mention: waterlotus.19

 

 

Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments):  golden_aura, Kkiran, NeenaDd

 

Congratulations to all the winners


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Part 63

 

Other girls say to other boys ki

 

‘Boys control yourself and don’t go overboard like last time’

 

Geet is thinking ki watersports ke liye hi toh jaa raha hain, ye ladkiyan aise kyun kar rahi hain

 

Maan nikal jaata hai lapak ke

 

Girls are gossiping:

 

“Did you see...she is there”

 

“She is there with them”

 

“All the girls are here...why does she have to be there with the men”

 

“You know how men go crazy in their yacht parties”

 

“Is she is a yacht girl that she went with them?”

 

Geet ne puch hi liya ki ye log kya baat kar rahe hain Mona aurek do aur ke group ko

 

Wo aise mooh banate hain ki...bechari nadaan ladki kuch nahi pata

 

Innocent naive girl

 

Mona- so...it’s a guys thing

 

Geet look at her questioningly, not convinced with heranswer

 

Mona- So they are on a yacht party

 

G- Okay...but he said water sports

 

They roll their eyes n shake their head ki yacht party mein bhi kya problem hai, this girl is totally missing the point

 

Mona- Well...doesn’t matter...you will know...you are new...so…

 

G- What?

 

Mona- It’s a bachelor's….with strippers and all

 

G-Oh oh...ohhhhh

 

She widens her eyes with every realization

 

G- Okay...its ok

 

She says after calming herself down

 

Mona-But...

 

Dusri cousin signals her subtly ki nahi

 

G-But?

 

Mona-But ...nothing...enjoy

 

Mona & baaki cousins chali jaati hain

 

Geet doesn’t know how to react

 

Geet sochne lagti hai

 

She couldn't concentrate on her book anymore

 

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Ab raat ho gayi

 

Geet gai apne private villa cum hut mein after having dinner with the girls

 

Jaake so gayi

 

She was in deep slumber

 

She felt ki koi aaya andar and kept the warm hand on her

 

She knew it was Maan

 

She felt his body besides her after a while

 

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Subah hui

 

Maan felt the sunlight on his face

 

He wakes up, still tired

 

He locates Geet sitting on the edge of the pool dipping her feet

 

He walks to her and sits beside her

 

M-Hey

 

He moves towards her and presses his lips to the curve of her ear lightly

 

She doesn’t move back but she stiffens a bit curling her fingers

 

G-You were late last night

 

M-I was. I am sorry

 

G-Should have informed

 

M-Should have but my phone was not catching signal

 

G-Hmm

 

M-Were you worried?

 

G-Should I have been?

 

He shrugs

 

She feels like giving him a piece of her mind, but she knows it’s not rational and his response is not helping her in any way

 

G-Why don’t you show me yesterday's pictures?

 

He felt her question was not out of curiosity but out of ting of blame, annoyance and what not

 

She is in dilemma, whether she should burst out like a real girlfriend?

 

Also, if she bursts out then will her family judge her to be unclassy?

 

And also, she doesn’t want to come out as needy too

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

FYI for Geet she is needy. Dear Lord please help this girl in not making a fool out of herself and being self sabotaging. Maybe the cousins were just overdoing the whole bachelor thing , but now poor Maan will have to suffer the reaction.  Like out with it Geet ask Maan is he was chilling with strippers instead of water sporting, be the big mouth you are because you need answers and then you with question his honesty lol I may be going overboard with my prediction but you know how she annoys me LOL 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Looking forward to see  his response and how will this turns out...

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Posted: 3 years ago

Fantastic update 😊👍

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 61 & 62

Wow Di this update is really a good old classic.... Both Maan and Geet were like a married couple... Lage toh aise ki dono shadi karke honeymoon pe aaye hai dono husband wife jaise behave kar rahe hai.... Geet really needs to come out of her insecurities and be open to Maan.... Not all rich people are high headed and not all poor or middle class people are gold diggers.... Loved this update... 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice update..

Continue soon..

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 63 


Fantastic 


Mona now tells Geet that there will be strippers on the Yacht 

and at first Geet  is hyper but calms down 

I think she is disappointed at the fact that Maan did not tell 

there will be strippers and its a Bachelor  party 

but Maan knowing that Geet is there he will not have fun with the girls 

instead he will spend his time with the guys and have fun 

he was so sweet coming and kissing her ear almost as if they are already lovers 

oh no Geet seems like she can burst any minute 


will be waiting for the next 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Slowly and steadily both are moving forward. They are getting comfortable around others. 

Geet is cautious around his family. She doesn't want them to judge her.