SAIRAT SS: THE WEEKEND pt33-pg146 - Page 53

Originally posted by: emah04

Let’s make your story into a serial... I bet this would be no 1 on the top charts....

it’s a beautiful love story that’s taking it’s time to bloom...

brilliant

fatema - I feel like I enjoy writing this Sairat because I am not paid for it, like a hobby. Maybe if it was a job who knows how good it would turn out. Anyways ITV ke viewers are not the ones who read this 🤣

Beautiful update ❤, that makes my sunday more special with imaging sairat n their lovely moments 😊 ❤

Beautiful update

Ab in dono ko bas mauka chahiye kiss karne ka 😳

You have described their feelings & emotions very beautifully

Waiting for next part

Originally posted by: Remyavenkat

Thank you for the update. What happened t sai? Why she is so confused? Something going in her mind. Atleast in the drive she should have told Virat about her job. Why she is not telling? Also she said she will go to camp then she stayed totally confused. I didn’t understand why u wrote sai like this. Are you trying to show her emotional struggle that she is having before getting married ?

Hi Remyavenkat, you are confusing between Sai’s sense of independence that is stopping her from telling Virat about her job situation and her feeling when she chooses to spend time with him.
she is not confused about telling him, she doesn’t want to, becos for her, that’s her own thing. She wants to spend time becos she is attracted to him and that deep need is confusing her, but she puts it aside, because she can’t really help the attraction.

I feel that emotional struggle will be there for women who seek individualism above everything. Is it that easy to just completely let in someone? With Samrat, it was in a way easy, because he himself didn’t have those expectations from her, he wasn’t letting in either. So that relationship was more convenient than this one - with Virat, it’s more intense so there will be more push and pull. Virat gives more, but he wants more in return. He is not compromising in any way, and she wants what he can give, is not asking more and doesn’t really want to give more.

And of course if there is no struggle, there is no story 😆 so be patient. 😃

you are confusing between Sai’s sense of independence that is stopping her from telling Virat about her job situation and her feeling when she chooses to spend time with him.
she is not confused about telling him, she doesn’t want to, becos for her, that’s her own thing. She wants to spend time becos she is attracted to him and that deep need is confusing her, but she puts it aside, because she can’t really help the attraction.Got it Columbia. Thank you. Yes when I first I was totally confused I didn’t understand what is really happening.thank you for explaining.

I feel that emotional struggle will be there for women who seek individualism above everything. Is it that easy to just completely let in someone? With Samrat, it was in a way easy, because he himself didn’t have those expectations from her, he wasn’t letting in either. So that relationship was more convenient than this one - with Virat, it’s more intense so there will be more push and pull. Virat gives more, but he wants more in return. He is not compromising in any way, and she wants what he can give, is not asking more and doesn’t really want to give more. Yes u r right with samrat it was easy. He also didn’t say much. But with Virat it is totally different. Yes u r right he gives more and expects more. He pushes her more I think . She likes him also.

And of course if there is no struggle, there is no story so be patient. Sure will patiently wait for the story to move on. Thank you.

Both updates were brill... I loved how Virat opened up to her abit but she is still not there yet... their relationship is building slowly and you are writing it so beautifully... cannot wait for more

Originally posted by: columbia

fatema - I feel like I enjoy writing this Sairat because I am not paid for it, like a hobby. Maybe if it was a job who knows how good it would turn out. Anyways ITV ke viewers are not the ones who read this 🤣

Well I think you should get paid for writing because you do write so well... and they say you should do something you love and you clearly love to write... thank you for bringing this beautiful story to us

I really loved this update.

but I feel Sai hesitating to tell Virat about her job condition is going to definitely hurt Virat. I mean he had this gut instinct that she might be hiding something from him is spot on

weaving dubeys into their conversation shows how much you pay attention to detail in this story. There are no loose ends. They are an endearing couple. Although it would seem rushed to get married so quickly, it somehow doesn’t feel that way for them.

I hope no issues come up during the wedding. And I hope Samrat doesn’t ruin things

lovely update. these are so adorable with their banter. they really can’t keep their hands off each other, can they? virat is all into this relation but sai is still holding back. i understand that she is independent, but is it so bad to give in to the right person who will be there to walk along with you, support you in your battles? i hope sai passes this stage of hesitance and give into their relationship with whole heart because relationships only work that way . waiting for the next update.❤️❤️❤️❤️

Oh my my.....I couldn't visit the forum for 2 days and already 2 updates are there..🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩. Pretty AWSOME!!!🤩🤩 It's definitely worth the wait!!!!🤩

Soooo...the wedding is in a week's time (yayyyyyyyy🎊🎊🎉🎉) and I feel like this update is showing how both of them are preparing for their happily ever after in their own pace. Sort of like a count down towards the day they will fully become each others in every sense. But what makes this update more interesting is the development of that "pace".

Virat is trying his best to contribute his all to their budding relation, with his willingness to open up to her in both physical and emotional levels. Without any obstacles.The ease with which he let her know about his suspension and his reasoning behind him punching Samrat indicates that he has no qualms about opening up to her regarding any aspect of his life, let it be his job or his protective feelings about her. But what makes this more interesting is that while he is there all ready to move ahead, Sai is still lagging behind a bit due to her emotional hesitancy. Yes, she is also trying her best to give her 100% into their relationship and she is almost there, but something is holding her back from opening up to Virat fully.

And I feel like that "something" could be difference she feels in the relationship she had with Samrat and what she is currently experiencing with Virat. With Virat everything is more deep and intense coz he is expecting more from her. Coz he is expecting her to open upto him just like he is doing with her. Like when he refused to be nothing but her husband . But with Samrat, everything was easy and neither of them had no deep expectations from each other. And also, maybe in a teeny tiny corner, she could be also worried that her needs and wants might get the back seat. But when she overcomes this......they will be each other's in the truest sense....😍😍😍😍😍

And I also really liked the way you played the words "need" and "wants"🤩. It shows how step by step Sai is successfully treading through their relationship, without completing losing herself and her own identity.

All in all it was an awsome chapter dear. A great job done👍🏻. Now I can't wait to read the next update 🤩🤩.

Welcome back and Happy Writing ❤