Rudhita OS Series|Last OS- Aye Dil Laya Hai Bahaar|Updated on Pg.26 - Page 16

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: rikara94

❤️ love you behna

Update is on the way. Stay tuned👍🏼

Sure🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago


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Posted: 4 years ago

Jyoti❤️👏

Saudamini😡

But at last they confessed with each other...👍🏼

They are together in everything....

Starting how ani realised and how bon took care of him...it was beautifully written...

Finally I am the one who commented first🥳

I need to see more of them...

Can we have savage bon in upcoming chapters.....


Jyoti you are really improving as a writer...👍🏼

All the best dear...

Keep growing...

Edited by RUDY575 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Lovely update. ❤️ Anirudh's speech during the confession, where he describes what she is for him is especially beautiful Continue writing. ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Jyoti,it was so so so emotional!

You awed me and how😳Brilliant👍🏼

Pehle mujhe bohot gussa aya tha Bondita pad, but tumne aise uske character ko banaya hain,i couldn't help but feel sorry , har bakht uske zehn mein sirf patibabu hi hain!And the best part is that voh khud maafi maang rahi thi, uska yeh haalat dekhkar, she was feeling guilty! That entire part has been written so well! Extraordinary writing👍🏼


And finally , they confessed!To be honest mujhe laga nahi tha pad paungi ki nahi,show ne sab bigaar ke rakh diya hain, but tuk itni acchi likhti ho, everything is so perfect ,well arranged and consolidated that you tend to keep going with the flow, it's that calm and beautiful ❤️ Saudamini se koi aur reaction ki ummed bhi nahi ki jaa sakhti, jealousy is in her blood!

In all, a very very interesting and emotionally uplifting chapter!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Ka_ta

Jyoti🤗

Res👍🏼

Bura mat mano 😳 pleaseee😳


To be unresed for sure,but only when my mind becomes receptive and my heart starts resonating with Anidita once againsmiley20

I won't read now ,my brain won't take something which I'm currently repulsed with!

Don't be sorry dear🤗 read whenever you feel like❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Tumhaare os series ne kya jaadu kiya

Jyoti jyoti bole matwaala jiya 🤣🤣🤣🤣


I'm literally in love with this os series and I don't know how much in love I'm ☺️☺️


Kya baat hai Jyoti tu lajawab hai ekdum kamaal hai aur teri os series ke baare mein kya kahoon ab shabd bhi kam pad rahe hain 🤪🤪


It was really amazing, wonderful , epic etc😊


I really loved this os very much❤️


And very much glad about Ani😳


He did very well to Mini and all the things he said were absolutely the best part of this os and Mini was well deserving for it


After doing this many disgraceful things to him she still considers herself to be his dost 😡😡


And Jyoti thanks for making justice to our sweetest Bon👍🏼👍🏼


BTW I SAW YOUR SIGGY AND I REALLY AGREE TO IT AS BON DESERVES SOMEONE WHO WILL LOVE HER NOT ONE WHO WOULD THINK HER TO BE A SO-CALLED ZIMMEDARI😡😡😡😡AND I WOULD ALSO SEARCH FOR SUCH A PERSON FOR OUR BON

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Posted: 4 years ago

Just woww..if only the serial wala anirudh was so perfect. This anirudh is amazing. He knows what he wants...Awesome update. Do write soon❤️🤗😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Jyotiiii!🤗🤗

What a beautiful piece of writing yar!👍🏼 Dil khush hogaya padh ker. 👏❤️Show mien jo bakwas chal rha hai, your stories are so beautiful that they take the reader in another world...jahan asal show ka koi bakwas na ho. 🤢

Yar mujhe woh buht sweet laga when he confessed 'their' love in the mandir. Somehow, it sounds very fantastical to me ke kisi ko propose ya kisi ka love confession kisi holy jagha per ho. 😳 Loved that part.

Saudamin ko tight jawab mila. 🤪 Good one.

All in all,wonderful writing and a very sweet OS. 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: jdr_26

Lovely update. ❤️ Anirudh's speech during the confession, where he describes what she is for him is especially beautiful Continue writing. ❤️

Thank you so much dear❤️ (what can I call you?😳)

Glad that you liked it...

Yup I will continue but for now I don't have any inspiration

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