Originally posted by: Love_Rudra
Ooooh! This looks different than the show. Looking forward to read this.👍👍
Thank you!! And yes it is very much different from the show.. hope you'll like story!!😉
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Originally posted by: Love_Rudra
Ooooh! This looks different than the show. Looking forward to read this.👍👍
Thank you!! And yes it is very much different from the show.. hope you'll like story!!😉
nice...
looking fwd to read ..
do continue
Thank you for your encouraging feedback guys!! 🤗
I’m glad you all are enjoying it… So here u go the first part…

Part 1
Srinivasan’s house:
A girl is coming out from the bathroom wiping her wet hair after taking a bath. She’s standing in front of the mirror and drying her hair. Another girl’s reflection is shown through the mirror who is in deep sleep. The girl who was drying her hair sees her and smiles..
Girl – Preeshaa… jaldi utho.. varna tu late hojaaegi..aaj tumhari presentation hai na.. utho… (yep, the sleeping beauty is none other than preesha)
Preesha – (in a sleepy voice) 2 minute aur sone do na akka..
Mahima – (pulling the duvet from preesha’s face) time dekho preesha.. 7:40 hogaya hai.. sirf 20 minute bache hai college start hone mai..
Preesha – (jumping up) kyaaa???? 7:40 bach gaye?? Oh nahin.. venkateswara ab main kya karun.. aap ne mujhe pehele kyun nahin uthaaya akka?
Mahima – aree.. nahaane se pehele bhi 2 baar uthaane ki koshish ki thi.. 5min 5 min bolke soti rahi.. abhi bhi jab uthane ki koshish ki toh 2min 2min kaun keh raha tha?? Ab chalo jaldi tayyaar ho jao..
Preesha makes a puppy face and goes to get ready… after 10mins she comes out wearing a pink floral kurti and jeans with a matching scarf. GPS was reading the newspaper having tea while vasu was preparing breakfast.
Preesha – amma jaldi se khana do na.. varna aaj mai late ho jaaungi..
Vasu – ye lo kanna.. dosa aur sambhar..
Preesha finishes it in a hurry and takes blessings from GPS and Vasu.
Mahima – chalo preesha main tumhe college chodte hue hospital chali jaaungi..
Preesha – haan akka, lekin mujhe usse pehele badi maa ke paas bhi jaana hai.. unse bhi toh aashirwaad leni hai na..
GPS and Vasu looks on smiling…
Mahima – thike…
They both leave..
Khurrana House:
Sarda is cooking food in the kitchen, while Balraj and Rajeev are sitting at the dining table.
Balraj – Rajeev tumne meeting ke saare files tayyar kar liye hai na? Mujhe koi gadbad nahin chahiye aaj ke meeting mai.. it’s such an important deal..
Rajeev – haan papa… sab kuch ready hai..
Sarda comes out with the food and starts serving them.. Just then preesha arrives…
Preesha – badi maa…
Sarda turns and smiles seeing her.. Balraj too turns and smiles at her..
Balraj – Preesha.. itni subah subah.. kya hua? All okay?
Preesha – jee uncle.. voh aaj meri ek important presentation hai college mai.. isiliye aap se aur badi maa se blessing lene aayi thi..
Balraj – oh.. all the best.. (and blesses her)
Sarda feeds her dahi cheeni and gives her blessings and hugs her..
Rajeev – all the best preesha ache se karna… vaise toh mujhe pata hai tum acha hi karogi..
Preesha – thank you Rajeev bhaiyya.. (and hugs him)
Preesha – acha badi maa.. toh main chalti hoon.. varna late hojaaungi..
Sarda – thike beta.. dhyaan se jaana..
Preesha – jee.. bye uncle.. bye bhaiyya..
Balraj – bye..
Rajeev – bye
After some time Balraj and Rajeev also leaves for office.
Delhi Airport:
A guy is shown in yellow jacket and torn jeans with matching shoes and shades standing in front of the airport with a few luggages and a trolley. Another guy is standing next to him with an irritated look.
Guy – Rudr yaar.. tujhse kahan tha ki apne dad ko pehele hi bata do ki tu aaj vaapas aa raha hai.. toh voh yahan gadi bhej dete hame lene keliye.. lekin tu hai ke nahin, sabko surprise denge.. ab dekh.. taxi bhi nahin mil raha.. (yep the yellow jacket waala guy is none other than our hottie Rudraksh Khurrana)
Rudr – bunty relax.. taxi mil jaaega.. voh dekho ek taxi hai.. come on..
They go towards the taxi and rudr tells him the location..
After 45mins they reach in front of the Khurrana house. Rudraksh and bunty are standing outside the gate.
Rudraksh – finally.. 3 saal baad vaapas ghar aaya hoon..
Bunty – chalo.. ab andar chale..
And they go inside and rings the bell… Sarda opens it and gets surprised.. her eyes well up with so many emotions..
Sarda – rudr..
Rudr – (smiling) Surprise!!
And he hugs her tight..
Rudr – I missed you so much maa..
Sarda – me too beta..
And then he breaks the hug.. Sarda then sees bunty and gives him a hug too..
Sarda – tum donon ne bataya kyun nahin ki vaapas aa rahe ho?
Bunty – aree aunty ye aap rudr se hi poochiye.. maine kahan tha isse ki batao..
Rudr – maa.. agar bata dete so surprise kaise deta.. vese bhai aur papa kahan hai?
Sarda – voh toh office keliye nikal gaye.. ab sham ko hi aaenge..
Rudr – oh..acha .. toh thike.. aap unhe kuch bhi mat bataaiyega.. unko bhi surprise dunga!!
Sarda (smiling) – thike..
Rudr – acha maa.. mujhe na bohot bhook lagi hai.. aapke haath ki aalu ke parathe khaane ka bohot mann kar raha hai.. agar London jaake maine kuch miss kiya haina toh voh hai aapke haath ka khaana..
Sharda – abhi banaati hoon.. aur tum kya khaaoge bunty?
Bunty – main toh khichdi khaaunga.. Aapke haath ki khichdi ki toh baat hi alag hai..
Sarda – (smiling) thike.. tum donon jaake fresh ho jaao..tab tak khaana bhi tayyar ho jaaega..
Rudr & bunty – ji..
So… how was it guys??? Do comment your views!! Tomatoes aur chappal bhi welcome hai!!😆
PS: Special thnx to nichuss.. Thank you yaar for telling me how to upload pictures frm PC into forum posts..
How is my edit though guys??? Mast hai na? 😉
starting bahut masth hae,,,Vinitha....
waiting for Ru n Pree meet..................
So mahima akka is doctor.... not bad
starting bahut masth hae,,,Vinitha....
waiting for Ru n Pree meet..................
So mahima akka is doctor.... not bad
Yeshh!!! She's a doc!!😉
RuSha Meet is gonna be amazing!!! 😳
cant wait for it
Good going ....let’s see how the enemies treat each other