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Posted: 4 years ago

But I have one pressing kostin puzhleezzz!!


If she rammed against Raanav, why are YOU MAKING Satyen Parashar catch her falling!!


She is neither running away from God nor her mom dad, she's running away from her tireless battery powered Bua! Man ! Gotta give it to this lady, she was throwing up a couple of nights bad and here she is all energized to do a ''do" for a group of 50/ 75. It's like every night she must be self charging herself with a renewable energy source 😆


Anubha is not off the mark in saying let's all move to Istanbul... ( that was too damn funny🤣) I mean this is sweet torture from which there seems to be no escape ! It wouldn't be amiss if the parashars and the Mathurs were to set camp outside Shrivastavs residence. Of course the Parashar's would have to be a Royal tent 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago

But the puja was not for HER specifically. It was a general comment for all the young ladies/guys? wasn't it?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: coderlady

But the puja was not for HER specifically. It was a general comment for all the young ladies/guys? wasn't it?


I don't think so but you see when poojas like these are done for the general good, some of the aunties minds( like my mom for example) generally work overtime . You never know which rabbit they will pull out of their hats?!😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Well lets see if the ladies can manage to reel her back in. There is even a potential dulha there. Will he run too?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Naina's parting words to Aakash were uncalled for..

Viveka is right, she's really working against herself!


Bhagwan se bhaag rahe ho ya Mom Dad se?” Sateyn laughed catching her fall

“Bhaisaab pakad lo usko chhodna nahi” Savita urged 🤣


Smrita is aghast.. why? Kyu ki Mathurs ko itna footage mil raha hai? As Bua would say... humare yaha toh aisa hi hota hai 😆


Viveka running from the pooja and crashing into Raanav is like

Bagal me chora, sheher me dhindhora 😳


Awesome❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Antiquated & Naïve’

“I CANNOT even believe you made me do that” Viveka went offon her mother

“Kya bigad gaya tumhara?” Anubha was quietly tidying the pooja spot, stacking silver trays and, and pushing flower petals out of the wayso people don’t step on it

“Are you SERIOUS Ma? Itne saare log hai yaha…. Now theyaall know I am not married and am begging the divine powers to send me someone ”Viveka was almost tearful

“Aisa NAHI hai, Papa ne kaha na tum PhD ke admission ki pooja kar rahi ho?”

“He said that to FA… NOT on a microphone (she did a hand gesture) he basically just whispered” she flung a duster” "I shudnt have been sitting down praying for 4 hours with Harsha" "sab log pagal nahi hain Ma... I am wearing a freaking garland"


“What are u doing?”

“I am cringing” she rubbed her arms and shuddered

“Duniya mein tum akeli nahi ho jiski abhi shaadi nahi hui”

“OMG! Ma… you are not even getting this! But not every single woman is gawked at by 50 strangers as she begs Mata Rani”

“Its no big deal, did you know 1990 there was a system jab ladkiyan studio mein jaakar photo lekar marriage bureau mein bhejti thi”

“BARF…”

“Watch your tongue”

“I am sorry” Viveka began helping her mother put stuff away“Ma I am just thinking what these people must be thinking about me”

“Tum Parashars ko sochkar…”

“WHO is Parashar?” she asked pausing

“Who jo lady first row mein baithi then… orange chiffon mein”

“who is she?” Viveka was always “out” mentally “I don’t know ”she bend down to collect grains of rice from the white, now crumpled sheets and caught her glasses before it slid down her nose

“Never mind… SEE…. SEE… Nobody knows u u know nobody… so?”

“I KNOW the 7 ladies from Bua’s weekly kitty, they give me clothes for my charity… now they all know I am despo for a husband” “I think you guys low key are trying to sell me in the marriage marketplace” she twistedthe knife

“Aisa nahi hai betaaa” Anubha stood up when Viveka did…unable to get anywhere with her

And went to hug her

“getting pity from you right now is even more pathetic ma ”viveka sniffled

“Bhaad mein jaayen log”

“I am so upset right now” she let her Ma hug her

“Uff” she moaned

“Aisi koi baat nahi hui hai”

“It makes me feel better OK?” she pulled away and took a bunch of brass trays and bowls inside

The lawn was artificially cooled by giant coolers blasting cold air

Akash walked up in the opposite direction, teri favorite strawberry thandai hai beta… non alcoholic”

“I am so mad at you both” she hissed

“Bua apne log hain beta” he tapped her cheek and was shocked when it was moist

“Kya hua?”

