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Posted: 4 years ago
#31

It's superb yaar. Pehle toh you know main khud hi aisi ek thought soch rahi thi k naagmani k ilawa kuch aur aur patthar hai, I mean Naagmani, Gandhak, and ek aur patthar jo uss Tilasmi jungle mein hai, yeh sab ek ho jaaye toh woh patthar jiske paas hoga woh dunia mein sabse shaktishaali hoga. Tumne toh mera dimag padh lia yaar! Kaise?????

And baaki parts bhi bohat mast and interesting tha.. Veer Mahir highlights hai kuch bhi kaho. And Veer Brinda ko point kar k Arre yeh mujhe maarna kyon chahti hai yaar? 🤣


Waiting for next part 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Dwipanita

It's superb yaar. Pehle toh you know main khud hi aisi ek thought soch rahi thi k naagmani k ilawa kuch aur aur patthar hai, I mean Naagmani, Gandhak, and ek aur patthar jo uss Tilasmi jungle mein hai, yeh sab ek ho jaaye toh woh patthar jiske paas hoga woh dunia mein sabse shaktishaali hoga. Tumne toh mera dimag padh lia yaar! Kaise?????

And baaki parts bhi bohat mast and interesting tha.. Veer Mahir highlights hai kuch bhi kaho. And Veer Brinda ko point kar k Arre yeh mujhe maarna kyon chahti hai yaar? 🤣


Waiting for next part 😳

Even I was bored to hear about nagmani in everyone season 🤣I wanted them to give some importance to other things but kuch hua nahi 🤣looks like we share common dream land 🤣 one thing I always miss in naagin season is getting previous season characters as that will add flavours to it. But naagin main budget and dates ke wajah se hotha nahi hai.😆main toh free main dal rahi hun 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
#33

Once again.... amazing yaar...

Mahir and Veer bonding is just too good. Just loved it.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nagvasi: pranam adi nagin.. pranam maha nagrani Bela.. Aap dono ko naag lok se bulava aya hai.. naag lok par bahut badhi musibath aan padi hai..
Bela and bani looks at each other..
Bela: Hum aathe hai..
Nagvasi takes his naag form and leaves to naglok..
Bani: hume chalna chahiye..
Bela: haan chalo..
Mahir: hum bhi ayenge..
Veer: haan hum bhi chalenge..
Bani: woh naaglok hai tum dono nahi aa sakthe..
Mahir: maine kaha na hum ayenge toh ayegnge..
Bela: theek hai mahirji.. lekin naglok main jane ke liye aap dono ko ye pehan na padega and she holds her hand and two maalaa of datura appear infront of her..
Veer: ye kya hai..
Bani: ye dathure hai.. isse pehan ke tum dono nag lok main safe rahoge..
Veer and mahir wears it..
Bela: ab jo bhi hoga jab thak hum dono na bole aankhe math kholiyegam.
Veer: theek hai..
Mahir: okay..
Bani and bela holds veer and mahir's hands and they make circle(veer->Bani->bela->mahir->veer) and they close there eyes and ask them to do the same thing..
They use their power to create a portal and jump into it..
Veer and mahir gets scared and both scream.. bela and bani holds their ears..

Mahir: bela tum ho na mere sath.. phirse se sath main marenge
Bela: ji mahir ji main yahin hoo..
Veer : gharwali mujhe khoove mainn dhakka toh nahi de diya😂
Bani: shut up veer.
Mahir: waise tu kyun dar raha hai.. tu toh cheel hai ud saktha hai.. 😂
Veer: main toh apni biwi ki bewafayi ke gham main bhool gaya ki main cheel hoon..
As soon as veer felt that they are about to hit the ground he opens his wings and saves them from falling on the ground
Mahir:main margaya kya 😂 as felt no pain on landing..
Bani and bela opens there eyes and sees veer holding all..
Veer slowly drops them on ground. And smiles..
Behir thanks veer and veer looks at bani 😁
Veer : tum toh thank you bologi nahi 🤭
Bani ignores him..
Bela and bani takes her naagin roop..
Bela: ye ithna shant kyun hai..
Bani: kya patha.. aisa lagtha hai kuch bahuth bura hua hai..

