||Calm Amidst The Storm|| A SaiRat OS - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
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I am just gonna say one word about this...

Beautiful❤️ ❤

Please write more

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#13

Hey niya it was beautifully penned down!!!!


In all the chos, noone wondered about virat's emotions!!! D one he was relying on turned her back and the one most unexpected came to his rescue!!! It was great to see how an immature girl who gained maturity overnight was becoming his peace!!!


Superb it was!! Loved it!!


Just a request would like to read more in the same story as continuation!!! With Virat realising his feelings and then making sai realise as well!! Would also love to see Samrat returning with giving cold shoulder to Virat and Sai being their cupid!!


Jiva and shiva's emotions in ur words would be a treat to read as you have a great grip on emotions!!!!❣️❣️

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Posted: 5 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Ambii

The way you penned Virat's inner turmoil ❤️ absolutely beautiful ! Pls continue if possible . Would love to see how a potential relationship develops from here.


Thank you so much for your lovely feedback🤗

I'm glad that you liked it!

Since this is an OS, I don't think I will be extending it, but I'm planning to write an FF soon. Hopefully you'll like that too😳

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Posted: 5 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: I-Am-SherLOCKED

OH MY GOODNESS, Niya! This is breathtaking stuff, truly! ❤️ It captured Virat so perfectly and the breakdown scene was just 👏

Love the understanding between them, it came through brilliantly.

Please continue writing!


Heyyyy!!! Thank you so much babe! Your comment just made my day! 🤗

I'm so glad that you liked it.

With your sweet words of encouragement, I definitely feel like writing again😳

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Posted: 5 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Blackwind

Its beautiful❤️😳...please keep doing the good work... looking forward for more


Thank you so much for the lovely comment love🤗

This made me so happy😃

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Posted: 5 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: ByunBaekhyun

No one actually put emphasis on what was Virat feeling. His inner storm. A storm that was cracking him down inside. He couldn't cry his heart out. Because he couldn't find a proper shoulder to cry on.

So happy to see Sai becoming the anchor of his boat.


Keep writing babe! You are amazing♥


Thank you so much for the amazing feedback!🤗

I'm so glad that you liked it.

This review just made my day😃

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Posted: 5 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Anu0517

Wow it's just amazing...❤️👏

Do write more...😊


Thank you so much babe🤗

Your positive comments make me want to write more😃

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Posted: 5 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: MeetPremeer

Beautifully penned down. It was a joy to read such an interaction.


Thank you so much for this amazing comment love🤗

I'm really happy that you liked it!

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Posted: 5 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: rinku95

Awesome update

Can’t wait to read more updates from you


Thank you so much dear🤗

I'm really happy that you liked it!

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