Ishq mein Mar jawan : An os

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This is how I wrap it up 🤣



Ishq mein marjawan


"ye sab tumse he to shuru hua tha or tum se he khatam hoga" Ridhhima said pointing the gun at Kabir

"Tumhara dimaag kharab hogya h?" kabir gritted his teeth

"Dimaag to us din kharab hua tha jis din tum meri zindagi mein aye the, ye sab Vansh ya Ishani ya Anupriya ki wjh se nahi Kabir ye sab tumhari wjh se hua h" she screamed. Vansh was looking at them through the TV screen sitting in his room. Ahana was sitting behind him

"Do you think she will shoot him?" Ahana asked

"I am sure" he smirked

"What? This would be mess" she reasoned

"Let's wait and watch" he said


"Meri wajah se? Ye sab tumne kia h, Tum to bhot pyar krti the na mjhse to achanak se kisi or se kese kar bethi?" Kabir shouted

"Han karti the Kabir, bhot pyar krti the" she said sobbing. Hearing this Vansh has clenched his fist.

"Par wo pyar nhi fareb tha.. Sacha pyar kya hota h wo mjhe Vansh ne sikhaya" She said and vansh had to accept his heart melted for a second

"Ach? Kya fark h mjhme or Vansh m Ridhima?? Mene tumse pyar ka dikhawa kia? Wo to usne bhi kia. Mene tumhe dard dia? Wo to usne bhi dia Ridhima. Mene tumhe dhokhe m rakha wo to usne bhi rakha Ridhima" he said and smirked

"Tum bebkoof ho Ridhima or bebkoof he rahogi" he added as he laughed

Ridhima tightened her grip on the revolver and gulped

"Tumhari bakwas sunne ka time nhi h mere pass" she said

"Or na mere pass" Kabir said as he pulled out his revolver from the pocket

"Tum mere pyar m pad k sab bhul gai, yaha agai vansh k khilaf saboot jutane, yaad h Ridhhima mene bhi tumse kaha tha Vansh ko marne k liye par tumne saaf inkar kar dia tha.. tum m insaniyat the Ridhima, is insaan ne to tumse tumhari insaniyat tak cheen li" He laughed and Vansh dropped the glass from his hand. He has been shocked would be an understatement

"Ahana, tum turant jao Angre k sath and tell him to bring the back up" he shouted as he moved towards the store room



"Kabir, I am sorry" She said as she pulled the revolver and closed her eyes tightly

"Sorry bhi bolti ho or jaan b leti ho, ye to sahi baat nhi h janeman" he smirked making Ridhima gasp in horror and confusion. There was no bullet inside it? She looked up at Kabir holding the gun

"Tch. Tch tch bechari Ridhhima" Kabir laughed

"Wese manna padega, Vansh is very smart" He said

"Vansh vansh nhi chahta tha mai kisiko maaru or isliye usne.." she said biting her lips with happy tears "wo bus, meri pariksha le raha tha" She added

"Bullshit" Kabir shouted

"Tum sach m emotional fool ho" he said seriously

"I can't belive it Ridhima" he chuckled

"What?" She asked seriously

"Can you see the camera behind you?" Kabir pointed

Ridhima turned and spotted the camera

"My love, Vansh is smarter and cruel than you think or imagine" He said

"Ek teer se do nishane karna chahta hai wo" he laughed

"Excuse me? Tum.firse mjhe vansh k khilaaf bhadka rahe ho? Firse mjhe alag krna chhte ho usse, tumhari sachai samne agai h Kabir" she said angrily

"Ridhima my love, think about it, plan kitta tagda h na, tumhe bina bullet wali revolver de k yaha bhejna when Vansh knows ki I am a cop" He said grinning. She looked at him perplexed

"He wanted me to shoot you and all of this is being recorded so he will have a proof. Ek teer se do nishane, tum bhi out or mai bhi, what a plan" he clapped. Ridhima gasped, her mouth wide open

"Vansh esa.." she started but choked on her own words

"Kar skta h" he whispered coming closer to her

"Ek kam kr skti ho tum Ridhima" he said tapping on her shoulder. She looked at him, her face pale, her kohl smudged

"Snatch the gun and kill yourself, wese bhi ab bacha kya h zindagi m tumhari? Kis k liye jeeyogi?" She said poutinng

Ridhima looked at the gun in his hands and closed her eyes remembering the sweet and romantic moments with Vansh and how it all had been a lie. She sighed and took the revolver from his hand and put it on her head.

