Rudhita OS : You Bleed So We Exist - Page 3

Originally posted by: Toto123

U wont believe me...but sirf wahi select ho raha tha🤣🤣🤣

I dont know kyu...IF & its bugs

@Bold - was a pun intended ? 😳

Originally posted by: nims23

Rimi 🤗❤️

Just finished reading it.. I am mesmerized ..It’s beautifully written ... will write my detailed review later..

P.S. why did you ban Munia? 😆

I will wait Nima 🤗❤️

I banned her to get her attention 😳 She doesn't like reading my work 😳 She thinks I am good for nothing 😎

Originally posted by: ..RiMi..

I will wait Nima 🤗❤️

I banned her to get her attention 😳 She doesn't like reading my work 😳 She thinks I am good for nothing 😎

Are baap re yeh baat hai!!🤣🤣

I was feeling so bad for Munia.. I was about to give her a big hug 😆😆

P.S. Munia I am still sending a big hug for you 🤗

Originally posted by: ..RiMi..

I will wait Nima 🤗❤️

I banned her to get her attention 😳 She doesn't like reading my work 😳 She thinks I am good for nothing 😎

@Munnu Ye Rimi duniya ke saamne tumhara mazakh uda rahi hai..🤪

PS: Mujhe P banaya tha na tumlogo ne..Ab main waisi waali harkatein hi karungi🤪

Originally posted by: rikara94

Main res karu kya?😆

Thank God you did not reserve varna tu bhi gaali khaati 😈

Chal rahne deti hoon😆

Actually na I so wanted to give inline comments to each dialogue and each situation but that is not possible here. And abhi agar main kuch cheeje likhna bhool gayi toh?

The first thing I want to tell you is, you didn't disappointed us. Iss concept ko likhne ke liye himmat chahiye and you did it very well Rimi😳

Thank you so much Jyoti 😳🤗 This type of OS was requested a long time back, but never got the 'kick' to write it down 😆 promo dekh ke kick mili 🤣

The thing I like about the most is the way he made her understand in a very decent way. Being himself confused that how to react i this situation, still managed to explain everything smoothly....it's just wow👏

Actually we all might assume that Ani should be super comfortable with these stuffs but after all he is also just 22 and he has no prior experience so he needs to have some hesitation as well.

Should I say isse better example ho hi nai sakta tha iss concept ko samjhane ke liye. Hatts off to you girl. You did great job👏

Thank you so much jyoti..it was really the toughest part 😆

Though she had many doubts and questions but dheere dheere she will get all her answers and the way he said, I will always there to answer all her questions, that was❤️

Yes, kids are like that only, ek baar sunke unko sirf 50% samajh aata hai, then they come back later with questions and that is how these things should be taught to them.

The way you have portrayed it, your choice of words, every emotions and every dailogue.....everything is fabulous👍🏼👏

Thank you 🤗

Bb walo ko teri script hi bhej de main toh kehti hoon😆

Arre nai nai I know vo mujhse 10 times better likhenge 🤪

And tune kaha tha it's long...but mujhe chotu sa lga yeh...dhokha diya tune😆

Mujhe bohot long laga tha dekh ke 🤣

Chal enough of my bak bak, tata bye bye...waiting for the next one😳

I liked the bak bak a lot 😛

P.s. why munnu can't read this?

She is banned so that I get her attention 😭

OMG! Jyoti I am so happy to read you review 😳

Thank you so much for explaining your views in detail! It helps me a lot to know what people liked 😳

PS: I'll read your OS tmro I checked you PM 😳

Originally posted by: rikara94

I too was going to res....but inn sab ke res dekh mujhe sharm aa gyi🤣 or tere khauf ke karan commnt kr hi diya😆

Koi mujhse nai darta jyoti... meri warning ke baad bhi dekho first page poora Res hai 😭

Originally posted by: mnm13

bon ki cuteness dikha kar aur kitna mujhe buddhu banayegi

Why She is so cute😭

Anirudh be like- i have the same question sasuma 😭

Toh aap padhengi na Bon ki Maa?

Originally posted by: Scarlett_15

@Munnu Ye Rimi duniya ke saamne tumhara mazakh uda rahi hai..🤪

PS: Mujhe P banaya tha na tumlogo ne..Ab main waisi waali harkatein hi karungi🤪

Yes fifa...inhone hum dono ko jo title diya usko justify karna toh banta hai👍🏼

I will join u shortly😎

Originally posted by: Neh_anidita

I thought to put res.. 😆

first..fir socha chal chodh review hi likh de te hai 😆 le bhen padh le

Neh tu bhi res karti na toh mai gaaliyo ki bauchhar kar deti 😡

I am Out of words but have to tell you I love you 🤗❤️ Kash ki tu yeh Show likh de thi to I am sure haume bhehatareen scenario dekhne ko milte..

Neh apan log me se koi show likhta toh kya hota vo toh bol hi matt 🤣 I love you too Neh 🤗❤️

I love each and every single word of it without being ackward ,

Sachme? 😳 I love you 🤗

Tum ne jis tone main is poore Matter to depict kiya hai with sensibly and sensitivity Marvellous my dear. 👍🏼

Hmm thank you. *I am blushing *

Samne hoti to JOR ki hug kar leti aur ek kissi bhi de dethi ( P.S- me being overwhelmed after reading this)

Neh 🤣🤣🤣

I was actually invasioninng like main show dekh rahi hu I hope markers bhi esa hi kuch dekhaye show main how ANI will handle the situation and explain things to her in simpler way

Yes I am betting on Ani again.. let's see kya hota hai 🤪

And the way Ani ne portray kiya bon ko what is happening with her and handle ki bon ki condition and us ke daar ko and told her every thing in story fantastic choice of words and emotions are so apt 👍🏼

Bon loves stories no.. isiliye 😳 Direct bataane lagta toh bechari 12 year old dar nahi jaati kya? 😳

Ab is se jada na in bola jaraha . i am super excited to see this track now ab tera OS padhne ke baat to over the mountain ho gaya 😆

Me too very excited Neh 😎

Originally posted by: Neh_anidita

Hum ne marks de diye hai 🤣

tum Top kari ho distinction se 👍🏼

Thank you Neh I am relieved 🤣