They see vish running towards them

Vish: pranam mahanagrani.. pranam adi nagin...
Bela: vish ye sab kya hai.. ye kya hua hai naglok ko..
Veer: ye kaun hai ?
Mahir: ye vish hai bela ki dost.. kafi zehareeli naagin hai ..tum toh door hi raho isse.

Veer keeps quiet..
Vish: bela.. khoonkhar cheelon ne humpar hamla kar diya hai..
Bani: kya ?
Veer: kiske isharo par..
Vish: tum kaun ho.?
Veer: ye zarrori nahi hai.. kiske isharon par unlogone hamla kiya hai..
Vish: woh log kuch markat ka naam le rahe the..

Bani and veer realizes that it's all markats plan to destroy naglok..
Veer : kaha hai woh cheel...?
Vish: woh sab mandir ke pass hai.. vikrant usse lad raha hai..
Veer :chalo jaldi..
All follows vish..
They see that cheels are attacking vikrant inspite of being weak he Is still fighting.. when a cheel was about to make an attack which would have taken away vikrant's life..
Veer screams..
Veer: ruko!
All cheels stop... vish runs towards vikrant who was about to fall down..
A khoonkar cheel comes in human form..
KC: tum kaun ho and laughs... And orders other cheels to continue
Veer: maine kaha ruko! Veer screams in anger..
KC: hothe kaun ho tum!
Veer: he comes to his cheel rajkumar form with the black robe and wings.


They are forced to bow down..
Kc: hame maaf kar dijiye rajkumar.. hamne aapse gustakhi ki hai..
Bela,mahir,bani,vish and vikrant are so shocked to see this..
Veer: kisne kaha ye sab karne ko..
KC: markat..
Veer: kyu karna chahthi thi woh ye..
Kc: unko nag lok ko khatham karna tha..
Veer : par kyun..
Kc: kyunki unko kuch aisa khas cheez yaha milne ka soochna mili hai..
Bani relaizes that it's nagmani!
Veer orders them to leave before he kills them all..
All cheels run away..
Mahir comes and keeps his hands on veer.
Mahir: tu toh rajkumar nikla 😁 mujhe toh patha hi nahi tha ki meri biwi mahnagrani hai aur mera bhai cheel rajkumar.😁
Veer smiles..
Bani is still shocked as well as drooling over veers rajkumar roop.. 😁

Bela calls out for vikrant..
Bela: vikrant tum theek ho?
Vikrant: haan ruhi main theek hun..
Bela orders vish to heal vikrant..
Vish uses her powers and heals vikrant.
Veer: waise ye vikrant kaun hai..
Mahir: woh bela ka pehla pyar tha lekin ab woh uska dost hai..
Veer : like dhabewala?
Mahir: dhabewala?
Veer: chod ye batha isne bela ko dokha diya tha? 😁
Mahir: haan phir sudhar gaya..
Veer : wohi toh.. mera bhi dhabewala bani ko dokha de raha hai.. ye naag sab dhokebaz hai..
Mahir: aur naagin?
Veer: naagin toh heart liver kidney sab hai and smiles 😁😁

Mahir smiles..
Mahir: is vikrant se door rehna thoda gusse wala hai 😂

Veer : oh okay..
Vikrant sees bani
Vikrant: pranam adi naagin.. Mahir tum yaha?
Mahir goes and hugs him.😁
Vikrant: kaafi miss kiya maine tumhe..
Mahir: maine bhi..
Vikrant: ye kaun hai?
Bani: ye mera pathi hai..
Vikrant: aapka pathi ek cheel rajkumar hai? 🧐
Bani: haan..
Vikrant thinks: ye naagraniyon ko sirf nagon ko chodke baki sab dikthe hai shadi ke liye.. 😁

Bela: kya hua vikrant aise has kyun rahe ho..
Vikrant: kuch nahi bela.. 😁
Mahir: soch raha hoga ki ye nagraniyon ko nagvasi chodke baki sab dikthe hai shadi ke liye..
Vikrant gets shocked: tumhe kaise patha🤣

Mahir: uthna toh jantha hun tumhe ki tum kya sochte ho 🤣
Bela and bani gets irritated but he was right 😁
Veer stares at him..

