Star Commentor Award (Part 62)
Winners: Creampuff, Kkiran,
Runner Ups: Taahir004, khwaishfan
Special Mention: waterlotus.19
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Congratulations to all the winners
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Part 63
Other girls say to other boys ki
‘Boys control yourself and don’t go overboard like last time’
Geet is thinking ki watersports ke liye hi toh jaa raha hain, ye ladkiyan aise kyun kar rahi hain
Maan nikal jaata hai lapak ke
Girls are gossiping:
“Did you see...she is there”
“She is there with them”
“All the girls are here...why does she have to be there with the men”
“You know how men go crazy in their yacht parties”
“Is she is a yacht girl that she went with them?”
Geet ne puch hi liya ki ye log kya baat kar rahe hain Mona aurek do aur ke group ko
Wo aise mooh banate hain ki...bechari nadaan ladki kuch nahi pata
Innocent naive girl
Mona- so...it’s a guys thing
Geet look at her questioningly, not convinced with heranswer
Mona- So they are on a yacht party
G- Okay...but he said water sports
They roll their eyes n shake their head ki yacht party mein bhi kya problem hai, this girl is totally missing the point
Mona- Well...doesn’t matter...you will know...you are new...so…
G- What?
Mona- It’s a bachelor's….with strippers and all
G-Oh oh...ohhhhh
She widens her eyes with every realization
G- Okay...its ok
She says after calming herself down
Mona-But...
Dusri cousin signals her subtly ki nahi
G-But?
Mona-But ...nothing...enjoy
Mona & baaki cousins chali jaati hain
Geet doesn’t know how to react
Geet sochne lagti hai
She couldn't concentrate on her book anymore
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Ab raat ho gayi
Geet gai apne private villa cum hut mein after having dinner with the girls
Jaake so gayi
She was in deep slumber
She felt ki koi aaya andar and kept the warm hand on her
She knew it was Maan
She felt his body besides her after a while
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Subah hui
Maan felt the sunlight on his face
He wakes up, still tired
He locates Geet sitting on the edge of the pool dipping her feet
He walks to her and sits beside her
M-Hey
He moves towards her and presses his lips to the curve of her ear lightly
She doesn’t move back but she stiffens a bit curling her fingers
G-You were late last night
M-I was. I am sorry
G-Should have informed
M-Should have but my phone was not catching signal
G-Hmm
M-Were you worried?
G-Should I have been?
He shrugs
She feels like giving him a piece of her mind, but she knows it’s not rational and his response is not helping her in any way
G-Why don’t you show me yesterday's pictures?
He felt her question was not out of curiosity but out of ting of blame, annoyance and what not
She is in dilemma, whether she should burst out like a real girlfriend?
Also, if she bursts out then will her family judge her to be unclassy?
And also, she doesn’t want to come out as needy too
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
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