Rudhita FF: Iss pyar mai dard kyun hai? *Updated 3/11 Chap-6 Page-11* - Page 7

Originally posted by: adsh

Honest Opinion Needed

Hi Guys! 😊

Hope you all are good. I am not complaining or cribbing, so please don't misunderstand. I want your honest opinion regarding my writing. Seeing the response on Chapter-5, I want to know whether you all have not read it yet or don't like my way of writing. Anyways I am aware that I am not a great writer and nowhere near the writers this forum has. So, the question is, should I discontinue this story? If not, as I have always mentioned, I am open to criticism. If you feel that there is something I should improve on, I would very much like to know and rectify it. That's all. Thanks!

P.S.: Please don't take it as me asking you all to like my story or comment on it. This post is, as I mentioned above, strictly to know your opinion.

Hii dear❤️

I don't know how did I missed this story here..

But read all the chapters and found every part of it so beautiful👍🏼

You have written this story so gracefully.. How can you tell you are not a good writer??

Indeed the story hooked me.. Their emotions were on point.. Perfectly portrayed👏

Special mention I loved that hug wala part❤️

Will waiting how the story will unfold😊

update soon😆

I know getting no response may demotivate sometimes.. But please don't stop this story and waste your talent. Give the deserved ending to this story. 🤗

You are really an amazing writer and do write in the same pace.❤️

After all failures are the pillars of success🤗

Waiting to read the chapters now.. Please update soon.

By the way what can I call you???? 😳

Hey Shubs how are you..

I am myself sorry for not commenting on chap 5 its just that i am little busy and didn't read it.

But you are one of the most amazing writer here and speaking from my personal experience, i will request you not to discontinue any book you have begin because most of the time its not writer's fault but its jist that people are busy with there own stuff but if the story will exist it will be read either today or day after also there are many who love the story but are too shy or too busy to reply.

And you have surely got your reader who have followed the story (I am one among them) and it will be disheartening for us if you will discontinue

Please don't discontinue . You write really well and your story is awesome. Beautifully penned down . Please continue , I do wait for your updates😒

Originally posted by: sunshinesamuef

No.....do not discontinue this story....you are great❤️

Thank you so much dear for encouraging me to continue. Means a lot❤️

Originally posted by: Ka_ta

Looking forward with lots of excitement and anticipation.

Thanks a lot, dear. ❤️ Will update soon. 😊

Originally posted by: Saavni

Hey..Such a lovely update..How subtly u described the emotions between anirudh and Bondita perfectly..Loved every bit of it..And must say..The flow of the story and words u used are amicable to the situations u have penned down..We can imagine as if a movie is featuring in front of us..Though I have only one complaint that when u write the scenes in such a subtle and wonderfully just don't end it abruptly it distract the flow of the particular moment rather merge it like u did in ur previous updates and plz make it long..Cz ye dil mange more..Amazing update.plz update next part soon..👍🏼will be waiting for it

Thank you so much Saavni❤️ Means a lot. I always look forward to your views. It really helps me and encourages me.

@Bold: One request though, if you don't mind, can you please quote and tell me in the chapter, wherever you felt that the flow got broken. It would help me understand my mistake and I will try to rectify it.🤗

Originally posted by: Saavni

And one more thing I m a silent member on the forum but I do enjoy reading all the stories , discussions, and ur story i found quite realistic and intriguing...something different...so don't discontinue..U are an amazing writer and as u write more u urself will improvise and write more elegantly like u mentioned others on the forum .. which honestly in my opinion u are already halfway to it...So plz keep writing👍🏼

Aww... Thanks a lot, dearie. ❤️

Btw I too, am a silent reader myself. 🤗This story is the first thing I have ever posted on India Forums.

Originally posted by: Apsana14

Hii dear❤️

I don't know how did I missed this story here..

But read all the chapters and found every part of it so beautiful👍🏼

You have written this story so gracefully.. How can you tell you are not a good writer??

Indeed the story hooked me.. Their emotions were on point.. Perfectly portrayed👏

Special mention I loved that hug wala part❤️

Will waiting how the story will unfold😊

update soon😆

I know getting no response may demotivate sometimes.. But please don't stop this story and waste your talent. Give the deserved ending to this story. 🤗

You are really an amazing writer and do write in the same pace.❤️

After all failures are the pillars of success🤗

Waiting to read the chapters now.. Please update soon.

By the way what can I call you???? 😳

Hi Apsana🤗

I am Shubhangi 😊

Thank you so much for reading my story and for encouraging me with such sweet words. It really means a lot to me. ❤️

Your words have motivated me to continue and I will update soon.😊

Btw, I have read your stories and loved them. You are such an amazing writer.❤️

Originally posted by: wayback2

Hey Shubs how are you..

I am myself sorry for not commenting on chap 5 its just that i am little busy and didn't read it.

But you are one of the most amazing writer here and speaking from my personal experience, i will request you not to discontinue any book you have begin because most of the time its not writer's fault but its jist that people are busy with there own stuff but if the story will exist it will be read either today or day after also there are many who love the story but are too shy or too busy to reply.

And you have surely got your reader who have followed the story (I am one among them) and it will be disheartening for us if you will discontinue

Thank you so much, Rashi for encouraging me with such kind words.❤️ It really means a lot. Your views on my chapters always give me a positive push.

On that note, I will update the next chapter soon. 😊

Originally posted by: bubblesort

Please don't discontinue . You write really well and your story is awesome. Beautifully penned down . Please continue , I do wait for your updates😒

Thank you so much dear ❤️ Means a lot. Thanks for encouraging me. I will update soon. 😊

Btw, what can I call you?

P.S.: Your username is based on one of the sorting algorithms, right?