Ghum Hai Kisikey Pyaar Meiin

SaiRat FF: Somebody to you (Part 5 page 7)

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hi everyone, mai bohot time se Sairat and Samrat pr FF likhne ka soch rahi thi toh let's see aap sabko kaisa lagta hai ye plot, feel free to share your thoughts and suggestions :) 



Plot:-


Sai and Virat are in Mumbai to meet Virats mama ji (because of his fake illness), yes it was Shivani and Ashwini's plan to send them on "honeymoon" And of course humare sairat jane ko taiyar nahi the toh ye mama ki bimari ka bahana lekin unhe nahi pata tha ki unn ki lives kya turn lene wali hai.... 


One day, 

Sai road cross kar rahi thi aur tabhi ek bache ko car se takrate hue dekh wo usko bachane gyi aur usko bachane koi aur aya.. Wo koi koi aur nahi balki Ziva yani Samrat tha... 

Shuru hua dono ki dosti ka safar aur fir Sayi ko pata chala apne new friend se apna ek aur rishta, uske jeth (husband's elder brother) ka... 

Samrat ghar wapas aaya lekin shiva ka ziva nahi wo toh Samrat ne kafi pehle hi door ja chuka tha... 

Kya Sai jod payegi Ziva aur Shiva ke toote rishte ko? 

Kya Virat kabhi samjh jeet payega apne bhai ka bharosa fir se? 

Kya Samrat aur Pakhi kabhi de payenge apne rishte ko mauka? 

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Do comment guys, would love to know your thoughts 😇✨

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Posted: 3 years ago

Interesting.. Continue Soon...

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Posted: 3 years ago

okay. finally a story where we can expect some contribution from samrat and of course the ruined relation between two brothers.

Let's hope Sai will heal the wound and get tgese brothers back together!

Brothers and Sisters are blessing from the almighty. Losing them is a big NO.


I'll be waiting for this story progress.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Interesting concept... Please update soon 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

I always wanted to read something with sai n Samrat's bond and your FF, is exactly showing the bond I wanted to read!! 

Sai-samrat friends Samrat cold shoulder to Virat and Sai as the intermediary!!!


Would love to read further, update soon!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Thanks everyone for encouragement, I will update soon and I've just realized that there is a story with same name, so I'm sorry for the title and I'll change it 😇✨

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Posted: 3 years ago

This is awesome.. Sai will decrease the differences between Samrat and Virat!!!

Yay..

Continue sooonish.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 1


(Mumbai) 

(Sai was crossing road) 

Sai: uff ye Virat sir bhi na waise toh zimedari zimmedari aur bacchi bacchi karte rehte hai aur abhi dekho mujhe akele bazar bhej dia arre aisa kon karta hai? Anjan sheher hai mai bhi itni masoom aur bhej dia akele, mana maine ladai ki thi aur bola tha ki mai handle kr lungi but khud bhi toh sochna tha na unko aur (suddenly wo ek car ko ek bacche ki oar jate dekhti hai) 

Sai: arre bache!!oye piddi!! Laal topi hato raste se!! Arre ye baccha sun bhi nahi raha 

(Wo bacche ko bachane ke liye kud jati hai aur bacche ko dhakka de deti hai lekin tabhi usko feel hota hai ki usse bhi kisi ne khicha aur fir agle hi kuch seconds me zameen pr giri hoti hai aur uske samne lambi beard and hair wala ek admi hota hai) 

Sai: ye kya kia? Giraya kyu mujhe? 

Man: toh kya gadi ke niche ane deta? Aur tum pagal ho kya? Gadi ke samne kaun kudta hai? Janti suicide crime hai? 

Sai: arre break maro zara.. Mai marne nahi bacche ko bachane kudi thi

Man: bacche ko bachane khud bacchi kudi, wah!! 

Sai(remembering virat ka bacchi wala taana) arre ye tum ladko ki dikkat kya hai? Jab dekho tab ladkiyo ki age pr comment karte ho? Mtlb kya ha kya? Ab agar hum girls tum ladko nahi men ko uncle uncle bulaye toh jab dekho tab bacchi bacchi dimag kharab kar ke rakh dia hai

Man: oh hello kiska gussa utare ja rahi ho mujh par? Thanks bolne ki jagah sunaye ja rahi ho jiska bhi gussa utar rahi ho bechara jhelta kaise hai tumhe? 


(Sai was about to reply but noticed something and that man also noticed something) 

Duo: arre tumhe toh chot lagi hai! Mujhe chot lagi hai? Arre ye toh choti si hai but tumhe jada lagi hai! 

Sai: ek second ye sath me bolna band karo, chot lagi hai toh aas paas kisi clinic me chalke dressing kara lo

Man: chot toh tumhe bhi lagi hai toh sath me tumbhi dressing karao


(At Clinic) 


Sai: Suno thanks and sorry

Man: koi baat nahi aur main bhi sorry yunhi chilla dia, waise chillane se yaad aya ki kon tumhe bacchi bulata hai jo itna bhadak gyi tum? 

Sai: mere husband

Man: husband? Lekin tum toh abhi bacc (sai gives him deadly stare) matlab kafi young ho

Sai: yeah I know.. Anyways I'm Sai

Man: I'm sa..umm..Jeeva, mera naam Jeeva hai

Sai: well nice to meet you Mr. Jeeva 

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So, how's it? Comment karke batana zaroor 😇✨

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Posted: 3 years ago

Wow loved it..❤️

Waiting to see such bond between Sai & Samrat...

Continue soon...

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Posted: 3 years ago

Wow Nice update ♥️♥️

    Continue soon....