MiNeil SS 'The Perfectionist' updated last part on 17.10.20 at pg 40 - Page 29

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

Well balanced story. Love , duty , suspense.😳MiNeil as always are adorable and their baby Arya very nicely written Anjali.

Thanks

Glad you liked it and found time to read it

Your comments means a lot🤗

Originally posted by: Krithzz

Whose muder attempt ? Mini or arya ? Thrilling climax parda .

Final parda out in next chapter....will try to update today

Originally posted by: Sushdvj

Manmeet

Meri nazar se to nai baccha tha😎😆

Definitely ye ab arya yaa mini ke piche hi hoga😔

Sari police force ka dhyan har jagah hoga inko chodke

Ek dum khatarnaak mod aaya h

Jaldi update karna 😆

Thanks

Yes manmeet hamari super jasoos ki nazro se kaise bach sakta hai😆

Baki questions ka jawab agle update mein milega😆

Originally posted by: Khushi1311

Wow!!! Suspense suspense suspense...

Dhak dhak wale mod pr le aayi story...

Kya mini hogi nxt victim...

Kyaa mineil m aayegii daraar

Ya Minni ko aayega Neil k job k dangerous samjh...

Kya arya ko milega supposed to be best birthday k best gift..

Kya hoga aage..

Manmeet bechara🤣

Jaane k liye...stay tuned😆

@bold bilkul sahi

Tab tak sochte rahiye aur padhte rahiye🤣

Originally posted by: sub_94

Manmeet will try to kill Arya / Mini right ? It wil take time for Neil to get this and he might reach on time😉? Update next part soon. Looks like you wil end this story in one or two chapters.

Yes will end it in next or next to next update... Depends upon the lenght

Sare answers milenge....all pardas will be out🤣

Originally posted by: Khushi1311

and by that incident....seeing Neil risking his life for their rescue and Manmeet's arrest ...mini will eventually realise why he always prioritize his work first as it not only concerns his passion but safety of entire town and constituently the nation...how important it actually is.... she will finally make peace with his job and even Neil will realize the importance of family....the fear of losing them forever ...tht agony....etc...

Can't wait dude...

Update soon...

Tum log hi update kar lo meri taraf se🤣

Originally posted by: sub_94

Ya.😳both MiNeil coming to realisation , understanding will be perfect end to this perfectionist story .

Dekho ending bhi decide kar li yaha toh🤣

Originally posted by: Krithzz

Perfectionist ending by Anjali😎

Pehle likhne to do🤣

Originally posted by: sub_94

Even she hates sad ending for MiNeil😆 and she knows MiNeilans well 🤣 we all will not leave her then🤣

Sahi pehchana🤣

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Sahi pehchana🤣

We all can sense each other now 🤣 sab MAYA hai 🤣