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Posted: 4 years ago

You beautifully managed the same SaiRat chemistry even when distanced😳 distance actually worked for them to value each other more.... loved the yearnings and longing wala love between them😍... also the video call of would-be Jiju-Saali was cute😳

Thumbs up from my side for continuation of this story👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

It was awesome, zabardast, fabulous as always.

Hai, hai I love Shilpa and her phone too. Mandal abhaar. Looking forward to the wedding. And thankyou for inviting all of us.

It was so lovely how her existence itself affects him, so nice. And I loved that Viru considers her his everything. You know that simple part was amazing to even imagine.

Really lovely.

Continue soon.


@ bold - I read this and immediately thought what a lovely comment and thought, in a way, I am also attending their wedding. Thanks so much for this 💗💗


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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Blackwind

Hey thanks for the lovely reply 💕🤗

I m Misbah n you are Kalyani?? I guess I got that right😃

I actually love your character sketch of Virat more than Sai here... there's so many different intriguing sides to him and it just keeps getting interesting day by day...he is one such complex character where I think even I fail to read sometimes but anyways I like reading and knowing these different layers of him...I love all other of your characters but the way you have sketched Virat is rare 👏n I m loving it...


I kept reading this comment later- I am curious, Misbah, did you mean Virat character sketch in the whole story, or just that particular update.

When I started writing this story, I was mainly dissatisfied and disappointed with how the makers didn’t put thought into Virat’s character - he only reacts and often his actions are quite stupid. And of course how the show doesn’t even bother showing that he is a professional man, which policeman comes home to all that toxic drama and next morning continues that drama? Police have to deal with so much bad outside.

Anyways I want to write a Man who is not single layered, he cannot be, his professional training and job has to influence him in some way. I wanted to write a man who loves his family but hates all the drama - someone realistic but also intensely romantic,


I am so happy that you are enjoying him! 💗💗


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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: laksh

Loved it. I was actually wondering this morning when will you next update it and somehow thought might get one today.

Wow, loved their phone conversation. And the baiko and sasur ke lectures 😂😂😂

Forms se hi baatein karo 😂😂


Virat is so possessive and how he loved it when he found his name in emergency contact and his address as permanent address? Wow Sai has taken so much of liberty par phir bhi ek distance maintain karti hai.


Like how in the last chapter he was recalling that it is Sai who is direct and how she had said, this is how much I can do, don't expect anything more. Par phir bhi permanent address mein Virat ka.


No wonder it made him very happy. Was so personal, intimate to be able to share his address with her and also that she took the liberty without having to ask him. That is how much he has let her in.


Will she also be able let him in her life that way? May be in future? I believe that is what Virat wants 😆


Hi Laksh - I try my best to update everyday, India time hopefully before 11pm. Sometimes I try and reply to comments, that one I don’t always get time, but I read them, no matter what. Because comments motivate me to write more,

@bold - it’s so interesting how you have said the responsibility sometimes of getting closer to someone is if they let you get closer. This statement really made me think, thank you so much for it ❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Amazing ❤️❤️❤️

I just came across your ff read all the chapters in one go and I am speechless you're really depicting everything amazingly 😊 I loved your ff unconditionally 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: MSgayatri

Lalchi gudiya says continue the story ... We can have adjustments issue with job n home life post marriage... Or I m sure you will find smthin nice


Coming to the update, it was amazing!!!!


Friends like family make life sooo simple... Shilpa n maushi have such love an concern for sai n aaba.. they are thoughtful to cancel hall for extra expenses... Willing to take all strain to decorate the terrace.... Soo much affection... How I will to have such ppl in my life....


Virat Bonding with bachpan ki saheli n calling to look at sai was sooo cute!!!

Shivani calling n showing virat was also super cute!!!


Both missing each other n getting senti by just looking is soo awweee!!!


Happy writing!!! ❤️❤️❤️


Your one liners always floor me! This is such a simple comment but such a deep thought Gayatri- Thank you for that.


Edited by columbia - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Blackrose92

Amazing ❤️❤️❤️

I just came across your ff read all the chapters in one go and I am speechless you're really depicting everything amazingly 😊 I loved your ff unconditionally 😳


What a sweet thing to say

Please continue to love it

But I have condition - you must comment regularly 😆

I post an update every night before 11pm India time,

Thank you again 💗🙏🏽


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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: columbia


What a sweet thing to say

Please continue to love it

But I have condition - you must comment regularly 😆

I post an update every night before 11pm India time,

Thank you again 💗🙏🏽


ok dear I completely agree with the condition 😆

I'll of course continue to love it ☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Ninabarbie

Another awsome update Kal 🤩🤩. I really really loved it and felt relieved upto some point coz at last, it is all out. Virat's frustration and expectations from Sai and the limit Sai is currently willing to get emotionally involved are finally out and bare. I feel this is an improvement because bottled up feelings and complaints could cause a tremendous damage in the long run, completely destroying what they have built up so far. So, I'm so relieved that this convo finally happened.


I'm really proud of Sai for standing up for herself and holding on to her ground without giving into Virat's tantrums. She has the full right to build up her relationship, her love in a pace she is comfortable with and Virat should understand that he won't get everything he wants right at the moment he demands it. ACP sahib have to learn to be more patient and I think he finally understood that just like he demanded Sai to accept him as he is, he should return the favour and accept Sai as she is. Being a hypocrite and changing the rules he laid out first won't get him anywhere.


But I'm sad that they had to part ways without solving the issue completely. Both of them are in this knee deep and deeper the involvement, deeper the feelings of hurt too. And I also felt sad, when both of them missed the tender gestures of each other, her stepping forward to wipe his tears and him bringing the hand he was waving to his lips. I think if either of those tender gestures were noticed, outcome would have been different. But being apart from each other for a while will allow both of them some breathing place to think with a clear mind and think about the future steps. And I was all like awwwwwwww when she took his T shirt with her. It was like she always need a part of him with her 😍😍😍😍😍.


And @MSgayatri read my mind. I also had a thought that may be our lover boy might pay her a visit because he can't stay away from each other. Hoping for the best 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩.


Once again I would like to appreciate all your efforts for this story Kal. It must be really hard to juggle all this with your busy schedule. Hats off to you ❤❤❤. Awaiting for today's update excitedly. Fingers crossed 🤞🏻🤞🏻🤞🏻.


Happy Writing ❤❤


Am running behind on posting my thoughts to your comments, posted one on Page 91

here @ bold - yes, Sai’s need to hold her own will be something that she will have to struggle with, it’s her nature, she won’t be changing it overnight and why should she? Both have to make adjustments then Virat may have to adjust to this part of her, I guess,

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Posted: 4 years ago

waiting for the update kalyani. ❤️❤️❤️

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