Tangled Ties - A Rudhita SS (prologue updated)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hii guys🤗

I am here with a new story on Rudhita. The concept is different though. There are many stories on Anirudh's dilemma about their relationship in future, even I have written one on it too. But I thought of writing about Bondita's dilemma.. This idea struck me so thought to give it a try..😳


I have updated the prologue. Do tell how it is????





Tangled Ties





Prologue



"Ye kya ho raha hai mere sath.. Esa toh pehele kabhi nehi hua tha.. Sab itna ajeeb lag raha hai, ab kaise bahar aun mein in sab se???", And Bondita Roy Choudhury sat exhausted in her bed with confusions raging in her mind.


"Ye sahi nehi ho raha.. Manti hun patibabu dost hai mere, hum sab kuch share karte hain ek dusre se.. par phir v mein unhe pati ki tarah kaise dekhu?? Pata hai galat nehi hai yeh.. Par mujhe sahi bhi nehi lag raha." And she felt embarrassed even thinking this.




Life was never simple for both of them. They were surrounded with hurdles at every step but now the upcoming hurdle was more complicated because it was not about anyone else, it was about them.. Their relationship.





Trilochan kaka sighed from a distance watching the couple, indulge in some conversation with each other and said to himself, "kab samjhenge yeh dono.. Tulsipur kya inhe toh pure desh ki chinta hai magar khud ka, apne jiban ka nehi.. Pata nehi kya hoga in dono ka. Inko bhi samjhna chahiye na k yeh ab bache nehi rahe. Bahu bhi toh utni umar ki hogayi hai k pati patni k rishte ki samjh hai usse.. Shaadi ko ab 8 saal ho chuke hain, par apne rishte k bare mein toh koi fikar hi nehi hai indono ko..", And he sat there helpless not knowing what to do.






So how it is??? Liked the concept???

What you all think about Patibabu's pov?? 😆


Sab batanaa plot kaisa laga... Please😭

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TK12345 thumbnail
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nice concept sana👍🏼

Continue karna pakka..😳

I suggest yaha patibabu ko confused mat dikhana...dono confuse rehenge toh bechare kaka pagal ho jayenge😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Sana... You got me excited for this❤️

I wanna read this jaldi jaldi! Update soon!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Haaaye so cute

Suno tum isme Ani ko confused Matt rakhna jaisa toto ne bola🤪 Bas Bon delimma me rahe Ani ko toh 8 saal pehle se hi sab clear hai🤣


Jokes apart, jo bhi socha hai jaldi update kar😳 FS kya hota hai Four shots?

Chaaro saath me update kar de please🤣🤪


Waiting ☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Very interesting concept Sana😊👍🏼 have not come across any story which shows Bon’s dilemma...

I was waiting to read one more story from you... and here you are with a new story.. great!! desperately waiting to read the first part

Don’t make us wait so long :))

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is coming across as something really unique and realistic.Bona fide 👏!Thanks for bringing forth such a practical and spot on scenario amidst all the monotonies of the present bb and revitalizing me👍🏼❤️🤗

Hope Bb soon regains it's lost spark like your stories☺️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nice one fo carry on with part 1 want to see how story unfold of bondita and her patibabu

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Bht bht bht badhia hai Sana!👏

It was high time for a story on Bon's dilemma...

Thank you for planning and writing this!😳

Bejhijak continue karo... Eagerly waiting

Tuma story padhibaku bohut ichhuka mu☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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A plot that actually has Bondita in a dilemma? 😲 That’s interesting 😊


Most stories have her very clear that she loves her pati babu but here, it is actually weird for her 😆 Lagta hai Ani ko kuch zyada hi mehnat karni padegi yahan. I can literally imagine Bondita being weirded out when Ani tries to romance with her 😆


Excited for the story! Update quickly ha 😃

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Apsanaaa! 🤗 This is beautiful! Please next update jaldi se dena.. 😳 Cant wait to read the whole story.

And buddy, very well written. 👍🏼❤️ Shabash! 🤗

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