Star Commentor Award (Part 60)
Winners: Alamelu, , sanum23
Runner Ups: Creampuff, Taahir004
Special Mention: khwaishfan, Kkiran
Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): NeenaDd, Creampuff, Taahir004
Congratulations to all the winners
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Part 61
G-Will you call me after you reach?
He is little surprised
M-Yeah. I will
She smiles
M-Okay
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He is more than happy to finally call her and not think too much
But Geet was in her seminar so she messages him
‘Busy in seminar. Will call you back’
Geet calls back Maan toh usne nahi uthaya
Maan ne bhi message kar diya ki
‘Busy. Ttyl’
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Geet gets a call from his cousin Mona
Mona- Hey Geet. This is Mona
Geet- Hey Mona. How are you?
Mona- I am fine. Maan gave your number to me
Geet-Oh
Mona- Lets meet up for shopping for the wedding. Maan asked me to take you along
G-He is not coming?
Mona-I don’t think so...he asked me to give you his credit card though
Geet agrees to go
But Geet ka middle class complex toh tha hi
Upar se this is with his NRI cousin...not Maan who she was comfortable with
Geet thoda sa uncomfortable and awkward thi during theshopping
Ab Geet ne sidha puch hi liya
G-Do you think I am a gold digger since I am using your brother's credit card?
Mona bursts out laughing
Mona-What gold are you digging? My brother is not more than a haggard stone. With that definition, he is the gold digger. You seem much closer to being gold. And gold diggers don’t even think or talk like that
Geet smiles
Mona feels aww she is so innocent
Geet thodi phir comfortable hui
She also realizes ki upper class people are also not different as she was assuming
Ab shopping-vopping hoti hai lunch also she has with the Mona
Geet Mona ko Maan ka credit card wapas karne jaati hai toh Mona nahi leti
Mona- Maan has given this to you
G-Yeah, I used it and giving it back
Mona-No no, you can keep it
Geet sochti hai Maan ko face to face de dungi
She also wonders ki Maan aaj kyun nahi aaya
+++++++
Agle din Maan picks her up from her hotel
He drives to a small air stripe and they mount a sea plane
Geet is fully astonished
She is calculating how much does a sea plan rental cost, wobhi chutti manane ke liye casually
Her calculating mind stops and goes blank seeing the view from the sea plane
They land on aa white sand beach
Huge bada sa resort hai
Maan nikalta hai toh few people walk towards him in casual beach wear
“Ohhhhh Broooo”
“The man!!!!”
“The first-time rehab experience...huh”
“You are a man now”
Geet is wondering ye iske cousins rehab experience ko aise celebrate kar rahe hain?
First time? Inke family mein yeh normal hai kya?
Maan introduce karaata hai ki
M-This is Dr Geet Handa. This is my cousins
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years agoPart 60
Congratulations on the new thread Di... Now of to the comments....
Arrgh.... Yeh dono mujhe pagal bana denge.... Dimag karab hogai kya dono ko... Dono bohot hi confused hai aur saath me humme bhi confuse kar rahi hai akhir kya chate hai yeh dono ek dusre se.... Mujhe aisi gussa aa rahi hai ki agar yeh dono meri hath miljai toh dono ki kaan kich kar mandir me leja ke shadi karwa dungi.... Dono ek dusre se phas jate na tab akal aayegi....
Feelings hai dono ko lekin dono ki muh pe moothiyan hai ki agar khola na sab ke sab zameen par gir jathi hai... Huh... Kabhi suhdarenge nahi.... Ab mujhe yeh confusion horahi hai ki dono ki bulb jala hai ki nahi...? Geet toh bulb hi nahi woh bilkul tube light hai.... Ab hi baat suljhane ki vajai aur uljah raki hai.... Eeeh... Yeh dono bilkul jalebhia hai ek dum thedi ab shadi me jaake kya hal hogi dono ki pata nahi.... 😤 ab dono ne hum aapke hai kaun ki vibes de rahe hai.... 🤦♀...🤗
❤
Part 61
Interesting update di !!
These two are definitely acting like a couple while telephone tagging messages. But 🤫 shhhh they don’t know this yet 😆
Interesting how maan asked mona to take geet shopping & I love how he sent geet his credit card. I liked how Mona reassured geet , she seems easygoing , fun & nice . I think Mona already knows geet’s importance in maan’s life ....... maybe now she can explain it to geet or better yet write it down in that stupid book that she gets all her info from 😆
The destination wedding sounds exciting , seaplane ride & all !!!
Now it is time for geet to meet his cousins ...... curious how all that will pan out ?? Is maan’s mother going to be there as well ??
Thank you for update 🤗
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Like this Mona. She definitely put geet at ease including using the CC. Why did maan not want to come shopping? Which man would like it right. Also maybe if he came geet might not have let him Shop for her
gold digger. Lol
Cousins of maan interesting people.