Bela tekls them that it's time for them to leave..
Vikrant insists them to stay tonight..
Bani tells bela that lets stay.

Scene moves towards nagmandir..
Vikrant: toh tum ye kehna chahti ho ki markat nagmani ke peeche hai..
Bela: haan Vikrant..
Vish: iska mathlab ye hai ki markat phir yaha pe hamla karega..
Bani: zaroor karega..
Veer: unko yaha se door rakhna bahuth zaroori hai..
Mahir: lekin kaise?
Bani: mere pass upay hai.. she tells them inorder to keep cheels away put border with magical fire on it..
Maine kisi kitab main padha tha ki cheelon ko jalane se unki maut hotji hai
Veer knows which book is this..
Veer: karlo uss kitab ka istemal😑
Mahir: veer shant ho ja.. idea bura nahi hai..

Bani: she handsover a vibhooti and asks them to put it on the naglok border.. ye sirf unko nuksaan oahunchayega jo naglok ko nuksaan pahunchana chatha hai..
Veer feels glad that it will not kill him.
Bela to Vishrant.
Tum dono yahi rahoge.. naag lok ke raksha ke liye.. kuch bhi bura hojaye.. hame khbar karna..
Vishrant: theek hai bela..
They send them off.. and all 4 lands into cheel mansion 😁

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: AliChase

Once again.... amazing yaar...

Mahir and Veer bonding is just too good. Just loved it.

Thank you 😁

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Behir and vani reach cheel mansion.

Mahir: yar bahuth thak gaya hun.. aur bahuth neend bhi arahi hai.. he takes bela to a room which was given to them by veer.

Mahir puts hand of belas shoulder and walks with her..

Veer thinks how romantic he should try that..

Veer looks at bani..

Bani: sochna bhi math ( as she already seen veer feeding her in dhabha)

Veer: arre waah tum toh bin bole samajh gayi 😀

Bani gets irritated and about to leave veer puts his hands around her shoulder..

Bani stops and beats him with her hands..

Bani: nikalo tumhare haathon ko mere kandon se..

Veer : theek hai.. ye bolo na tumhe kamar pe mere haath chahiye.. 🤣 he holds his waist..

She feels a jolt..

Bani: nikalo isse.. mere kamar se..

Veer : toh khande par rakhne do..

Bani : nahi..

Veer: toh kamar pe rakhne do and he keeps his hands on her waist again

Bani holds his hand and keeps his hand on her shoulder in order avoid those frequent jolts.

Veer smiles as he knows how to convince her.. 😀

On other hand behir reach their room..

Bela: mahir ji aap kya aise waise bathe sikhathe rehthe hai veer ko

Mahir: arre maine kya kiya sach hi toh bola..

Bela: kya sach bola aapne ki vish kaafi zehreeli

Mahir: haan hai naagin jo hai..

Bela: aur vikrant gussewala hai..

Mahir: aur kya woh bath bath main mujhe marne ki bath kartha tha..

Bela smiles..

Mahir: dekho tumhe bhi patha hai woh sab sach tha..

Bela tries to escape..

Mahir: ab toh tum bhagna chaogi.. kyunki main sahi tha tum galath thi..

Bela: mahir ji main galath nahi thi..

Mahir:tum galath thi

Bela: nahin..

Mahir holds her waist and pulls her closer...

Mahir: tum galath thi bela..

Bela: mahir ji nahi main galath nahi thi..

Mahir goes closer and closer..

Bela gets shivers she pushes him and runs into bathroom..

Mahir: are yar bela..

Vani's room

Bani starts looking at moon..

