Epi 195: Darr - A creep's story! - Page 5

Originally posted by: Abhyudaya

I agree in fact every story of Indian television starts with a very good concept but then later on due to the TRP race they all fall into the same category

I really hope there come a channel which actually works on creativity rather than TRP so that people can actually try to come up with you know such good stories rather than always showing you know old stories in a very new way like old wine in a new bottle

Shows with good stories and concept never got high ratings.

Same thing happened with IMMJ, it was going well in the terms of story and characters but makers took another route to get good numbers.....but still our show is much better than many shows and how much they'll show Vansh dumb, but he is way better than many other mls.

In most of the shows who are ruling the trp chart have extra martial affair, leads are getting married 100th time, two ladies behind 1 man, dumb ml, goddess like fl etc. (Sorry if someone got offended)

Sadly, there is no such channel in present but it can be in future.

Originally posted by: Abhyudaya

First of all thank you and tell me how are you I missed your comments in past updates and also what about the fanfiction I mean I couldn’t even see you over there I have sent you two links and I’m not able to see you even in one also so looking forward for that and coming to your comment....

I feel Vansh is scared second his past is not allowing him to embrace the fatherhood third is he is like, if he feel the happiness and something bad happens to the baby then he made not come out of from this loss at all

so I think somehow his fear is too much occupied him in such a way that he is unable to face that fear but hoping production house will come up with such a story or a track we are we do overcome his fear

Ishani Kabir and the rest of the house I have no idea how to comment on them at all I mean leave Kabir side he is turned into something else completely whom we are unable to connect with

obsession is also fine but do you saw Shahrukh Khan‘s movie Darr he is doing in the same way how srk do to Juhi Chawla but still we got connected with it however over here we are unable to connect with Kabir obsession at all and he is lusting over her and I don’t know whether it is okay to say last and obsession are seen

Abhyudaya; I am ok; thank you soo much for asking...am doing 12 hr work.days as I am considered "key worker"in UK so it means I have to go into work in hosp and all leave is cxx indefinitely during corona virus from mar 2020 till now ..last year had only 5 days leave allowed

I promise I will comment in depth on your other work...I have to do it justice as you and your co author have put an amazing amount of work on it

As to your daily analysis breakdown of epi I so look forward to it...you put a lot of insight into it and I really appreciate it.

Now as to Vansh, its great to see a role reversal of this kind for a character who is bitter and ruthless to the outside world but cares for those he loves..as to see this man emotionally and mentally tortured by the idea of impending fatherhood, not just can he be be a good father; can he break the curse bestowed onto him, will his child bear punishment for his sins ...and his yearning and vulnerability at the same time...this is a man at war with his demons....and actor RS doing great job.

Now as to his juvie scene...yes he did a lot for Ishani but I wonder what also contributed to making him this bitter man having to fend for himself in juvie was being his fathers son..in this case Vansh was paying the price for being the son of a mafia crime lord...little wonder then he worries about the future of his child.

Well there is an option..right in scene two or three; yep that far back Kabir told Rhiddima that Vansh runs a legitimate day business and mafia sideline undercover..

Well as Siya said...there is an option to retire from criminal life & turn respectable business man...is Vansh bold enough to let go of this business in order to give birth to the new? Does not mean we see a less able Vansh...just one that does not have shady business to his kingdom...now thats a legacy to leave

Come on, V, use your brain! Kabir is wearing the same clothes in which you chased him. And the physique! And, I know it would be useless to ask since we are already aware of the answer, but ghar mein ek bhi cctv nhi hai kya?? Ab to lag walo bhai. Tumhare ghar mein koi red gloves wala insaan mast ghum rha hai, aur tumhari biwi ko koi tumhare backyard se utha ke le jaata hai. How long are you going to rely on broken bangles and/or fallen earrings? Paise nhi hain to hum crowd-funding kar denge. Bas ek camera. Just one, please!

Thanks for the update abhy..it has become a habit now to come n read your update...i love your commentary in pink....

