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Posted: 4 years ago

Back to back updates !! Great start to a day !

And she didn’t even say goodbye....oh ohh ! That’s going to work on his mind for a while. Besides the tantalising bit of info that she is going to meet a special person ....Raanav might land up polishing his stalking skills to keep up to date with Veev’s life 😀😀


And all this while he is literally jogging to keep pace with her professorial head....great times ahead ....for us 😊😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

I don't think veev went out of her way to demean raan by not wishing him bye ..he's just insignificant for her now or she's slightly absent minded.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Two things.

I'm wondering if Raanav must have felt as if he sat there like a piffy on a rock bun , waiting or hanging around uselessly , around a person who has neither use for him nor interest in him . The way she went about her business unmindful of his presence, If I were him I would have felt sat like a piffy 😆


The second thing is he realizing that not only for Naina, 'THERE WILL BE OTHERS ' for viveka too!


OUCCHHHH!

Edited by Errrantnomad - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

I don't think veev went out of her way to demean raan by not wishing him bye ..he's just insignificant for her now or she's slightly absent minded.


Even if she did intentionally demean him, I would think he deserves that treatment 😃. He does not own a sole proprietorship on the factory of insult.

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Posted: 4 years ago

@Anju & Kalpana

He deserves everything thats coming his way. She really doesnt care for him. His insults are not landing and even if they are they are not causing any damage...

He is conflicted too, he finds her extremely attractive but is too much of a snob to ever accept her as a partner


She is not a snob, nor is she wealthy, she is nerdy and unassuming, he has never met someone like her in his superficial circle

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow ! I am so in love with this Viveka character. Hats of to the writer too.🥰🥰🥰.

I am really looking forward to see how things will proceed among these two !.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Spiders

This way out of his league realization is very different from the usual one for him. This one has Viveka leading. He can not beat her in an argument about economics.

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Posted: 4 years ago

There will be others!

Piyush seems to be fairly comfortable with Viveka, joking around and teasing. Did Raanav hear about her going to meet a BF?

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Posted: 4 years ago

So Raanav is making sure Inder will out of the picture soon. He wants to get that message across to Naina. But Naina is not about to listen. What about Inder?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Captive (ating)

They couldn’t “do” much, because his apartment had somework crew fixing kitchen tile

They just hung out in his living room looking at old familyphoto albums, he showed her tons of Berkeley pictures, they held hands and hetried to lean on her shoulder multiple times unsuccessfully, she squirmed whenshe saw crew eyeing them from the kitchen

“We should just hold hands” she muttered frustrated

“I should postpone my ticket and leave tomorrow the eventis not until Friday afternoon, its only Monday night over there”

“You want to change it?” she asked eagerly as they stood ina back bedroom balcony

“I can send my Baba and stay over, you can spend the night,he ran his fingers down her cheek

“That sounds so awesome

“Afterwards we can talk about the toughest paper we ever wrote”

“then I have to stay over many many times” she trembled

“Nice” he whispered hoarsely

“You want to ask your Dad if he wants to leave early?” shegroaned

“Who to ready nahi hai jaane ko, he will say, lest leaveThursday, he is such a slave man!!”

“HUA kya?”

“I just hate the company he works for”

“Boss ache nahi hai?”

“ You haven’t met him then”

“Umm.. n.. umm. Yeah” she didn’t want to say she had goneover to pick up her Ma… the way she was connected to power Systems Engineeringwas absolutely ridiculous”

“The guy rips little people off and has built a mansion ontheir graves”

“Ufff” she sighed

“Kameena aadmi hai ekdum”

“Maybe you can ask your baba to take up another job”

“He says he is nearing 60 so no one will hire him” hesounded angry and bitter

“Lets go out to eat”

“chalo”

He took a shower, and when he stepped out, she was in theroom, they “hung out for a few minutes” only to be interrupted by one of thecraftsmen… “Sink ke peechhe yeh lagaane ko bola aapke Bauji ne” the curious oneleered

Viveka was in the balcony on her phone

“Haan theek hai”

“My Mom called I have to go” “I have to pick up my sisters”she scowled

“I am going to miss you

He just went for it… molding her to his body until she felthis arousal

They were in full view of the balcony

She pulled away

Naina had scarred her brain

She could never relax, her parents face haunted her

“Shitt” she muttered

He went down with her and tried his best to fondle her withevery part of his body

“Boy… men are needy” she chuckled to herself

She picked up her sisters and went to Buas and Ma hadcooked dinner, the twins stayed over there and she brought food home

Papa was ready to explode

He had spotted Inder and Naina in Connaught Place

Naina was sulking

Anu returned after leaving the twins overnight

There was as huge fight

“Baat karta hoon us ladke se”

“YES… please do, he is not some cheap floozie OK Papa?”Naina was all dramatic, wiping tears carefully

“Bus chup Naina” Anu had had it with her

“Baat karwao beta meri” akash spoke in a gravely tone

“Papa please don’t yell at him”

“Are u joking?” Anu shook her head dumbfounded

“No I AM NOT” Naina stood her ground

“At the airport” Abhishek texted Veev sent her a picture hehad taken of her standing in the balcony

“Yeh kab lee?”

