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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

@Errantnomad

The new skill he has learned is going to come in handy after they get married☺️

Smrita should find out how good of a student he is🤣


So there's their marriage in the near future!! Very good! I'm thinking in what order thought!! There's Rakahit's , then Harshu's , then there's couple in waiting in Naina and Inder and now we have the author talking of Raanav and viveka's already!

Are you going to throw a curve ball of some sorts by pushing them up the queue? 


Looks like by us all running our own versions of 70mms in our heads, we are getting a little ahead of ourselves. 


That's a nice scene Sudhi... viveka invited by satyen to a parashar wedding!

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Nishaaaaa waiting 

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Nishaaaaaaaa..........

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Prisoner & a crown

Harsha walked in moments later, despitebeing spurned Raanav could not savor the time he had with her, he envied theman she was going to end up with. Her mind was as intoxicating as her body.. hewas in a quandary he couldn’t decide which one he liked more…

“Nani kidhar hai?” Harsha pulled her hair

“Staap dude”

“Ma ne kaha tujhe nikalna hai, chal ja”he picked her up off the counter and set her down as she fought

“Practicing your lifting skills?” she teasedthe now engaged guy

She waved a casual good bye to him andtook off

He sighed unknowingly.

Anubha arrived late at night, Naina wasup, Viveka was asleep

They all got a bunch of tchotchkes  trinkets, graphic tees… the twins were totallyinto hi fashion they got jeans and belts and things that were really overpriced at Malls in Delhi

“Have you gone to meet Varsha?” Anubhaenquired next morning

“Na Ma… I am just so swamped I am fillingin Ms Gulati”

“Aur? Kya chal raha hai?”

“Ma you and I should go for a spa dayNaina shamelessly kissed up

Anubha smiled

“You think I am sucking up?”

“No way!”

“She was in good behavior” Akash saidquietly

“Dekho main gayi bhi nahi Jaipur

“But you still met him?” Anubha asked

Naina didn’t agree or disagree

“Harsha Piyush hain meri feed mein… theirSM accounts are open…” Anubha said grimly having gone on to Inder’s from thatpoint

“You are spying on me?”

“Because I don’t want u to end up druggedup somewhere or dead”

“Anu ruk” Aksah squirmed

“Does she even know who she is dealingwith?” Anu lashed out

She was jet lagged

She had no solution to this problem

“Does he talk about his parents?” Anubhawas blunt

“Ufff” Viveka sounded the alarm

“Ma……. PHIR SE wohi wohi” Naina began toyell

“To phir?”

She wanted it GONE. With Harsha engagednow with in-laws in town she was going to hear about it the second her MILwould return from Savita’s

Mother daughter were going to gossipabout it for sure

“Agar Savi ne Amma se baat ki to?” shechallenged Akash

“Jaanta hoon yaar… but ruk jao tum… abhito aayi ho”

“If I get promoted Akash I might have totravel more… how can I do that?”

“You are crazy Ma” Viveka was angry now

“TUMHE nahi lagta beta kuch bhi, if youare single… if you hit 30, all hell will break loose”

“She is willing to shack up with the guy,aap gussa kar rahe ho” Viveka was rational

Anu was too upset to hear reason

“Kaun? Inder? Jisko main mili bhi nahihoon? Na Papa mile hain? Except with his pants down?”

“That is GROSS Ma” Naina was prissy now

“Dada Dadi are going to be here for a year…abhi pair bhi toota hai… imagine having to deal with Dadi”

“Anu ruk jao main baat karta hoon” Anushook of Akash’s hand and stood up teary

“On the surface I am a successful careerwoman that’s helping my company grow, but at the core I am this mother of 4girls in India… who is personally responsible for their marital status”

“F--- them all Ma” Viveka felt bad forAnu

The girls got up and hugged her

“No you guys cant fix it beta… words cantfix it”

“Anu”

“Akash if they all do this for the next 3or 5 years?”