Veer who was sleeping suddenly wokes up and sees bani standing near window.. veer goes behind her and stand next to her

Veer: kya hua sweetheart..

Bani: kuch nahi

Veer: pareshan ho..

Bani: nahin..

Veer: phir ?

Bani : yahi soch rahi hun kal gufa main kya hoga..

Veer : kuch nahi hoga main hun na gharwali..

Bani : aur tum waha kya karoge..

Veer: tumhari raksha.. ek pathi parameshwar ki tarah..

Bani scrathes her forehead..

Bani: tum so jao..

Veer: kyun

Bani : aise Behke behke bathe karne se accha so jao..

Veer: theek hai.. ja raha hun.. bye.. good night..

Bani cleans her nails..

Veer: main sach main ja raha hun..

Bani: cleans table..

Veer : main sach main ja raha hun..

Bani : arre bhai jao na..

Veer: aye.. bhai bolke sare mood ki aisi ki taise kar di... Ayindase mujhe bhai math bolo.. you can call ashiq.. lafander.. lover.. enemey.. veeraanshu.. veer kuch bhi.. lekin bhai nahi..

Bani : looks up .. hogaya..

Veer sees her eyes and gets scared..

Veer: theek hai jatha hun..

Bani goes down to get some water..

She finds bela there..

Bani: tumhe bhi neend nahi ayi?

Bela: haan.. ye soch rahi thi ki kal gufa main hoga kya..

Bani: main bhi.

Bela: kahi nag lok par koi sankat toh nahi mandra raha

..

Bani: isi ki chinta toh mujhe bhi khal rahi hai..

Bela : let's hope for the best..

Bani: haan..

They bids good night to each other and goes to their room.

They wake up early morning..

Veer sees bani getting ready.. on the other hand mahir sees bela getting ready..

Veer: ithni subah subah kaha ja rahi ho..

Bani: baba ke pass...

Veer : ithni subah kyun..

Bani; main aur intezar nahi kar sakti..

Veer: main bhi chaltha hun..

Mahir will also insist bela that he will accompany her.

Bela agrees..

They reach the place where they can see a cave which is at the top of the hill..

Mahir: yar hame chadke jana padhega?..

Veer takes his cheel roop and flies..

Mahir : arre yar ye cheating hai..

Bani and bela can not use their power as they think mahir will be left alone.. so they climb with him..

Veer comes flying sits on mahirs shoulder.. 🦅

Mahir : ek toh khudka wazan utha nahi pa raha hun upar tu bhi baith ja mere upar.. 🤭

Veer takes human form and laughs at mahir..

Veer sees all are tired.. all are about to faint..

Veer mere pass ek idea hai..

Bani: kya..

Veer: kya tum

bela ki naag roop ko pakadke mere bahon main bethke mere sath udh sakthi ho

Bela says we should agree kyunki der ho rahai hai..

Bela: but mahir ka kya..

Mahir looks at them with shock🥺..

Next scene we see bani holding a white snake and veer carrying bani and flying and reaching the hill top..

Bela: mahir?

Veer: abhi leke aatha hun..

Veer goes down..

Veer: baith ja mere godi main 🤣

Mahir jumps on him..

Veer: abey woh shanti rakh.. baithne ke liye bola tha nachne ke liye nahi..

While flying mahir kisses veer's cheeks and says thank you chotu🤣

Veer says main chota nahi hun.. main satyug se hu yaha

Mahir: oh I see..sorry.. thank you bhade bhaiyya..

veer smirks

They all reach hill top.. 🤣

Bani looks at veer carrying mahir..

Veer: kuch aisa waisa math sochna mera chota bhai hai..

Bela smiles..

Mahir: tum kyun muskara rahi ho..

Bela : kuch nahi..

Mahir : kuch toh hai..

Veer: andar chale ab baki baath badhme..

To be continued 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Vani and Behir reach the cave and sees that realizes that there is no one inside.. and it's like a khandar.

Veer: iske liye ithna mehnath kiya

Bela and bani enters into the cave and suddenly everything gets changed..

