Mineil SS: "HOMECOMING" (Epilogue at pg-45 on 17.1.21)

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Anj01

@Anj_01

Sparkler

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Posted: 5 years ago

#251

Neil🥺😭 kitna dukhi hai bechara....jeena bhi nahi chahta😭

He is in severe depression. Ab pata nahi kaha jana chahta hai... Hopefully sab theek ho...mini sab theek kar de...agar mahima aur ashok unke parents nahi hote toh unhe attempt to murder ki saza honi chahiye thi😡

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 5 years ago

#252

Loved it dear

Awesome part & too emotional 🥺

I really cried 😢 feeling his pain & poor Mini couldn't do anything

He was hurt 💔 to an extent that he practically tried to commit suicide

I really don't know but yes Mini made a smart move to make him heal faster

To run away is no way but at times we need a break to start fresh

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🙂

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A_Cosmic_Dust

@Khushii11

Voyager

Posted: 5 years ago

#253

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa
Khushi ..update soon

tomorrow surely dear

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zalima

@zalima

Rocker

Posted: 5 years ago

#254

Kya senti kar rahi ho Khushi

MiNeil babies ko aise na tadpao

Acche se likha emotions ko

Dono MiNeil se connect kar sakte hain

Aur baarish jo role play kar raha start se bahut hi badiya hai

Baarish ne dono ko seperate kiya

Baarish me phir se dono ko ek saath lekar aaya FLAT mein

End mein ye baarish hi dono ko GHAR b lekar aayega

Edited by zalima - 5 years ago

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A_Cosmic_Dust

@Khushii11

Voyager

Posted: 5 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: su_94
Well written khushi. What's mini going to do ? Poor MiNeil 💔and this Mahima😡 this character is such a b*tch .

thanks alot dear...mini is not gonna give up Mahima😒

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A_Cosmic_Dust

@Khushii11

Voyager

Posted: 5 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: Krithzz
Yeah but now I feel mahima should be killed 😡 not punched😡🤣

and wht abt ashok now🤣

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A_Cosmic_Dust

@Khushii11

Voyager

Posted: 5 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: Krithzz
Going to be very tough for Mini . Tougher than what she had imagined 😭 I could imagine SouNoor. All those moments when Mini was trying to talk , touch, console him just like kuch na kaho moments

thanks dear....glad u could connect❤️

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A_Cosmic_Dust

@Khushii11

Voyager

Posted: 5 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa
Yet again emotional update. Neil is very scared to embrace the love again. Poor Mini . Its equally painfull ,scary to see Neil in such state. Waiting to see next move of Mini. Update soon.

thanks....

Glad u liked it

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A_Cosmic_Dust

@Khushii11

Voyager

Posted: 5 years ago

#259

Originally posted by: anjali0111
Neil🥺😭 kitna dukhi hai bechara....jeena bhi nahi chahta😭
He is in severe depression. Ab pata nahi kaha jana chahta hai... Hopefully sab theek ho...mini sab theek kar de...agar mahima aur ashok unke parents nahi hote toh unhe attempt to murder ki saza honi chahiye thi😡

arrehh🤣

Now if Mahima and Ashok even got mentioned in the story U girls would surely murder them🤣🤣

Yeah Etna saal k piled up emotions sufferings h...ayse hi thori jyegaa...but mini won't give up....

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A_Cosmic_Dust

@Khushii11

Voyager

Posted: 5 years ago

#260

Originally posted by: golden_aura
Loved it dear
Awesome part & too emotional 🥺
I really cried 😢 feeling his pain & poor Mini couldn't do anything
He was hurt 💔 to an extent that he practically tried to commit suicide
I really don't know but yes Mini made a smart move to make him heal faster
To run away is no way but at times we need a break to start fresh
Let's see what happens next
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 🙂

thanks alot dear...glad u liked it...