The Fateful Evening..Arjun Draupadi OS .Thread 4 - Page 42

Please please please update

This may sound a bit too cheesy but I had a dream last night that I wake up and start my pc and check for update and to my surprise you have updated the story with a very long update full of ArDi moments. 🥳🥳

Any chances of this dream coming into reality?

From my Thread 2 ,10 pages were missing. The thread have 140 pages only.

My heart broke when I found out that Draupadi Kunti confrontation before Kunti left for Ashram was missing.

It is too difficult to recreate it.

It is one of the crucial parts of the story

Originally posted by: ltelidevara

From my Thread 2 ,10 pages were missing. The thread have 140 pages only.

My heart broke when I found out that Draupadi Kunti confrontation before Kunti left for Ashram was missing.

It is too difficult to recreate it.

It is one of the crucial parts of the story

Tell the mods about this issue

They'll help you in restoring those pages

I would suggest you tell the mods and they should be able to look into what happened. But I loved that part. Also take a Copy of all the parts for yourself so this you don’t loose any work

I did Pari but I was told only comments part was done with but not the story part. Now I am trying to reproduce the part here..inconvenience regretted.

It was Evening time in Indraprasth. The golden hue is brightening up the Royal harem and Ofcourse the palace of queen herself .

Draupadi’s Palace was brimming with activity since the maids noticed Maharani Kunti walking towards the mansion,covering herself in a shawl.

Only days are left now for her to part with her sons,daughters in law and great grandson Parikshit.

Why is she following Dhritarashtra and Gandhari? Only she knows. She can’t bear to live with peace after the death of her first born,Karna. She need to redeem herself from her sin..

Malini announced Kunti’s arrival to Panchali who got up to welcome her mother in law.

Kunti took her seat and accepted the water offered by Panchali.

All her sons tried their best to change her resolution to go to forest but not Draupadi. Subhadra pleaded with her not to go.

Kunti knew Draupadi never questioned her 9n anything she did. She silently obeyed whatever she said.

Kunti sighed with relief. She did justice to Draupadi who entered into their family ,as a new bride won by her third son.

Before leaving for her final destination,she wished to hear it from Draupadi..that her decision to make her wed all her sons reaped fruits. It helped to achieve the Pandava empire and not to forget ,it enabled Draupadi to become reigning Empress.

Kunti adjusted her tone and addressed Panchali...I am happy for you bahu..The decision I took in Potter’s hut benefitted my sons and you also.

You became the Empress Of Aryavarth.

Panchali did not say anything. She was standing nearer her spacious window from where she could watch the lake and the play garden alongside it.

Kunti did not get her expected answer. Her bahu did not even bother to answer her. Instead,she is sideglancing through the window .

Kunti wondered what captivated her that much.

She walked towards the window . She stood behind Panchali and could see the lake and the garden!

Her Phalgun is there playing with Parikshit. Uttara and Subhadra are sitting on the bench,watching them endearingly.

Chitra And Ulupi are walking upside down the lake. ..

Kunti is impatient. Here she is waiting for her answer but she is absorbed in watching...Phalgun?

Pari

Is this how I started that? Please check. I will finish it today. This one really my most important part but was lost.

What is so interesting there? It is time for Phalgun to play with Pari. Daily routine for him. Ulupi and Chitra,they walk by this time, Subhadra and Uttara ,they take alpahar for Pari and let him eat in between.

Kunti summarised briefly indicating how insignificant the scene by the lake is..

Panchali understood but did not say anything in reply.

Pari threw the ball in water as was his habit and tried to jump into the lake on that pretext..Arjun stopped him just in time catching hold of his waist. He lifted him above his shoulders.

Subhadra and Uttara clapped their hands while Chitra and Ulupi joined gleefully.

Both Arjun and Pari started laughing throwing their heads back.

Panchali gazed at Arjun with a slight smile on her lips. She always feel that only Pari is able to bring back Arjun of Indraprasth days.

Kunti walked back and repeated her question. Bahu,I am waiting to hear from you. I am sure empress of Aryavarth won’t disappoint me with her answer.

Panchali turned back and seriously looked at her mother in law,who is so sure of herself and her decisions.

A strange urge overpowered her heart and soul.. She needs to unburden herself from her inhibitions and confess before the architect of her life’s course.

Empress won’t be fortunate enough to lead normal life Mata...she stressed her line with clarity but without disrespect.

Kunti looked dazed.. What does she mean? She asked the same.

Panchali did not hesitate to elaborate. I mean it Mata. I can not enjoy freely like Subhadra,Chitra or Ulupi.

Kunti brushed off her reasoning...So what? You have power. You are not normal like them. You are the queen,empress,You have larger than life image in people’s minds.

But I wanted to be normal like them.. Draupadi clarified.

Originally posted by: ltelidevara

I did Pari but I was told only comments part was done with but not the story part. Now I am trying to reproduce the part here..inconvenience regretted.

Having previously been a mod at IF I can tell you that unfortunately the forum was set up for discussions and hence all consecutive updates are considered as comments rather than actual updates. This was the primary reason for starting the fan fiction section.