Originally posted by: tinafansYe to poora imagination ke sath I was reading... one to one dialogue I was imagining as a scene.
Waiting for more and do update fast.
Hahah.. Glad you enjoyed it.. Yes I'll update soon
Originally posted by: tinafansYe to poora imagination ke sath I was reading... one to one dialogue I was imagining as a scene.
Waiting for more and do update fast.
Hahah.. Glad you enjoyed it.. Yes I'll update soon
Originally posted by: udaymanyata07Love your ff, amazing writing. Love the way samrat supports sai and shut pp up. love the precap, can't wait for it..please update soon, eagerly awating next part.
Thank you so much, hopefully show me bhi Samrat Sai ki bonding strong dikhaye
Originally posted by: AK_2010Mast a mast๐
Bohot accha likha hai tumne๐ฅณ
I loved reading every bit of it โค๏ธ Update next chapter soon!
Thanks dear ๐
Devyani is a good girl na
Show me PP hume tadpaye aur IF pr writers usse ๐
Awesome update
Finally samrat is back
Continue soon please
Super precap
(Part 4)
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(Downstairs)
Samrat: Patralekha (loudly) Patralekha!!!
Sai: Sammy please don't
Samrat: Sai tu gappa basa, ye ab ek bete ka matter hai, stay away from it
Sai(in mind) : ye log kyu koi baat aram se nahi karte aur fir mujhe jungli bolte hai, jaroor ghar ka hi koi locha hai tabhi toh super cool Sammy bhi yaha ate hi chillane laga
Samrat: Patralekha!!
Kaku: kai zala Jeeva? Aise kyu bula raha hai tu Patralekha ko? Kuch hua kya?
Samrat: batata hu badi mami, Patralekha, meri absence me kahi sir takra gya tha kya tumhara?
Pakhi: kya bol rahe ho tum? Aur aise sabke samne mujh par chilla kyu rahe ho?
Sam: oh toh main tum par sabke samne chilla nahi sakta lekin tum iss ghar ke logo se sabke samne badtameezi kar sakti ho?
Pakhi: kya bol rahe ho? Maine kab ki kisi se badtameezi?
Sam: oh really? Tumne meri maa samaan Ashwini mami se badtameezi nahi ki unka apmaan nahi kia? Aree ho kaun tum jo unse aise baat karo? Kahin ki rani ho maharani ho kya ho? Biwi ho na bas meri toh himmat kaise hui meri mami se aise behave karne ki? Kya kisi jungle se ayi ho? Junglee mulgi ho jo aisa sab kia?
Pakhi: Samrat bas!! Maine koi badtameezi nahi ki, kisi ne jaroor tumhare kaan bhare hai, aur main janti hu kaun hai wo ye Sai na, issi ne chugli ki hogi
Sai: Pakhi didi, aap kyu mujhse itni obsessed hai har baat pr bas mai hi dikhti hu apko aur mai Shahaankuli toh hu nahi jisko idhar ki udhar karna acha lagta hai
Kaku: aye ladki chup
Samrat: yahi yahi same chiz aap idhar (points to Pakhi) boliye kyuki ye sunne layak kaam ye ladki kar rahi hai aur actually badi mami aap ya koi bada koi na hi bole toh acha hai kyuki jab ye itna kuch kar rahi thi tab toh koi kuch bola nahi isko toh ab bhi koi kuch na kahe toh hi acha hai, aur tum Patralekha, ek baat kaan khol kar sun lo ki jitni respect mai apni sagi aai ki karta hu utni hi apni sabhi mamiyo ki karta hu.. Koi bhi unko disrespect kare ye main bardaasht nahi karunga... Kya kaha tha tumne unko aaj ki wo sirf 12vi pass hai aur tum? Tum bhi bas sirf MA pass ho koi phd nahi kar rakhi hai tumne jo itna ghamand hai aur agar kari bhi hoti toh bhi tumhe ye haq kisne dia ki tum Ashwini Chavhaan, Chavhaan khandaan ki majhli bahu ki insult karo Patralekha Salukhe?
(Virat enters)
Virat: Jeeva!! Tu kab aya aur kaisa hai tu? Kya hua sab aise kyu khade hai?
Sam: aiye aiye son of the year ke vijeta Virat chavhaan, aiye, waise apni akal sath laye hai aap ya ghar ke bahar chod kr aye hai?
Virat: kya bol raha hai? Aur ye kya tareeka hai baat karne ka?