“You just paraded me in front of all of ultra rich Delhi”

Anu was also bringing stuff back in she eye signaled Akash to be quiet

“I am sorry” Akash said quietly

“SEE… U apologized Ma is so adamant”

“main baat karta hoon”

Bua asked the pandit to offer her a rich fat floral garland at the end of the pooja

Before Bua could drape it around her neck she stiffly pulled it out

Bua ordered her to hold it in her hand

Harsha was cool as a cucumber

Viveka rarely lost her temper

She usually was not even present in the NOW to fully register stuff going on around her

Making her a centerpiece was a bad idea

She avoided crowds back inside, and did not go to the buffet area to get food

Akash brought her food

Satyen watched that and joined Akash as he walked back to Viveka in the library

Kids and teens were not allowed to eat there, Viveka always had special concession

“Hamey laga aapse mulaqat nahi ho paayegi”

“Kyon?” Akash was walking on pins

“I only see you here, aap to aate nahi ghar”

“Mrs to aayin… Anu said she came”

“Arey main than a us din Mathur Sahab… Viveka power cord bhool gayi”

“Arey haan” Akash was embarrassed

His kids were driving him crazy, Diya wanting to work in Galleria, was just wearing him down like a termite, Naina was absolutely impudent, and now his favorite child was sulking

“Beti ki khaatir”

“Umm.. haan… uski tabiyat…”

“Arey kya hua… yahan… Mr Goyal aaye hain… Medanta mein”

“Arey rey kuch nahi… just tired… 3 ghante neeche bithao tobas… nakhre” Akash was terrified his daughter would incinerate him

He handed her the food

“How are you beta?”

Viveka looked up at him confused and smiled a little and let a “Uff” escape

“Chashma toota to nahi?”

“Oh no” “Its always loose… I cant seem to find a pair that just sits tight…I am going t o have to nail it down”

“Contacts try nahi kiye aapne?”

“I don’t like them… takes too much time” she mumbled eating quietly

“Hahahaha…” he laughed out loud

She looked up at him worried

“You have a sharp sense of humor”

“I was serious”

“Chaliye, hum khaate hain” Akash invited Satyen to leave his daughter alone

Raanav stopped by to tell his Dad something

He was quite pleased to find him standing opposite Viveka

She looked more than gorgeous he thought, with two teekas one in haldi and one red with a grain of rice stuck to the red one…a few marigold and rose petals lingered in her dense lustrous hair

“Pooja to ho gayi, hopefully God will beam someone down soon” Satyen teased

“THIS is what I meant” Viveka was livid, she whispered inaudibly as Satyen turned to pay attention to Raanav. “I am going to get these stupid jokes from strangers” Akash was as afraid as a mouse that just spotted an alley cat.

Raanav caught that

The men spoke and Akash escaped before his daughter could torch him, dragging Satyen with him as a human shield

She went back to her book

“That crazy about getting married huh?” he mocked

She looked up at him startled… how did he know she was pissed?

“Umm.. no.. I am just tired with all the sitting, chanting and smoke” she smiled regaining her equanimity

“And I thought I said you loved it?!” he pushed her buttons generously

“The marital status of Mathur girls must keep you up atnight?” she smiled, pushing her glasses up her bridge

“SMH!” she whispered as she dug into the karhi not even looking up

“If it has to do something with my family… then… yes” he said calmly rocking on the balls of his feet

“Umm… as far as I know the man I am dating is not related to you” she said coolly, waving a karhi pakora at the end of her fork staring far away, trying to channel Abhishek with a smile “He is overseas right now forhis commencement, but will be sure to check when he returns” she mumbled in all seriousness

He was startled by that admission a brief second

“You might need some memory supplement, you slammed into me when you were running away (from the pooja) not wanting to be an object of antiquated customs” he flashed a joyous smile finding yet another thing to provoke her…,at having caught her rebelling against her parents… unsuccessfully

“Glad you noticed but that had nothing to do with your family” she flashed a gorgeous smile, pushing her glasses up her bridge

“I stand corrected” he said unfazed, happy she was unsettled for a brief second

“Naina is somewhere around here… you might want to check on her as to where she is at with Inder” she smiled

She knew Naina would eviscerate him, the mood she was in

“Oh… that’s not necessary… Inder is not in town…”

“A naïve’ attorney is probably an oxymoron… but I might have met the first one” she chuckled

(He was a fool if he assumed Naina and Inder’s physical separation is going to end their canoodling)

Edited by Nisha0604 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

A really engaging update on so many fronts and it had me grinning throughout...

begging matarani for a husband....Akash as mouse to Veev’s alley cat....RP’s concern on the marital status of the Mathur girls....a naive attorney...I could go on and on ,
Superbly brought to life Nisha....I was practically there for the whole Pooja 😊😊

And btw, I was one from the 80’s whose photo was taken in the studio 😀😀😀

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Posted: 4 years ago

@Vee

Not only you, many in my family did it too. Well into the 2000s.

I injected that in the story to remind myself of simpler times.

Shockingly, despite a photo studio, tall pedestal fake flower pot photo they are ALL happy. None of them had 5 days of sangeet and spa days and bachelorette parties to Spain, or cocktail night....

Not one!!

Aaj kal tamsha kuch extreme taq chala gaya hai. Its utterly caricature-ish these days.

I agree with my American friends sadly on that one😭


P.S. I also feel for the 90% parents who are unable to afford any of it, but their daughters are too stupid/giddy/selfish to realize

Edited by Nisha0604 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

The marital status of Mathur girls must keep you up atnight?” she smiled, pushing her glasses up her bridge


🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

His presence definitely affects her now. She's only deluding herself if she thinks otherwise . I say this because the minute, Raanav Parashar appears on scene, subconsciously her guard is up and her calm demeanor , her smiles ,SMH are all appearing a little forced out of her.


We are not exactly complaining now, are we?!😃😳

Edited by Errrantnomad - 4 years ago

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