"Becoming the Perfect Shaberwal Bahu"!!! Shakhi Shaberwals OS - Page 4

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Posted: 5 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: AK_2010

Oh I so loved that she called out on his anger management😆 he needed that.

I think its gonna be a rock n roll journey the moment she steps into the house🤪 It will be fun to watch Devi's satta slip out of hands and have Kanchan and Gayatri breath freely.

I am over the moon after reading this! 😃

Ha ha thank you so much for this fascinating review. I am touched. Also I thank you for the patient reading. 😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

This was awesome!

Our debates champion will definitely rule not only shaurya's heart but thevwhole sabherwal mansion 😋

Indeed she will put across her point without disrespecting anyone and she has the capacity to be perfectly imperfect. Thank you for your feedback 😀
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Posted: 5 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Abhavi0821

You write really well !! Kudos❤️

Can’t wait for shakhi to get married and this to happen🤣

Thank you so much for your appreciation. Truly grateful 🙏 🙌 Do stay tuned.
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ariyatogether

Loved it

Liked the way Anokhi handled Sabherwal's😆

Thank you so much for your feedback 😀 much appreciated 😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Singhshrutiiii

The last lineeeeee

Ufffff❤️

Ha glad you noticed that 🥰🥰 I loved that line too. Thank you for your patient reading 🙂
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Posted: 5 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Tashaf_arshi

Devi ma ki satta khatre me hai😆

I enjoyed reading.

Ha ha indeed. Her throne is in trouble. Thank you for your feedback. Much appreciated 😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Anokhi though a serial "aastha" chanter is actually a quiet and sensitive girl. I really can't picture her being this sassy. So this is indeed a refreshing change. 😀

She challenged Devi for a debate competition 🤣. N that roti of all map sizes, I can almost hear myself speaking. 😝


Girl u'r one versatile writer. U'r equally comfortable writting dark stories and such light frivolous ones as well for our entertainment. 👍🙂 Do keep writing. 😀

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Posted: 5 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: deepshiii

Loved this OS a lot. Beautifully written🥰❤️

I liked how Anokhi explained Shaurya about the mess and how she’s scared of him hurting himself with his violent behaviour and anger👍🏼

Devi’s got a good one. She deserves this. It felt like "Yeh toh bas shuruat hai😂 aage aage dekho hota hai kya"🤣 and Shaurya’s proud of her lady love answering back and handling everything perfectly

Thank you so much for your constant appreciation. I am truly touched and grateful. I look forward to hearing your feedback so thank you for that. Do stay tuned ☺
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Posted: 5 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Coffee_Chips

Anokhi will definitely change the house of Sabherwals' once she starts making a place for her in Shaurya's heart Even he himself would be left dumbstruck 😆

This glimpse in your pov was an apt representation & I really hope she would be this blunt & straight forward. Well written & good job!

Thank you so much for your feedback. I am truly grateful for the support. Looking forward to hearing from you. I too hope she has the spunk to deal with the Shaberwals. Do stay tuned.
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Posted: 5 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Jennymyola

Nice OS! For a moment there at the end I thought Anokhi was going to remind Devi that she's a DIL of the house too 😂🤭

Ha ha I don't think she would have gone that far. She is spunky and sassy but not disrespectful towards her. She is just very upfront. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Looking forward to hearing more from you 😀

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