Wonder what their conversations with her will be like. Hmm
Part 61
Fabulously Awesome
Geet truly has this complex about middle class and wealthy people
she needs to rather concentrate on the fact that she is a doctor
and that position in life is rather much more important
and surely its time that Geet realizes that Maan has never ridiculed her
about her financial status neither did he ever make her feel the difference
between them so she needs to let go of that
Mona seemed like a genuine person and finally Geet too gets a bit comfortable
with her
wow Maan has already brought Geet to the Island
and he introduces her to his cousins with such pride saying
she is DR Geet
waiting for wedding and this time I hope that both Maan and Geet
enjoy themselves together
Mona is truly a darling,The way she replies,
Loved her interaction with geet,
Now wt is in store for her
Part 61
splendid update.... awesomely written
Unknowingly they are getting closer.
the messages are a start
Mona is a wonderful person
glad Maan asked her to take Geet shopping.
great that he even gave Geet his credit card
can understand Geet been uncomfortable
as expected she confronts Mona
liked Mona's response.
at least Geet realised that been rich does not mean that people are different
of cos Maan wants Geet to keep his credit card
seems like they on the way to Mona's wedding
not surprised that Geet thinks of the costs of the sea plane etc
finally she meets his cousins
so they all knew he was in rehab
I assume Maan is close to his family
update soon
Aww how sweet playing phone tag. Maan is so thoughtful making sure Geet treats herself when out with Mona. Geet and her stigmas about people are awful. She needs to stop judging a book by its cover plus she a complete ditz. His cousins seem like wack jobs :)
Star Commentor Award (Part 61)
Winners: Alamelu, Creampuff,
Runner Ups: Taahir004, Kkiran
Special Mention: Khwaishfan
Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): Creampuff,Alamelu, Taahir004
Congratulations to all the winners
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Part 62
Maan introduce karaata hai ki
M-This is Dr Geet Handa. This is my cousins (sab ke naam)
Geet sab ko hi hello bolti hai
Some of them oooh aah ki oh doctor
‘Ohhh Maan...your standards have gone up’
Mona aake hugs Geet
Cousins say ki jao freshen up, luggage rakho, take rest
They are given a sea view suite
G-We are in the same room?
M-We shouldn’t be?
G-I mean...your family doesn’t know...that we...so...
M-They don’t? You want a separate room?
Geet is confused ki kya bole
G-I don’t want your family to judge me
Maan sighs
G-What? You only said that your mom hates me. I don’t want anyone else to hate me
M- This place is big enough for two people
Maan changes into his three fourth length casual pants and vest
Geet also changes to her casual kaftan, shorts, hair tied up, sunglasses and grabs her book
M-Maan?
M-Hmm?
G-Do you think I belong here? I mean they are all your family and I...
M-Don’t overthink stuff Geet. Just chill. Do you know how to?
G-Yeah, I know(she shrugs). I am a chilled-out person
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They go to the beach
Geet takes up a sand chair
Maan goes to mingle with the guys
Girls are sunbathing, gossiping about clothes, getting footspas
Girls are also in skimpy bikinis while Geet is in her shorts and trancy kaftan.....that’s the max she is comfy in, also she doesn’t want skin cancer
G-You forgot the sunscreen!
Geet yells out at Maan who was at a distance with the boys
M-What forgot? Poora din shopping karke why didn't you buy for us?
He yells back
G-I bought. You forgot to apply, jerk!
Geet ke mooh se automatically nikal jaata hai ‘jerk’
She realizes she is among his family and becomes red with embarrassment
He smiles
Then bhaag ke aata hai ki de
Baaki cousins bhi hasne lag gaye
No one can say Geet is gold digger now, who would publicly call their gold 'jerk'
Geet is bickering him ki...
G-Apply more
G-Apply more
G-Itne se kuch nahi hota
G-UVa UVb are harmful
Frustration mein khud hi Maan ke exposed back n neck pe slather kar deti hai, plus kaan ke peeche and all
Maan goes to back to the guys
G-Reapply after every 2 hours
She yells after him
M-No ways! Go to hell!
She yells back
G-I will make sure you are in hell if you speak to me like this again
She throws handful of sand at him
But she misses
Maan looks at her and laughs, full daant nikaalke
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Men are playing beach volleyball and girls were getting pampered with spas and massages
The guys get on a boat for water sports and stuff
Maan comes to Geet and says:
M-I am going on the boat with the boys. Don’t wait up
G-Okay
Other girls say to other boys ki
‘Boys control yourself and don’t go overboard like last time’
Geet is thinking ki watersports ke liye hi toh jaa rahe hain, ye ladkiyan aise kyun kar rahi hain
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
Thank you kwaishfan & di for the Q&A it was entertaining as always 😆
Part 60
Maneet’s hot/cold relationship is very confusing ....... the temperature changes so quickly ........one minute they are intimate ....... the next minute they are arguing........them suddenly they are going out for breakfast together like nothing happened........... don’t these two tire themselves out with all their interchanging emotions ??? 🤪 Their relationship is like a roller coaster ride full of thrills
However I do like that they shared a moment during breakfast where they shared their feelings/ fears ....... it was nice
They almost did seem couply 😆at the end when geet was concerned about maan’s feelings & how she asked him to call ........ awww 🥰 geet is turning all sweet on us . hahahaha you are so surprised
Excited to read what happens at the wedding on the island
Thank you for pm & update di
🤗