“Surprise” he sent a smiley

Inder did not answer when Naina called

Anu and Akash lay awake wondering how to tackle this thing

“Mili kidhar aapko?”

“Main KG marg se Janpath ki taraf ja raha tha, who doosreside traffic mein atki thi… gaadi se utarkar kahin bhaag bhi nahi paati” akashwas furious

“Kaam se chhutthi lekar?”

“Ab kya pata kya karti hai, I suspect she might get fired”Akash was worried

“Phir normal route se bhi koi ladka nahi milega, aaj kidate mein kaun unemployed ladki se shaadi karna chahta hai?” Anu was blunt

“I have to talk to Kamal”

“Nahi nahi please batao mat” Anu sat up

“Arey sabko khabar hai yeh Jaipur mein rehkar aayi hai”

“Phir bhi”

“Baat to karni padegi when he returns from Antwerp

“UNSE kya baat karogey, just ask the guy if he is foolingaround with her or is he serious” Anubha tied her hair into a pony tailviciously

“Lets hope he speaks the truth”

“Hmm… kaise log hain” Anu was disgusted

“Ameer zaade hain…. Unko kya faraq padta hai batao? Plusapne bachon ko sochna chahiye”

“Hmm”

“Beqaar ka jhanjhat hai yeh dating affair sab kuch yaar”

“Aap mujhe keh rahe ho?”

“Dheel to tumne dee na”

“Strict hoti to pregnant hokar laut ti”

“Ab kaun sa haal kam bura hai?”

“Freedom deni chahiye Akash, aajkal sab dete hain”

“Naina ko dekho”

“Naina kyon… Diyu Karu? Diya ko Hugo boss mein job kari hai

He sat up alert

“Koi zaroorat nahi”

“Aap keh do” she said coolly

“KYA hai in logon ka?” he was angry

“They know we are not hand to mouth, we spoiled them, webought them whatever they wanted, saath saath saal mein iphone mili hai sabko”

“We were denied to hamey laga bachon ko to dilayen”

“Fayda to uthayenge”

“Kal ko kahegi college nahi jaana model ban nah ai”

“Karu already try karna chahti hai”

“Usko keh do, arranged marriage hogi jis din last examdekar aayegi”

Anu sat on the bed and yawned

“Uska who cousin… Satyen ji ka beta… ekdum hero ki tarah”

“To?”

“Bache dekhenge to lalach to aayegi”

Anu laughed hysterically

“Viveka par nazar rakho tum”

“Aap theek ho?” she felt his forehead

“Kya pata… Abhishek to kewal dost hai” Akash shut his eyesand muttered inaudibly

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“I haven’t told her I am returning next month” Inderlounged on the white rattan chairs in the neatly manicured lawn

The men drank beer and stretched out, Raanav was still inhis work clothes

Rakshit was waiting for his GF

“Or u cud bring her with you” Raanav mocked

“Her Dad hates me” Inder laughed

“I am shocked I wonder why” Raanav rolled his eyes

“IKR”

“U shud just ask her to go with you”Rakshit commented

“Yeah unless he doesn’t want her to meet his GF back home”

“Haha… I know what u did there” Inder was trying to laughit off

“He loves threesomes it wud be great” rakshit responded

“I HATE IT” Inder was prudish

“So u know it then?”

“I am going to go tell Bua” he got up

“Yep, you tell her good” Raanav raised his frosted mug

Inder sat down and Rakshit got up for a call

“I told her we should double date” he whispered looking atRakshit’s back

“With who?” Raanav asked curiously

“Her sister”

“U mean the TWINS?” raanav sputtered

“No the Economist”

“Well she skewers me each time she meets me, so no”

“Whoaa?” Inder laughed until he lost his breath

“she IS captivatingI agree” Raanav stared into his mug, and took a giant swig

Edited by Nisha0604 - 4 years ago

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