“To theek hai na… they are successful andindependent… BAS”

“Nahi Akash…. As a parent”

Viveka realized it was rankling Anubhathat Harsha was engaged now

Like the game of pachisi… Viveka andHarsha were neck to neck… but he had crossed that river and gone off to theother side

While in Ireland she was disconnectedfrom it all

Now she dreaded meeting her MIL and thesubtle jabs  she would get in the evening

“I spoke to Ma I told her to back off”

“Aapko pata hai who nahi sunengi… ladkihokar Viveka ki abhi shaadi tay bhi nahi hui… oh heck LADKA bhi nahi mila”

Viveka squirmed

“Its OK yaar” Akash hugged her

“I stayed up the whole flight wonderingwhat the heck…. I mean.. why is it so important to marry”

“Exactly”

I am fine if they don’t”

“Hmm”

“For another year “ Anubha made it clearit was NOT OK to be single forever

She felt like she was some prisonerawaiting sentencing hearing

“How is Abhishek?” she whispered to Akashas they stepped out into the balcony with their chai

It was 50C or felt like it so Akashturned on the cooler

“Fine I guess?”

“Ghar nahi laayi phir?”

“Umm.. no”

“What do u mean?”

“She likes him I think but she is notgoing overboard?”

“Oh good… AUR koi baat nahi hui na”Anubha was relaxing now

There was at least one good “prospect”for the girls

“I can express interest and have herbring him home again”

“Sure” she nodded and smiled

“Chalo phir”

“Sorry about that melt down I feel inadequate…I feel like I am constantly being judged for not doing the traditional things”

“No you are not” he wrapped his arm around her shoulder and squeezed

“BTW I might get a hefty raise if theypromote me, maybe we should get the twins a Prius”

“Jo aap kahen malika e aalam” he chuckled

“You do know right they wear a crownright?”

“Meri cap le lo yaar tum” he grabbed aNike cap off the swing and threw it on her head

“I missed you Akash”

“Pran nath kaho yaar… Ma Bauji hain… youknow how Ma hates you calling me by my name”

“Thanks yaad dilaya, ab shaam ko pakka 10baar zyaada kahoongi”

Anubha was mischievous

Viveka had the same impishness

“BTW Mr Parashar and Veev are workingtogether”

“Who log meri ek beti ko bhi nahi baqsh rahe”she cursed

“Thank God who ladka kaafi ghamandi haiViveka usko ghass bhi nahi daalegi… aur who bhi uski taraf kaha dekhenga”

“Achhi baat hai main chahti bhi nahi

“Abhishek is gold”

“I agree… kami to ek bhi nahi”

She mentioned Abhishek saying he knowsthe Parashar boys are druggies”

“INDER bhi?”

“Arey nahi” Akash suddenly realized in anattempt to cheer her up he was painting with a broad brush

“Umm.. wohi jo ladka hamey Savi keg har mila…”

“I KNEW IT… he looked too smooth andclean” Anubha was happy

Akash nodded

“Anyway, I hope she helps him out andDOES NOT charge him” Anubha revled in the power of the intellect

“I hope so too” he nodded

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Posted: 3 years ago

Harsha walked in moments later, despitebeing spurned Raanav could not savor the time he had with her, he envied theman she was going to end up with. Her mind was as intoxicating as her body.. hewas in a quandary he couldn’t decide which one he liked more…


Raanav has given up on her? Is it because of Abhishek? 

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Posted: 3 years ago

She told him she is not interested. She didnt insult him or throw a hissy fit. She gently told him "You dont know me" "I dont even understand your love"

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Posted: 3 years ago

Ma’am pls continue software Symphony ma’am pls it’s a request 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Been out of If since a few months... And came back to this ... and what a lovely treat from our ever fascinating author...Have never seen a better version of the all time favorite Pride and Prejudice....🤗🤗🤗


Kudos to you Author for Each character is so finely defined.... The woes of the parents, the  dilemmas of the children.... It is indeed very difficult being a woman, If you are career driven you are called a bad parent, if you are a stay at home mom you are a slacker with no ambitions.... I particularly like Anubha's character it is the dilemma of each working woman around the world... Thanks for providing us such a sumptuous feast... 👏👏👏

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Posted: 3 years ago

I am waiting to see another interaction between these two.... 😉


Is Viveka still unaffected by Raanav???

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Posted: 3 years ago

Never ending dilemma of parents and In-laws. It’s never easy to balance and society will never let you be in peace if you daughters that I married after 23. Feel bad for Anubha but glad that she has a support of Akash. For Rannav did he give up already even though Veev refused. I wonder what’s Veev is thinking.