Fictional Paradise CC #13 (IO) - Page 87

Good afternoon all....

Soujanya di...

Congratulations for being promoted to IF - DAZZLERS

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Originally posted by: Shivi72

Soujanya di...

Congratulations for being promoted to IF - DAZZLERS

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Thank you❤😊....

Congratulations Soujanya akka for the promotion 🥳

Originally posted by: Confused_Soul

Congratulations Soujanya akka for the promotion 🥳

Thank you❤😊

Hey all, hope you all are doing well. Dropped in as I wanted closure for something that was bothering me for a very long time now. The thing is, I'm planning to take off a few works I've written in the forum- namely Regrets, The beauty and the beast, Love You my incensed guy etc. I know at least some of you might be gasping and wondering why. I'm coming to it. All these works- they seemed like glorification of the character Siddhant to the teenager Roshni who wrote them. But now looking back, the young woman Roshni doesn't feel anything but pity and disgust to the character and writer both. I've unknowingly wrote something that was too toxic and the dim witted dumbass I was back then, I didn't realize what I was doing. Most of these works are sheer glorifications of patriarchy. Like Regrets, ask me now , I would never want a wife to forgive a husband who was literally indulging in martial rape, became the cause for her abortion and just had the justification of a broken childhood and separated parents. I can't buy it now! Coming to beauty and the beast, though the male glorification isn't that evident, there are few phrases that made me cringe at my own writing. Like the first scene where Siddhant meets Roli- he nearly threatens her of impregnating her - that's such a male ego thing and what cringes me more is that comes from a guy who was a doctor in the past. I seriously don't know what I was even thinking. Furthermore, Siddhant kissing Roli in frustration- yes, back then it felt like wow, so heroic, but now I can't help but fume at my way of thinking. Touching a girl without her consent is - gross. No justifications clearly. Don't even get me started about incensed guy- that's another piece of shit.

I know most of you might be thinking, what's she saying, she only wrote it! I know and I take the responsibility and apologize! Those scenes and might be a lot more of them were toxic. And now that I realize, as a writer im responsible for an apology, to myself and to my readers. I didn't have the brains know it back then but now that I've some (only some as I know,it would take me more years to be refined) I felt this urge to share it with you and apologize alongside asking you guys about taking down those works, if possible. I've been trying to do the same but it didn't help much. Anyone who knows about it more, please do share with me of how to proceed with it. I don't want more people to read the toxicity I had written knowingly or unknowingly. Apologies again folks!

Originally posted by: InToTheUnknown

Hey all, hope you all are doing well. Dropped in as I wanted closure for something that was bothering me for a very long time now. The thing is, I'm planning to take off a few works I've written in the forum- namely Regrets, The beauty and the beast, Love You my incensed guy etc. I know at least some of you might be gasping and wondering why. I'm coming to it. All these works- they seemed like glorification of the character Siddhant to the teenager Roshni who wrote them. But now looking back, the young woman Roshni doesn't feel anything but pity and disgust to the character and writer both. I've unknowingly wrote something that was too toxic and the dim witted dumbass I was back then, I didn't realize what I was doing. Most of these works are sheer glorifications of patriarchy. Like Regrets, ask me now , I would never want a wife to forgive a husband who was literally indulging in martial rape, became the cause for her abortion and just had the justification of a broken childhood and separated parents. I can't buy it now! Coming to beauty and the beast, though the male glorification isn't that evident, there are few phrases that made me cringe at my own writing. Like the first scene where Siddhant meets Roli- he nearly threatens her of impregnating her - that's such a male ego thing and what cringes me more is that comes from a guy who was a doctor in the past. I seriously don't know what I was even thinking. Furthermore, Siddhant kissing Roli in frustration- yes, back then it felt like wow, so heroic, but now I can't help but fume at my way of thinking. Touching a girl without her consent is - gross. No justifications clearly. Don't even get me started about incensed guy- that's another piece of shit.

I know most of you might be thinking, what's she saying, she only wrote it! I know and I take the responsibility and apologize! Those scenes and might be a lot more of them were toxic. And now that I realize, as a writer im responsible for an apology, to myself and to my readers. I didn't have the brains know it back then but now that I've some (only some as I know,it would take me more years to be refined) I felt this urge to share it with you and apologize alongside asking you guys about taking down those works, if possible. I've been trying to do the same but it didn't help much. Anyone who knows about it more, please do share with me of how to proceed with it. I don't want more people to read the toxicity I had written knowingly or unknowingly. Apologies again folks!

Roshniiiiiiiii where are you girl? Missing our group chit chats a LOT!😒

Coming to the topic, I can totally understand where it's getting from as I myself have faced the same when I happened to read my own works. There are some parts which I find crap now, though it was written by me. All I can say about it is, we were just way too childish back then and now we are slowly coming out of it.

But, I'm sad that you're taking off the beauty and the beast. You know it's one of my most favourites and I'm waiting for its updates😒

And I happened to watch DQ's Kali movie recently but didn't like it much, tbh. Your story Incensed guy is far better than the movie. Perhaps, I watched the movie with high expectations as I reminded of your FF but the movie didn't reach my expectations.

And about taking down the works, I really don't want you to do that coz I and others may want to read those later. Also, I don't think we have the option to delete threads. Maybe you can ask Mods to do so.

Btw, you're not gonna abandon your other stories, right? We're waiting to read your updates but you're not giving😭 try to get back with your updates pleaseeeeeeee

Originally posted by: Confused_Soul

Huhh... you came ....🤪

Where were you last two days

Good night all...