"Ridhima" Vansh shouted

"Darwaza kholo" he roared

"Bus vansh, bhot ho gya, in sabko khatam krne ka time agya h" Ridhima shouted

"Ridhima gate kholo, let me talk"

"Nahi vansh, yaad h mene kaha tha is ghar mein sab mjhe chot pohchana chahte h? Is Ghar m he nhi is puri dunia m mere naseeb m chot k alawa kuch nhi likha" she said sobbing.

"Riddhima" he kicked the door opened and looked at her, revolver on her head

"Keep it down" he said cautiously

"Nhi Vansh, tum dono k beech m kya h m nhi janna chahti, na m tumhare maksad ka hissa banna chahti hu, tumhe ek dusre k sath Jo Krna h karo, par mere kandhe pe bandook rakh k aj k baad koi nahi chala payega, kyuki aj akhiri bar ek bandook chalegi, bus akhiri baar" she said as she pulled the trigger and the world collapsed.

"Ek teer se do nishane"

She laughed, she had shot Kabir, in the head.

She moved forward to stand in front of the man she loved, still sobbing.

"Oh my god Ridhima I am so sorry, I am soo..Aaah" he moved his hand to his chest winching in pain as he looked at the blood oozing from his heart.

"Tumhe to dil pe he marna tha na vansh, warna afsos rehta" She smirked as she touched the spot and entagled her other hand with his pushing him to the wall. He looked at her on the verge of dying

"Tere ishq mein marjawan" she sang as she put the revolver on her heart, closed her eyes and pulled the trigger.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow.....this was like brilliant....😎😎😎 wah Riddhima kya kaam kiya hai.... 3no khtam....❤

and yea i agree....idiots khud ek dusre ko face nai krte....uske kandhe pe rakh ke bandook chlate rehte hai 😐😐😐🙄

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What the actual......😲

She killed all if them😆👏

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Kaam tamam 🤣

Maidan saaf 🤣

Bullseye 🤣

Kya kahu me 🤪choose the perfect one 🤪

Nice 👍🏼

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Well-done sneha🤗☺️.... This is the best way to stop the torture 😂🤣

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👏👏

I really want this to happen

Awesome dear

I feel this can be chosen as 3rd point too

I will cheer for this

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And thus ends ImmJ2, with a bang. Hope they dont get reincarnated into Immj3

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Originally posted by: SnehaSneha

This is how I wrap it up 🤣



Ishq mein marjawan


"ye sab tumse he to shuru hua tha or tum se he khatam hoga" Ridhhima said pointing the gun at Kabir

"Tumhara dimaag kharab hogya h?" kabir gritted his teeth

"Dimaag to us din kharab hua tha jis din tum meri zindagi mein aye the, ye sab Vansh ya Ishani ya Anupriya ki wjh se nahi Kabir ye sab tumhari wjh se hua h" she screamed. Vansh was looking at them through the TV screen sitting in his room. Ahana was sitting behind him

"Do you think she will shoot him?" Ahana asked

"I am sure" he smirked

"What? This would be mess" she reasoned

"Let's wait and watch" he said


"Meri wajah se? Ye sab tumne kia h, Tum to bhot pyar krti the na mjhse to achanak se kisi or se kese kar bethi?" Kabir shouted

"Han karti the Kabir, bhot pyar krti the" she said sobbing. Hearing this Vansh has clenched his fist.

"Par wo pyar nhi fareb tha.. Sacha pyar kya hota h wo mjhe Vansh ne sikhaya" She said and vansh had to accept his heart melted for a second

"Ach? Kya fark h mjhme or Vansh m Ridhima?? Mene tumse pyar ka dikhawa kia? Wo to usne bhi kia. Mene tumhe dard dia? Wo to usne bhi dia Ridhima. Mene tumhe dhokhe m rakha wo to usne bhi rakha Ridhima" he said and smirked

"Tum bebkoof ho Ridhima or bebkoof he rahogi" he added as he laughed

Ridhima tightened her grip on the revolver and gulped

"Tumhari bakwas sunne ka time nhi h mere pass" she said

"Or na mere pass" Kabir said as he pulled out his revolver from the pocket

"Tum mere pyar m pad k sab bhul gai, yaha agai vansh k khilaf saboot jutane, yaad h Ridhhima mene bhi tumse kaha tha Vansh ko marne k liye par tumne saaf inkar kar dia tha.. tum m insaniyat the Ridhima, is insaan ne to tumse tumhari insaniyat tak cheen li" He laughed and Vansh dropped the glass from his hand. He has been shocked would be an understatement