They see it's a cave filled with fire torch..

They follow the torch..

The reach dead end..

Mahir: arre yar ithna suspence create kiya aur mila kuch nahi.. 😑

Veer : wahi toh ye naagino ki story hi kharab hai 😑

Mahir: hain na ..mujhe bhi yahi laga😒

Suddenly a voice comes out of the wall of the cave.

Voice: pranam adi naagin.. pranam mahanagrani..

Veer: ye kya sound toh arahi hai lekin picture kaha hai.. 🥺

Mahir: kya patha koi chupke baitha hoga dar ke mare. 🤭

Bela looks at them and ask them to keep quiet.

Voice: main jantha tha ki aap ane wale hai.. main ithne salon se aap hi ka intezar kar raha tha

Veer: tujhe kya lagtha hai.. ye kalyug se hai ya satyug se? Mere se bhi bhade honge kya.. 🤔

Mahir: ho sakta hai..

Bani: baba aap kaun hai aur aap hame dikhayi kyu. Nahi de rahe..

Voice: mujhe shrap mila tha jisse main hothe hue bhi kisi ko nahi dikh saktha..

Bela: kaisa shrap baaba..

Voice: maine unn khas tilasmi pathoron ko churane ki koshish ki jiske karan mujhe ye shrap mila.. aur main hamesha ke liye yaha diwar ke andar kaid hogaya..uske baad maine jap tap karke apne papon ma prayschit kiya.

Bani: kya aap yaha se nikal nahi sakthe?

Voice: mujhe yaha par tum dono ki madath ke liye rakha hai.. aur jab woh karya pura hoga mujhe mukthi mil jayegi..

Bela and bani feels happy after hearing this.

Bani: kya aap batha sakthe hai naagmani se judhe pattharon ke bare main..

Voice : kyun nahi..

The light goes off..

Veer: ye andhera kaise hogaya achanak..

Mahir : kahi ye baaba hamare biwiyo. Ko na utha le jaye..

Veer: chehra bhi toh nahi dekh hamne

Kidnapper ki..kaise doondhenge agar kidnap hue tho..

By hearing this they just goes and stands behind their wife.. just to ensure that no one kidnaps them

Suddenly a light appears which gives details about the 4 stones that they are looking for..

" Jab dharthi par sankat aya thab bhole nath ne dharthi par aise char pattharon ka nirman kiya jisse acchayi ki madath ho.. ye patthar wohi log istemal kar sakte hai jinka mann saccha ho.. ye patthar apna maalik khud chunthe hai... Inn pattharo main pehli patthar hai

"Nagmani" the white stone : ye patthar sheshnagon ki amanath hai.. jisko sirf wohi kaabu main kar sakthe hai jinka mann sachha ho aur dayalu ho..

Iss Patthar ki khasiyath ye hai ki ye kisi bhi insan ko zinda kar sakta hai. Aur iska istamal wohi kar sakthi hai jisko ye apna malik chuntha hai.

"Jalmani" the blue stone : ye ek aisa pathar hai jo sirf ek saccha nidar insaan istemal kar saktha hai.. iski ghasiyath ye hai ki isse jo payega uski haar namumkin hai..

"Sanjhmani" the purple stone : ye mani sirf wohi paa saktha hai jiska mann saf aur sacch ho aur dimaag sabse tez ho.. iss patthar ki khasiyath ye hai ki ye aapko dushman ka har chal ka jhalak pehle hi dikha detha hai jiske wajah se aap apna chaal ko anjam de sake.

Aur akhri patthar hai

Gandhak the red stone:

bani looks at veer..Veer is shocked to hear this..

Gandhak ek aisa patthar hai jisse sirf ek saccha raja kaabu main kar saktha hai. Ye patthar usi ke pass hoth hai jo Tezz ho.. apno ke liye kuch bhi kar guzre.. iss Patthar ki khasiyath ye hai ki ye haar uss cheez ko apne malik se door rakhne ki koshish kartha hai jo uske malik ko nuksan pahunchaye.. aapne malik ki raksha ke liye kuch bhi kar guzartha hai.. ye jab bahar aatha hai aur agar ye apna malik ko nahi dektha toh ye apna aapa kho detha hai.. aur sabko nuksaan pahunchatha hai..