Pakhi: ye tareeka isse iski dost aur tumhari biwi ne sikhaya hai, jab se Samrat aya hai wo mere khilaf kaan bhar rahi hai uska
Sam: Enough!! Ek toh khud galti karti ho aur upar se dusro ko blame karti ho? Sai ne ek word ni bola hai tumhare khilaf, kyuki ab wo bhi hai toh issi ghar ki member na toh sach kyu hi bolegi, ye sab mujhe isse ghar ki ek matra sach bolne wali member yani Devi tai ne bataya, aur hum sab jante hai ki wo kabhi jhoot nahi bolti
Karishma (in mind) : uff aaj toh Samrat dada full on aag lagane ke mood me hai, dado sutho, bada bola karti thi na Pakhi bhabhi ab hogi unki bolti band
Sam: tum abhi ke abhi Ashwini mami ke pair chu kar unse maafi mango
Kaku: Samrat (Sam gives her angry glare) (kaku changes her sentence) bilkul thik keh raha hai Patralekha, abhi ke abhi maafi mango Ashwini se
Ashwini: Samrat, Jeeva chod na ye sab, ye nadaan hai ho gyi galti ab tu apna mood mat kharab kar abhi toh aya hai tu
Sam: bilkul nahi mami, apke ek bete ko apni aai ki insult se farak nahi padta hoga lekin apka ye beta abhi bhi apke liye hai, aur mere hote koi bhi apse badtameezi nahi kar sakta fir chahe wo koi bhi kyu na ho
Virat: matlab kya hai tera? Mai aai se pyar nahi karta? Unki izzat mere liye important nahi?
Samrat: ye toh tu bata, tere samne ye kal ki ayi hui ladki iss ghar ki bahu ki insult kar rahi thi aur tu bas sab dekh raha tha
Virat: aisa nahi hai Jeeva tu
Sam: pata hai kya? tu na chup hi reh, aur tum mango pair chu ke maafi
(Pakhi Ashwini ke pair chu ke usse maafi mangti hai)
Pakhi: mujhe maaf kar dijiye mami, maine apse galat tarah se baat ki
Sai: ye kya pakhi didi, insult kar rahi thi tab toh itta kuch bol rahi thi aur ab bas ek line me baat khatam? Nahi ache se mangiye mafi
Virat: Sai shant raho
Sam: Virat tum shant raho, Patralekha, sahi se mango mafi
Pakhi: main ab se aisa kuch bhi kabhi bhi apko nahi bolungi, aap mujhse badi hai aur apka samman karna mera farz hai maaf kijiye maine apko dukh pahuchaya
Sam: good, ab Karishma jao aur jake Devi tai ko bula kr lao
Karishma: ho dada
Kaku: Devyani ko kyu?
Sam: Patralekha ne sirf Ashwini mami ko hi nahi iss ghar ke kayi logo ko dukh dia hai aur iske liye wo sabse maafi mangegi
Pakhi: ye kya bol rahe ho? Kisse dukh dia hai maine?
Sam: jisse sabse jada dukh dia hai usko tum ache se janti ho, khair abhi mai Sai, Tai, Maasi, Karishma ki baat kar raha hu, tumne jaane anjaane unhe bhi kum nahi sunaya hai aur iske liye tumhe unse mafi mangni hogi
Pakhi: nahi mai aisa kuch nai karungi
Sai: kyu? Aapne hi mujhse kaha tha na ki Sai agar ghar ki shanti ke liye tum sabse maafi mang logi toh isme choti toh nahi ho jaogi toh ab aap kyu aise piche hat rahi hai, kya aap ghar me shanti nahi chahti?
Virat: Sai chup karo ab, kyu aag me ghee dal rahi ho, Samrat waise bhi Pakhi ko
Samrat: Bhabhi, teri bhabhi haina toh naam kyu le raha hai, bhabhi bol
Karishma: dada dost haina dono
Sam: honge lekin ghar ke bahar, yaha devar bhabhi hai toh wahi rahe, aur tu kya Sai ko aag me ghee na dalne ki baat kar raha hai, uske sath galat hua hai toh wo bolegi nahi, police me hoke victim ko chup rehne ko bol raha hai
Devi: ye Viru toh hamesha aisa hi karta hai ye gandi Pakhi Sai ko ganda ganda bolti hai aur ye Sai ko chup karta rehta hai, meri bechari Sai ko sab datate hai
Ninad: Devi bas karo, kyu Samrat ka gussa badha rahi ho
Sam: nahi mama mera gussa tai nahi balki ye baat badha rahi hai ki kaise ye iss ghar ki bahuo ki insult karti rahi aur kisine ne nahi roka par ab nahi, mango maafi Patralekha
Pakhi: main aisa kuch nahi karne wali hu
Samrat: Patralekha sabse maafi mango warna niklo yaha se abhi isi waqt
Virat: Samrat bas
Samrat: tu beech me mat bol
Virat: toh kya chup chap dekhta rahu?
Samrat: nahi dekha ja raha hai toh kamre me chadar taan kr so ja lekin Pati Patni ke bich bol mat
Sai: chalo kisine toh ye baat samjhi ki pati patni ke bich bolna galat hai
Pakhi: Sai!!
Samrat: Patralekha!! Maafi mango matlab mango abhi issi waqt
Kaku: Pakhi suna na Samrat ne kya kaha mango maafi
Pakhi: aap sab mujhe maaf kar dijiye
(Wo rote hue apne kamre me chali jati hai)
Virat: tune sahi nahi kia Jeeva
Sam: Sahi toh tune bhi nahi kia Virat...
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(Precap)
Sai-Sam bonding and Jeeva Shiva faceoff
Wah re wah but upload soon...
Ekdum mast...
Loved it...โค๏ธ
Do continue soon...๐
Read it all in one go. Love Samrat! His dialogues to Virat were pure gold.
Originally posted by: tinafansWah re wah but upload soon...
Sure.. Thanks
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