"Ahana, tum turant jao Angre k sath and tell him to bring the back up" he shouted as he moved towards the store room



"Kabir, I am sorry" She said as she pulled the revolver and closed her eyes tightly

"Sorry bhi bolti ho or jaan b leti ho, ye to sahi baat nhi h janeman" he smirked making Ridhima gasp in horror and confusion. There was no bullet inside it? She looked up at Kabir holding the gun

"Tch. Tch tch bechari Ridhhima" Kabir laughed

"Wese manna padega, Vansh is very smart" He said

"Vansh vansh nhi chahta tha mai kisiko maaru or isliye usne.." she said biting her lips with happy tears "wo bus, meri pariksha le raha tha" She added

"Bullshit" Kabir shouted

"Tum sach m emotional fool ho" he said seriously

"I can't belive it Ridhima" he chuckled

"What?" She asked seriously

"Can you see the camera behind you?" Kabir pointed

Ridhima turned and spotted the camera

"My love, Vansh is smarter and cruel than you think or imagine" He said

"Ek teer se do nishane karna chahta hai wo" he laughed

"Excuse me? Tum.firse mjhe vansh k khilaaf bhadka rahe ho? Firse mjhe alag krna chhte ho usse, tumhari sachai samne agai h Kabir" she said angrily

"Ridhima my love, think about it, plan kitta tagda h na, tumhe bina bullet wali revolver de k yaha bhejna when Vansh knows ki I am a cop" He said grinning. She looked at him perplexed

"He wanted me to shoot you and all of this is being recorded so he will have a proof. Ek teer se do nishane, tum bhi out or mai bhi, what a plan" he clapped. Ridhima gasped, her mouth wide open

"Vansh esa.." she started but choked on her own words

"Kar skta h" he whispered coming closer to her

"Ek kam kr skti ho tum Ridhima" he said tapping on her shoulder. She looked at him, her face pale, her kohl smudged

"Snatch the gun and kill yourself, wese bhi ab bacha kya h zindagi m tumhari? Kis k liye jeeyogi?" She said poutinng

Ridhima looked at the gun in his hands and closed her eyes remembering the sweet and romantic moments with Vansh and how it all had been a lie. She sighed and took the revolver from his hand and put it on her head.

"Ridhima" Vansh shouted

"Darwaza kholo" he roared

"Bus vansh, bhot ho gya, in sabko khatam krne ka time agya h" Ridhima shouted

"Ridhima gate kholo, let me talk"

"Nahi vansh, yaad h mene kaha tha is ghar mein sab mjhe chot pohchana chahte h? Is Ghar m he nhi is puri dunia m mere naseeb m chot k alawa kuch nhi likha" she said sobbing.

"Riddhima" he kicked the door opened and looked at her, revolver on her head

"Keep it down" he said cautiously

"Nhi Vansh, tum dono k beech m kya h m nhi janna chahti, na m tumhare maksad ka hissa banna chahti hu, tumhe ek dusre k sath Jo Krna h karo, par mere kandhe pe bandook rakh k aj k baad koi nahi chala payega, kyuki aj akhiri bar ek bandook chalegi, bus akhiri baar" she said as she pulled the trigger and the world collapsed.

"Ek teer se do nishane"

She laughed, she had shot Kabir, in the head.

She moved forward to stand in front of the man she loved, still sobbing.

"Oh my god Ridhima I am so sorry, I am soo..Aaah" he moved his hand to his chest winching in pain as he looked at the blood oozing from his heart.

"Tumhe to dil pe he marna tha na vansh, warna afsos rehta" She smirked as she touched the spot and entagled her other hand with his pushing him to the wall. He looked at her on the verge of dying

"Tere ishq mein marjawan" she sang as she put the revolver on her heart, closed her eyes and pulled the trigger.


CV's read THIS and kissa hi khatam karo😈😈😈😈

Yeh Riddhima ka torture nahi dekha jaata ab😕


Amazing OS 😍😘😍😘

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Precap dekhke mere dimaag mein same aya🤣


Brilliant update 🤣 Sab khatam🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Seriously a very nice ending👏

Keep writing

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