Story of the Decade | Chapter 13 by Bhavisweet03 | Pg 51 - Page 19

Awesome

Once bitten twice shy

Khushi is afraid of Arnav as well..

Hope he also understands and believes Khushi after knowing about Shyam

Update soon wonderful writers

Love

Vandie

Awesome Chapter Aparna

Thank you for writing about the scenic beauty about Nainital.

It reminded me of our stay overlooking the lake and the small terrace below. There was no Arnav painting there. sighs 😒

What a relief to have character that will help Khushi. Arnav got her the best person to help Khushi a motherly figure who he trusts and can help Khushi with her experience as a counselor. It may take time but she surely would help Khushi be at ease than she'd be around only Arnav or some help.

Neema has asked the right questions and should be able to get out some more information from Khushi for Arnav to investigate on.

It was a fantastic chapter simply loving the way the story is shaping up .The story has now shifted from Delhi to a more picturesque venue Nainital which also happens to be the place where Arnav’s secret home is. Arnav hopes against the backdrop of this beautiful hill station he will be able to convince kushi to share her innermost fears and secrets in this venture Arnav has sought the help of middle aged lady (Neema) who is more of a mother figure to him and incidentally she also happens to be a counsellor. Since she is a lady Arnav expects that kushi may be more open to her and just as how she has helped Arnav overcome his fears ,he hopes that she will also be successful with Kushi in allaying her fears.

In the days to come looks like the trio may develop a friendship bond. Hopefully Neema will be able to find out what kushi is hiding from them.

Waiting to know what happens next.

Fantastic chapter Aparna.

Now I get why Arnav took Khushi to Nainital.

It is really so nice of Arnav to run a home/ charitable institute along with Niharika to help people in need, who are orphaned or abused.

Looks like Neema is very a noble person.

I hope she can help Khushi heal and come out of her shell. I hope Khushi inturn can help her in helping other women who are abused like her.

Description of Nainital was very beautiful.

Just read all the parts. Super fantastic story so far. Looking forward to next part...

Originally posted by: ShiriFictionPen

Hey Aparna,

You made me fall in love with Nainital yaar!

I am glad there is a new character and mature character not related to Shyaam. An amazing continuation with a new entry I must say 😍

You made me hooked to the story ❤

Shri, dear!!

I've spent so many, many wonderful days there, that I know the whole town like the back of my hand... it is also the hometown of my best friend, so that's the biggest connection. I was so very delighted to see that I would get to write about Nainital.

I loved writing Neema! I always felt that if Arnav had a better relationship with Dadiji, all the mess would have been sorted long ago... so, I brought in my own version here! Glad you liked it...

Originally posted by: ssttuuttii

Res.

Aparna, your PM inbox is full... do something about that.

Meanwhile, let me read the chapter and get back with my comment 😳.

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Wow! This was such a beautiful chapter! ❤️

I liked how Nainital and this chapter have brought some much needed lucidity and peace to the characters and this story 😳.

Your description of Nainital in the very beginning was an indication of the pace of this chapter. Some may feel that nothing much happened here... but I think this was a good addition. We got introduced to a new character who is very important for Arnav. And something tells me that she will end up being integral to Khushi's recovery too.

After all, Neema is an experienced counselor and professional help is what Khushi needs at this point. Her worries regarding Arnav are very justified... she may have accepted his help in a moment of panic, but it would obviously be difficult for her to live alone with an unknown man... especially with the kind of history she has. So Neema is a welcome figure in this tale.

I like how we are shown that Arnav has tried to get help for his issues. Although he is not over his Pyrophobia yet, he has taken the first step and that's important. I hope that together all three of them are able to help each other out.

Looking forward to next chapter to see what happens on the walk. Will Khushi reveal her past and Shyam's role? She didn't seem willing to do so the last time... will Neema's presence sooth her enough to make her spill the secrets?

It was a Wonderful chapter Aparna! ⭐️ Thank you for writing this even when you have so much on your plate ❤️.

Love,

Stuti

Inbox cleared, Ma'am! 😃

I love Nainital and was ver chuffed to be able to write about it! I've not been there in a couple of years, and this was theraputic, really...

Very. very glad to be able to get back to writing in the middle of my crazy schedule... and i loved introducing a mature female figure who would keep Arnav grounded and help Khushi find her own feet!

And Neema, as I envision her, would remain a positive influence all through, with none of the daily soap drama and greyness of character later. She is a steady strong woman, equal to Arnav and firmly in his corner! ❤️

Originally posted by: Pinnkiswan

Haaye I am in love with Nainital....what a description 😉

Khushi was quite surprised to see this shade of Arnav. Already thinking about him haan. And also understanding him too😆.

Niharika hmm....quite a mature character and helped Arnav too. Maybe Khushi will also get help from her.❤ Their past meeting also explained quite well. And the bonding between the two, it was great....A good addition indeed....

And the concern of Arnav for Khushi....that was also amazing. Let's see what happens now 😔

Haah!!! its all your now, babe! Go have a ball with the new entrant... ❤️ I've always felt that for such a shrewd business man, Arnav would always look for good counsel, and had fun doing it my way here!

Originally posted by: Savera84

Nice chapter Aparna!👏

The continuation was done very smoothly.

An elderly woman who is not related to either Arnav or Shyam is what Khushi needs at this juncture. Neema might be able to find what was bothering Khushi.

But this Shyam is creeping me out. If he married Khushi, locked her in a house and tortured her for months (or years which we don't know yet), how did he manage to hide all this form Anjali and rest of the family?. Payal looks like an intelligent girl and Arnav is a ruthless business man. Would love to know more about Shyam's dual life and how he is duping Anjali and family. Or did he have an accomplice in the house?

Nainital is a beautiful place. Your narration of the town brought back some fond memories.

Waiting for the next chapter.

Cheers...

Thanks! I love Nainital and this was my way of making up for not being able to go the past couple of years... and Neema is here to help!

The creepo is here to stay as well! He is a psychopath and very well able to manage multiple lies and lives. It is my assumption that it is Payal who will figure it all out at home, even before Khushi opens up fully... let's see how the future writers take it ahead! 🥳

Originally posted by: renee.bee

Awesome Chapter Aparna

Thank you for writing about the scenic beauty about Nainital.

It reminded me of our stay overlooking the lake and the small terrace below. There was no Arnav painting there. sighs 😒

What a relief to have character that will help Khushi. Arnav got her the best person to help Khushi a motherly figure who he trusts and can help Khushi with her experience as a counselor. It may take time but she surely would help Khushi be at ease than she'd be around only Arnav or some help.

Neema has asked the right questions and should be able to get out some more information from Khushi for Arnav to investigate on.

I know!!! I love that place!!! Yeup, Neema is the connecting link between the two, ready to be the sane voice.

Also, it is her experience and perspective that will help Arnav trust Khushi and equip him to help her overcome the trauma.😊