Story of the Decade | Chapter 13 by Bhavisweet03 | Pg 51 - Page 2

Wonderful Start Aboli. 👏

The way you portrayed the character just loved it. Both are having some tragic past. And Khushi is already married with shyam. It seems shocking for me. But i know for that also some interesting track may come in this chapter.

Would love to read the next part.😊

Hey, it’s a wonderful beginning... a very intricate description of Arnav’s struggle with his past and battle with his emotions.. Khushi, her fight and struggle is heart wrenching.... how will she save herself from the Monster of her husband, how will she fight back the abuse..? Can she save herself or will she lose the battle ?

Lovely first chapter. Both have a tragic life while for Arnav it is the death of his parents that looms over him. For Khushi it is her abusive husband who is still alive.

Wonderful job Aboli. The first part indeed was a masterstroke. Loved it very much. You have left enough space for other writers to fill up the characters 👍🏼

There are similarities between both Arnav and Khushi. Pain agony... affecting their mind... which they would fill up and heal each other for sure🥳

I liked that Arnav didn't repel her...accepting her presence in his home😛

Liked the bonding between brothers....and also the healthy love between Akash and his wife Payal.🤗

Loved it again❤️

Khushi is married to Shyam who is a psychopath both Arnav and khushi have troubled life his bcoz of the past where his parents died in a fire 🔥 accident and together they will find solace.

Amazing story. 👍🏼 👏👏

Please PM me when you update.

Stay safe & Take care

Originally posted by: Pearl_Oyster

Bookmarking!

I really really hope you decide to join as a writer too ⭐️.

I'm following Nameless Love and it is such a wonderful story 😳.

Check out this thread once -

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/5197657/story-of-the-decade-inviting-all-ipk-writers-announcement-on-pg-29

I hope you hop into this journey too .

Love,

Stuti

Woahh🔥 it was such an awesome chapter🥺 Every emotion/incident so perfectly defined🥺🌸❤️

Two broken souls with two traumatic pasts!

How will they come together to heal each other?

So intriguing!

Originally posted by: ssttuuttii

I really really hope you decide to join as a writer too ⭐️.

I'm following Nameless Love and it is such a wonderful story 😳.

Check out this thread once -

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/5197657/story-of-the-decade-inviting-all-ipk-writers-announcement-on-pg-29

I hope you hop into this journey too .

Love,

Stuti

Thank you for providing the link to the main thread, Stuti. It's a wonderful idea to bring together all the IPK writers for this decade anniversary. 10 years! It still feels like yesterday when I first saw the promo on the TV and knew I had to watch this show.

About contributing a chapter, I might think about it once I wrap 'A Nameless Love' which shouldn't be too long now. For now, I am fully onboard to join this initiative as an excited reader. 😃

Would read the first chapter soon and add my detailed comment. 😳