Veer realizes thats why gandhak creates havoc in the absence of him..

Ye hai chaar patthar.. aur ye char patthar agar kisi ke haath main ajaye toh koi bhi usse hara nahi saktha.. woh duniya ka sabse takatwar insaan banjayega..

Bani: baba aap ko patha hai ye sab patthar hame milenge kaha..

Voice: uska patha tumhe baaki patthar hi denge adi naagin..

Bani: shukriya baba

Voice: ye baath yaad rakhna adi naagin ki uss patthar ka malik jo bhi ho.. dusre patthar bhi unki baath suntha hai jo inme se ek ka malik ho..

Bani: lekin baba gandhak ne meri bath suni thi.lekin main kisi Patthar ki malik nahi hun kyunki nagmani nagrani bela ki dharohar hai.

Voice: aap ko kya lagtha hai adi naagin aap charo ka aisa Milna ek ittefaaq tha? Nahi ye bholenath ki marzi thi.. aap charon ko unn patthoron ki raksha ke liye chuna hai unhone..

All are stunned to hear this..

Voice: ab agya de ..mujhe chalna hoga..

Bani and bela : shukriya baba 😀

They all leave the cave and still in shock and whatever happend today was too much to process they reach home and decides to discuss the other day after thinking.

To be continued..

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Now please guess who owns which stone 😂

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Bani wakes up early morning and bela forces mahir to wake up early.. they all get freshen up..

They all are in vani's room..

Veer is unaware of all this and he is still snoring..

All three looks at him..

He suddenly dreams of some evil soul staring at him.. and wakes up suddenly and sees all three staring at him..

Veer: aise ghoor kyun rahe ho tum log mujhe.. aur ithni subah subah yaha pe kya kar rahe ho tum log..

Mahir: mujhe bhi uthake leke agayi.. main ithne acche sapne dekh raha tha..

Mahir goes and sleeps beside veer..

Veer Pat's his shoulder: soja mere Lal

..soja..

Bela: ab mudde ki bath karein..

Veer: arre kaunsa mudda..

Bani: kal wala.. yad hai ya woh bhi bhool gaye..

Veer: oh woh wala mudda.. kya mujhe 15 minutes de sakthe ho..

Bani: kyun..

Veer: arre yar freshen up toh hone do..mera dimaag nahi chaltha..

Bela signs bani to agree on this..

Bani: theek hai jao..

Veer grabs a towel..

Veer goes and comes out in a towel..

Mahir closes Bela's eyes

Bani:Veeranshu ye kya harkat hai.. janthe ho na yaha pe log hai..

Veer: toh.. kapda bhool gaya.. galthi hothi hai insaan se..

Mahir: you mean cheel se..

Veer: whatever..

He grabs and goes inside and comes outside.

He was about to go out from room..

Bani: ab kaha ja rahe ho..

Veer: arre yar mere 15 minute abhi khatham nahi hue hai..

Veer gets some food for everyone..

Veer: ye lo khalo.. kal rath se kuch nHi khaya hum sabne..

Mahir grabs a sandwich..

Bani: grabs a piece of apple.

Bela grabs some bananas.

Bani: hame ab ye toh patha chal chuka hai ki gandhak ka rakshak veeranshu hai..

Veeranshu and bela nods his head..

Aur nagmani ki rakshak tum..

Bela: lekin nagmani ki raksha pehle tumne ki thi.. uski rakshak tum bhi ho sakthi ho..

Bani: nahi..nagmani ki pehle bar raksha nageshwari ne ki thi.. bani ne nahi..nageshwari ke marne ke baad uski raksha ka zimmedari shesh vansh ke raja aur raniyon ko diya gaya. Mera phirse janam hua hai.. lekin uski asli rakshak tum ho..

