A story or the truth? Rudhita OS I Part 2 uploaded on Page 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: ..RiMi..

Oh God Alif 😭

Itna emotional Os 😭 me cries 😭

Saudami ki bachhi teri toh 🤬

Kyu ki vo aisa 😡

Doosra part update kar fir kya hua 😭

Thank you Rimi, ha 2 part aur ayenge, aur next wala shayad thoda aur emotional hai😭.

Sudamini is always mahakhalnayika😡

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Posted: 4 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: listmist

Rula diya alfu😒😭

You are brilliant re👍🏼

It's so interesting😲 i want to know what happen next.. Pleas next part jaldi de😭

Thank you Ash! 2 parts aur hai, elaborate kiya hai maine bohot acche se😉

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: mnm13

Omg 😲It was baby bon with whom sauda did this😡

Then again she can do it in real like she doesn't have a heart so it's possible for her🤢

Nice os but it's very short 😆

It leaves you with the curiosity to know what happened next😳

Part 2 likh dalo 👍🏼

Munia, thank you! Ha likh dala. 🤗

Suadamini se yahi umeed hai sabko😡

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: RekaC

An interesting and unique one Alif this OS is SoudaMini here is innovative 😳 You have stopped it at such a shocking part that I will be banging my heads of what could be the next??? Please try to extend it and give the remaining soon Alif 🤗

Yes, next part is quite emotional ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prit_007

Lovely Alif 👏

The idea you used to show all this to Bondita through the natak and Mini behind this is appreciable👍🏼❤️

I want you to continue this please how the truth affects little Bon and how Ani manages to get her out of this shock and pain❤️

Thankyou pritz, i can write so beautifully because tu mujhe itna inspire karti hai❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Shrabana99

1st of all Thanku alfu for this os..❤️ I always thought kya hoga jab bonu ke samne ayega uski marriage ka sach, kaise ayega samne.. & the way you took natak theme I just loved that.. Part 2 jaroor likhna yaar where both reconcile.. Piliiizzzzz.. 😳

Shabha, honestly ye sachai childhood main hi aajani chaiye bhaar. Thanksyou and yes 2 parts aur likhe hai❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Alfu, my behena this is so beautiful and intriguing... It's really one of the best plot.. And you penned it down so beautifully...😳👍🏼


Tbh, I had the same plot in my mind a month ago and I had planned to write TS on it but couldn't make it due to lack of time.. But I am so happy that my behena did it for me.. Love you for this❤️❤️


But it's too short re.. Now please do continue it.. Wanna know how Anirudh will handle the situation.. How will he regain her trust back? Will little Bon able to trust him again?? Please continue it behen..


I am always selective in reading ffs... I always select the stories having content, a good message, emotional, tragedic one rather than romantic ones.. And I always prefer yours as it's subtle and intriguing to read... Please continue behen.. Will wait.


(Ps: I always wanted something like this to happen before leap.. I want this to happen before Mini's exit as her last plot.)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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PART 2


Anirudh rushed with an unconscious Bondita in his arms. He didn't care about anyone, but that little soul. After reaching the haweli, where the doc was already present. Somnath had already informed Bihari about Bondita's health, and bihari kaka immediately had called the doctor. Anirudh placed her on the bed in the nearest room, and the doctor began checking. Kaka, Binoy, Somnath everyone around were broken seeing the life of Roy Chaudhary Khandan like that. Anirudh wasn't in the state of mind to think anything or do anything. What he wanted was to hear that "Patibabu " from Bondita's mouth.

'Sambhalye da, agar app himat kho denge to Anirudh ko kaun sambhalega."

"Binoy, akhir hamare bahu aur bete hi kuy? Sab theek ja raha tha Durga Maa ke ashirwaad se lekin uss aurat ne sab bigad diya. Agar hamari bahu ko kuch hua, to Sudamini zinda nahi bachegi. " Kaka was so angry and hurt. At one moment he wanted to finish that lady but the second moment he thought about Bondita's health and decided to deal with Suadamini later. Whereas Somnath and Batuk were with Bihari Kaka and Koyli.

"Bihari kaka, boudi theek hojaigi na?" Batuk asked with tears. Bihari and Koyli had no words which could assure Batuk that everything will be fine.

"Ye sab uss suadamini ki wajah se hua hai. Main unko nahi chodunga." Somnath roared in anger and was going to leave when he was stopped by Binoy and Kaka.

" Som pagal hogai ho kya? Abhi hamara dhayan sirf bondita ke taraf hona chaiye. Sudamini se baad mein lad lenge." Kaka agreed to Binoy and stopped Som from doing anything.

"Bihari, Anirudh kaha hai?" Kaka asked.

"Malik, wo bahurani ji ke kamre mein hain."

Anirudh, entered the room slowly. He wasn't alive, his mind, soul, heart everything was dead. He was a lifeless man. He entered the room slowly and switched on the lights, and the first thing he saw was the coconut phone on the bed. He walked a little nearer to the bed, and took the coconut phone in his hand. Tears were continously flowing from his eyes. His eyes searched around the room, but he wasn't able to find the peace that his room had before. Her softoys were placed on the study table. Her durga maa ki murti was also there. Her each and every thing was kept on its place but something was yet missing. It was her presence. There, the doctor had informed that due to excess mental harassment and shock she was unconscious and most probably would gain her consciousness by morning. Koyli and Bihari had decided to stay near bondita the whole night. There Anirudh, within no time, broke down into tears. He fell down on his knees and started crying. It was the pain of seeing what bondita was going through.

He wanted to feel her presence, so he just tightly hugged her saree and cried his heavy heart out.

BONDITA, PLEASE MUJHSE BAAT KARO. MERI BAAT SUNO. BONDITA!

Kaka and binoy noticed everybit of what happened now. They wanted to console him, but weren't able to.

Kaka couldn't see this, so he walked towards his mandir to pray for the family. Life is weired. At times its as sweet as honey but it takes a second for the destiny to change everything!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Patibabu

No baba, i have 2 parts more coming up!. 🤗

Arrey waaah!!!💖💖💖Itni khush khabri!Daer kiss baat ki!Kar do update fataak se🌹🌹❤️
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Too emotional Alif 💔 Could feel the pain of Aniruddh with your words.... Waiting for next updates too

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