Love, Unrequited [Thread 2 : Pg 140] - Page 17

Originally posted by: Arshi67

I loved how the writing style you used here matched the mood of the chapter. The staccato phrases deepening the sense of ennui.

The casual, upfront judgemental attitude which litters the dynamics of the three families is so real in metros today. Society living brings together the most unlikely of people. I can't blame Shruti for saying what she did about Nishit, even though it led to Kirti erasing some lovely moments. Tejas has lot to be blamed for.

Wishing your father a speedy recovery. I can imagine how awful the wait for the result must have been.

The video you shared was brilliantly satirical.

I couldn't have said it better. One really felt that deepening sense of ennui with the weather outside adding the background to it.

Unfortunately not able to see the video here

Originally posted by: Ginnosuke_Nohar

Last two days was a roller coaster ride for us. My father has been suffering from fever and cough for a few days now. Doctor advised a Covid test. You can imagine what a scare it gave all of us. By God's grace, the test result came negative. The fever is also breaking. Signs of recovery I hope. Finally all of us could breathe a sigh of relief and I could type and post an update without any worries hovering over my head. I hope all of you are well too.

Wishing that this Maha Shivratri brings to all of you health, wealth, peace and prosperity.

Good to know he's feeling better now and it is not Covid.

Originally posted by: Ginnosuke_Nohar

Thank you Deep for your heartfelt words. I hope you keep finding the story worth your time.

Canapoem is truly a darling. My champion! 😍

Thank you.

Your story was first recommended to me by Pravallika . Thanks to her that I came across such a wonderful story.

Originally posted by: Ginnosuke_Nohar

Last two days was a roller coaster ride for us. My father has been suffering from fever and cough for a few days now. Doctor advised a Covid test. You can imagine what a scare it gave all of us. By God's grace, the test result came negative. The fever is also breaking. Signs of recovery I hope. Finally all of us could breathe a sigh of relief and I could type and post an update without any worries hovering over my head. I hope all of you are well too.

Wishing that this Maha Shivratri brings to all of you health, wealth, peace and prosperity.

Good to know that your father is getting better now and it was not Covid.

These are indeed tough times for all of us around the world.

Such a beautiful chapter this was.

Our moods dictate how we see our surroundings and you have written it so poetically.

If we have a bad mood, the rains outside almost feel like our tears falling and if the same weather is seen by a happy person, they

feel it is love that is pouring outside.

I guess our Indian cinemas have infinite songs in both categories.

Kirti's state was no better. Loved reading about her state of mind from the tasteless rainbow cake to the rainbow only she could see in the rain.

The friendship that has formed between the 3 families was heart warming to read. I guess losses and turmoils brought them together and I think it will stay strong too in the future.

Kids are the ones that suffer the most in such circumstances. One can feel really sorry for Radha and Sibin.

Shruti's concerns are valid. Maybe her past experiences made her say all those things to Kirti but her questioning is legit.

I love how Kirti and Nishit are slowly forming some kind of bond, but he has a girlfriend right. Is she okay with him constantly texting another girl?

I guess Kirti is still not that close or has reached that stage where she can ask Nishit about such questions.

She has not thought about Tejas for a week? Thats progress.

When the texts stop, he comes over to talk. She gave him a reason to come back, two reasons even.

Shruti wasn't totally off the mark. Her points are valid. They come as bitter truth but Kirti does need to ask herself those same questions.

Hope your dad gets well soon. Good that it wasn't COVID.

So glad to hear that your dad does not have Covid. Wishing him a full recovery.

Once again loved how this chapter was written..how you used the same rainy weather to match her restlessness/happiness..her varied state of mind.

Shruti reaction and advice to her texting Nishit was natural based on what she knows. It stood out both their unsaid happy reaction when they see each other after not texting for a while. The tidbits you add in every chapter about her past, her strange checks are a result of copying someone 😊