I have never liked this creepy psychotic kind of obsession..so am hating kabir!

Vrs's obsession had class...he is truly obsessed with ridz...obsession is dark ,controlling, demanding n consuming. VRS's obsession was elusive, compulsive and subtle....he was raging within, am sure he wanted claim ridz everytime when she was around, but he was calm around her...infact i just loved vansh's obsession 😍...viewers kept saying they want to see his obsession ...but we did see from episode 1 to 60...vansh wanted riddhima for himself...simple n straight...

Kabir is obsessed not with riddhima but with some thing which was once his n now belongs to vansh!!...kabir's anger and hatred is so twisted...he just cant ever be happy if vansh is happy...look at him..

he planted riddhima in vansh's life

Framed vansh for murder

Killed every person who crossed his way

Arrested vansh

Finally he has half of vr property n bloody diamonds..

Why does he want riddhima..because vansh is happy with her, despite all the terrible things that happened to vansh, he is at peace,he has found a woman who loves him selflessly!

This obsession of kabir is about vansh......whatever vansh has he wants it!

Originally posted by: Nephy

I agree...

@b-seriously its high time now that we come up with upgrade system of this trp system first of all becoz I still feel bad that even after having decent trps rangu made ph to scrap viva track.

And god knows how many loopholes we had is just becoz of these trps.

Kash someday here in india people could give more importance to creativity and unique concepts both in movies as well as serials and also audience could appreciate that rather than just going to some crap movies for their favourite stars.

Its both way street and I understand this,people in showbiz also for business but they should get a platform which can make them have their bread and butter and simultaneously will also allow creative things to come forward rather than just pressurising for numbers and also people need to appreciate somewhat different concepts.

See when we reach there.

Indian people mostly the aunties and all are still interested to see Wife saving husband being a doctor and lawyer not even studying about it. Somehow the mindsets have been set in that way. However, they're shows such as Anupama. I mean if you can read, just go through the Wikipedia and see. I mean people accepting it. Anupama taking divorce from her husband at age of 40 mostly because he cheated on her. She has 3 kids too.

So yeah, they are accepting and it all depends on how you are executing the plot. The execution is very important dear. It's not about the story and TRP - you can go ahead and show creativity but then you should able to strike the right chord with the audience with the execution method and here though they are showing family bonding, it's more or less of same other serial plotting. What's new? They should have shown how Mafia family will be also having some problems and all if they wanted to shoot in the house considering pandemic.

Originally posted by: Roudy1

@bold: definitely very soon

Because he will use her only to bring out Riddhima's parents truth

Ridhima parent's truth I don't it might affect Ishani much because she is not even feeling guilty about it all. She just wants her truth not to be disclosed by anyone.

But yes even today I feel that person who tried to harm is from Kabir side, not Chang. So the truth once she gets to know Kabir tried to kill her baby or something, then for sure it will hurt her badly.

Then she will realize where she went wrong

But by the time she learns the value of Vansh - better she lose him - His affection and love for her.

Originally posted by: Navdeep_08

Thanks for update

Abyudaya i saw daily but ur commentary is bang on

Coming to episode kabir creepiness 🤢

Thank god vansh ko kabir ka hint huya but use ishani mili call krne ko

Sia and dadi phi hain ghr main

But mije lgta he still doubt kabir even after lame excuses

and ishani tuje main kya bolu . Teri vja se vansh and riddhima lost their childhood and u are accusing vansh bhai

Why cant u understand he is ur brother . Usko phi khush rehna hai zindagi main . Saari umar bhai bhen nhi dekh skta vo .
but leave tum nhi smj skti . You and your kabir bhai make perfect jodi . Khush reh unke sath

As the promo said valentine week and 18-19 so story still need to be unfolded

Muje bs chayieye ki kabir ki achi dulayi o jaaye and ghr se nikhal do usko kohi

Welcome dear and thank you for liking the commentary :)

Kabir is lusting and that's really creepy. I won't obsession also. It sheer lust for her.