Bela: toh iska matlab hamein bass do aur maniyon ko doondhna hai.. sanjhmani aur jalmani..

Veer: usse hum doondheghe kaha.. kyunki uss wall baba ne kaha ki gandhak and nagmani hi unka patha bathayenge..

Mahir: kya gandhak aur nagmani ki kuch aisi khasiyath hai jo hame un do maniyon ki pass le ja sake..

Bela: patha nahi ye sahi hai ya nahi.. nagmani pani main girthe hi chamakne lagthi hai..

Mahir: that's it.. baba ne bol ki jalmani.. jal se related jagah par hi milega.. aur veer gandhk ke kuch khasiyath jo tumhe path ho..

Veer: sochne do.. khasiyath.. khasiyath.. yaad aya..

Mahir: kya?

Veer: gandhak agar uska malik usse bole ki kuch cheeze dundho tob woh usse uss cheez thak leke jatha hai.. lekin woh sirf jagah dikhatha hai.. uss cheez ke pass thak nahi jatha...

Mahir : kyun na tum gandhak se bolo ki tumhe sanjh mani thak leke jaye..

Veer: try kar saktha hun

Bani: theek hai tai raha.. tum gandhak se bolo ge sanjh mani ke pass le jane ke liye aur tum uska peecha karoge.. aur hum gps ke through tumhe follow karenge..

Veer: done..

Veer goes to basement to get gandhak.

They all go down.. veer holds gandhak and ask it to locate sanjhmani.

Gandhak sparks for a moment and starts moving towards sanjhmani...

He follows to the top of the hill.. and gandhak stays still.. veer opens his arm and gandhak occupies the empty space in his palms.. he keeps gandhak safely inside his pocket.

Mahir: hamne veer ko kho diya.. uska location mil nahi raha..

Bela: aise kaise ho sakta hai mahir ji.. yaha par toh har jagah network milthi hai..

Mahir: sivaye ek ke.. mahir is very intelligent he knows that there is hill which has complains about bad network..

He takes all there...

They all climb on top and sees veer searching for sanjhmani..

Bani: veer!

Veer: tum log ab yaha aye ho.. sham hone wali hai..ithne der kaise lag gayi.. ab kaise doondhenge hum..

Mahir: sorry veer tera GPS mil nahi raha tha.. network nahi hai tere phone pe check kar.

Veer checks his phone..sorry shayad yaha nahi miltha hoga..

They see that it's the time of sunset..

But they notice a ray of sunlight is more brigther than the sun itself..

Mahir: sanjh mathlab shaam.. sanjhmani mathlab sham ko nikalne wali mani...

They all listen to him carefully..and nods..

Mahir goes behind that light... they all follow.

He sees there is a small temple where that light ends..

He enters into the temple..

He sees that a bright object shining in the sunlight..

When it sees mahir.. it starts moving in air..

It just electorcutes mahir.and mahir screams. and mahir feels as if something is filling him up.. he sees a glimpse of markat ordering her army to locate the 4 stones.

Mahir opens his arms.. and sanjhmani comes and occupies the empty space in his palms.

Bela comes screaming for mahir.

Bela: mahir ji aap theek toh hai..

Veer and bani also enters..

Mahir opens his arm and they see a purple stone shining in his arm.. and they all give hifi and they all had a group hug in order to celebrate this victory.

Veer: mahir tu toh hoshiyar nikla..doondh liya apne sanjh ko.. I mean sanjh mani ko..

Mahir smiles. 😁

Bela: toh akhri mani hai jalmani.. Aur bani uska rakshak hai.. 😁

------------To be continued------

Is anyone reading this here 😁 I do not get much replies I am just curious if people are following this or not. 😁

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Posted: 4 years ago
#39

Amazing.....pls update soon....

😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: hurrom

Amazing.....pls update soon....

😊

I stopped updating here as I am not sure if any one was interested in this ff. 🙂

Chapters are updated here

https://my.w.tt/8zTtXIudocb

Do read and let me know how it was. Thank you 😊

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