ShaKhi Drabble Series (#5 on pg 11 up) NEW - Page 3

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Posted: 4 years ago
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omg..the second one is just❤️smiley27smiley27

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: mahiaana

Ayo tumhari nazar utarun. Tumhe nazar na lagy kisiki 😭🤧 kitni pyari ho..forum dead dead hein to lively banany ky liye stories and drabbles likh rahey ho. 😭😭😭 hayeee dil.to kv ko de diya hein. Kidney bhi ek sell karney ka plan hein business ky liye. Tum kalija lelo?? 🥺🥺🥺


Loved the 2nd one more. Aww poor shaurya bechare ka dil tutne mein hein. But I'm sure their story won't end here. Anokhi will definitely come back to him. May be events khatam honey ky baad akele milny ajaye. Aise thodi na woh chodke ja sakti hein apne shaurya sir ko.

simple and beautiful...

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Posted: 4 years ago
#23

Awww.

This one is truly very beautiful and heartbreaking. Loved how Shaurya let her go for her betterment.

And the last line......it just stole the show.

Please make one from Anokhi's POV about this.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: RaarA

Awww.

This one is truly very beautiful and heartbreaking. Loved how Shaurya let her go for her betterment.

And the last line......it just stole the show.

Please make one from Anokhi's POV about this.


Sure will do!

Thank you so much for the comments and the love!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Author's Note : This is the valentine's day special drabble. I dedicate this to all the members that helped me with the prompts and formulation of the story. Please leave feedback for more!




DRABBLE #3 Baatein kuch Ankahee Si






A lot had changed in the past two years. Anokhi is just months away from graduating, Shaurya has become the head of economics department.


Just like the changes in their professional life, their personal equation has also changed. You'd ask college students where was Anokhi? With Shaurya Sir they would answer.


Anokhi was not only the college topper but a pretty popular student as well now. She was probably the only undergraduate student actively involved in research projects with Shaurya being her mentor and co-author. Nothing made Shaurya more proud than Anokhi's accelerating new achievements.


There is nothing more fulfilling for a professor than to be known by his students' name. Recently, when he lead the college team for Annual innovation fest at Stanford University, he was known as Anokhi's professor. He never admitted it but he liked being called that. In fact, the bond between them has evolved so rapidly, they both have grown fond of each other. Anokhi responds likewise to his efforts by thanking him at every speech of hers.

" And lastly, thank you to one of the most supportive people in my life, professor Dr. Shaurya Sabherwal. It won't be wrong to say that I owe all my recent achievements to him. His commitment to his student is something I've not seen anywhere else, though I secretly believe he like the trophies more than he likes his students", the whole room let out a big laugh along with Anokhi.

Shaurya sat in his office at 1 am, smiling at the memory of her speech at Stanford while he looked at her photo, accepting the winning trophy. She truly was something else.



"What are you smiling at?", a voice echoed in the empty office. Shaurya put the photo in the drawer and closed it hurriedly, clearly startled by the voice. He didn't even have to think to know it was Anokhi.


"Smiling? Oh nothing, I just recalled something funny", said Shaurya. Anokhi seemed unconvinced but didn't prod him any further.


"You wait for two minutes and I'll gather all the books", said Shaurya. Anokhi was confused but then recalled he was talking about their brainstorming sessions at midnight in the library. He has literally lived in the college since he got promoted. Anokhi felt seriously bad for his situation. Tej sir passed away recently and all the responsibility was on Shaan sir and Shaurya sir.

Anokhi decided to do something about this. She informed him she wasn't at his office to call him for the brainstorming session, she hesitated but finally let it out that she was there to meet him. Shaurya was surprised at her admission, possibly a bit awkward but he sat down anyway and asked her to speak.


She was visibly tensed, almost scared. Shaurya sat down on the sofa, beside her and offered her a glass of water. "Anokhi, I see you want to say something but are hesitant to do so. Consider me as a friend and just say it", Shaurya egged her on. Anokhi's eyes grew wide at that but she said it anyway, "Sir I'm worried about you".


Shaurya felt guilty. Guilty because he should be worried that his student is distressed and not feel elated that she cares about him, thinks of him even outside college hours, like he does. He has started considering her more than a student : as his confidante, his friend.


"I saw Shaan sir as well as Aastha ma'am worrying about you and how you work all day. He was even saying you've not had breakfast since weeks. Is it true?


You are almost always in college, sometimes you sleep at th college lodge only. Sir is everything okay? Is anything bothering you?", she looked at him with such care, he just melted.


He let her know that he's fine, just stressed about work. She seemed more worried now and suddenly shot up from her seat and went out. Shaurya was left wondering if he said anything wrong. She emerged ten minutes later with a plate of food in her hands.


"Sir, I know you've not eaten anything today, I can sense it. That's why I brought some food for you. I hope I'm not out of my line. I just was worried because... because...


Sir please have dinner and I'll run the data through the software", she said. Shaurya wanted to ask why couldn't she say anything after because. His interest was clearly piqued.


Nevertheless he took the plate and they both sat in silence doing their own work.


Song recommendation related to Drabble : Baatein kuch Ankahee si

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Posted: 4 years ago
#26

Hayyy

Sooo cute drabble. Shaurya loves trophies more than his students 😁😁

But it's so heart touching how Anokhi care for him.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#27

Its so beautiful nd lovely

Loved how Anokhi took care of Shaurya at the end..wish to see smthing like this in the show♥️

Their growing fondness for each other is truely wonderful

Cont soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: RaarA

Hayyy

Sooo cute drabble. Shaurya loves trophies more than his students 😁😁

But it's so heart touching how Anokhi care for him.


Thank you! Oh that trophy line was thrown in to show how comfortable ShaKhi have gotten with each other.


It was a short write up for valentine's day. I'm doing a jealous, possessive Shaurya OS for valentine's day too. Please do check it out once I post it.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Ariyatogether

Its so beautiful nd lovely

Loved how Anokhi took care of Shaurya at the end..wish to see smthing like this in the show♥️

Their growing fondness for each other is truely wonderful

Cont soon


Thank you! I saw a request to show such small moments of them falling in love. This is why I wrote this drabble. It captures their care and intimacy for each other.


Be sure to come back for more, I'll update in the evening again.

Edited by Guneet80 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#30

why you killed tej..you could have killed chacha insteadsmiley37..

very nice drabble dear...

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