I'm glad Vansh had taken his chances to doubt Kabir and hope he continues it

Ishani yaar - seriously, I think very soon she will learn what Kabir tried to do with her in the past or something. I mean the biggest betrayal she will ever learn is from Kabir only. By the time she learns her lesson I want she lost Vansh - his affection and love for her.

I don't know why she is hell burnt on making him feel guilty for not giving time for her. As if she is giving time to him.

I think by 18-19th we might see Kabir obsession for Ridhima will be out before Riansh - I feel

Originally posted by: Neha_J

Yaar yeh Ishani....wtaf is wrong with this female.

Riddhu got kidnapped and looks like she was lying to save KAbir......matlab itni nafrat. How low can they (Ishani and Chanchal) stool....even if they don't like Riddhu, the fact that she got kidnapped by someone who is obsessed with her...and you're okay with it. Like are they for real?

I hate Ishani ....absolutely hate her. Kabbu is honestly better than her (minus the creepy vibe, abhi theek hai but I hope he doesn't go all mad over Riddhu).

Glad Vansh is doubting the right person, I have a bad feeling about Angre. Vansh might ask him to keep an eye and with Ishani/Chanchal already in Team Kabbu....God help them.

And I still feel, they introduced the pregnancy track way too soon...the current track minus pregnancy would have been killer.

Thanks for the update and your commentary as all ways

ISHANI - I don't know seriously what issues this girl has. I mean why she behaving like a jealous ex-girlfriend but not as a sister. I mean if she gives time for her husband is fine but the same thing if her brother does is wrong. How?

I'm glad Kabir is using her. You know what I want the most is Ishani should be tortured by Kabir somehow directly where she cannot tell what's happening with her to even her brother also. I mean that kind of mental treatment and betrayal she should get from KABIR and then she will realize how vital Vansh was in her life.

However, by the time she learns what Vansh is - she should also lose him. His affection and love for her.

Yeah, Vansh doubting Kabir, I'm happy and I would like to keep an eye on him so that he can see to what extent he had done the damage. Pregnancy is very soon but let's see how it is going taken forward. I still feel we might see miscarriage until unless the show is ending, we won't get to see a baby soon.

Originally posted by: Sunshine_nino

Ishani ke baare mein jitna bolo utna kam hai..... typical spineless b****...... Dum hai toh samne se waar kar.... Kabbu ke saath kahen haath milaye baithi hai😂😂😂😂 Obviously she is with Kabir in all these otherwise why would she lie so confidently.

Vansh galaa dabaa ke maar de dono ko😡

Ishani I want her to get tortured by Kabir. I mean she should do something to hurt Ridhima and Kabir should torture her in such a way that he should reveal what all he did with Ishani until now. He should put such mental pressure on her that, she won't be able to tell anything to Vansh and Angre. I want her to go through it.

Though sadistic I found, she deserves it.

Originally posted by: Drna

Shows with good stories and concept never got high ratings.

Same thing happened with IMMJ, it was going well in the terms of story and characters but makers took another route to get good numbers.....but still our show is much better than many shows and how much they'll show Vansh dumb, but he is way better than many other mls.

In most of the shows who are ruling the trp chart have extra martial affair, leads are getting married 100th time, two ladies behind 1 man, dumb ml, goddess like fl etc. (Sorry if someone got offended)

Sadly, there is no such channel in present but it can be in future.

Pandemic they might have changed the story. Ragini track itself they dragged for more than 100 episodes. But they could also show how Mafia families are from inside. They do face problems within families and how they are tackling them

They could have shown in-depth of it but they turned into something else. Vihaan was good but TT fans couldn't able to see it so much. I think if Vihaan was present, he would have seen things from a different view.

He would certainly know who is who and then attacked them.

Anupama is good. See if you see- affair is the same. But she asked for the divorce and thinking to do something on her own. Now, that's something new to watch for a woman at age of 40 or so.

So yeah it all depends on what way you are presenting creativity.

Creativity is accepted but it comes with execution.