Maaneet ss- pehle pyaar ka pehla gum! Part 22- pg 20 / march 23. - Page 6

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Part 6

Excitement Galore !!!!

Both Maan and Geet enjoyed at Essel world

and he does care a great deal about Geet

buying food and bringing it to her

while she teases him , they truly do have lots of fun

together

Thank you.

Geet too felt the same, that he cared alot for her.

Part-7

They both started walking...its 25 minutes walk to their homes from school. Again they were busy in their never ending talks. They talked about the day's events...all the masti & fun. And they both agreed that it was the best trip they ever had!

As they were walking lost in their chat...suddenly he asked her..
Maan-geet...kaun-si ice-cream khayegi???

she looked at him confused...
Geet-Kya??... Ice-cream??

Maan-haan..ice-cream!..ab jaldi se bol na...

Geet-par..abhi itni raat ko ice-cream kahan se aayegi???

Maan-tu na...bilkul stupid hai...wo dekh...

and she turned to look in the direction he pointed...

There was a Ice-cream shop opened at the corner of the street...very few shops were opened at that time. Ok...she didn't noticed that shop...but it didn't mean that he would call her stupid...how dare he??

Geet-haan...tu toh bada "Smart" hai na..."MAANU"!!!

And it hit at the right place!

Maan-achha thik hai...i am sorry...ab tu bata toh sahi...

she wanted to dance on her little victory...but never mind...she can make him to monify her...haina???
So, she did wat she knew will surely work...ignoring him..she started walking!

Maan-arre geet...ruk na yaar...pehle ice-cream toh kha le...

But she didn't stoped...

Maan-dekh..agar tu nahi khayegi na, toh main bhi nahi khaunga...sochle??

she stoped at his nautanki...but she has her demands too...

Geet-thik hai...per mujhe do ice-creams chahiye...aur usme se tujhe toh bilkul bhi nahi milegi...okk???

she saw his efforts to hide that smile...

Maan-Achha baba...tu bata toh sahi...kaun si chahiye??

aww...he is so sweet...

Geet-ek Butterscotch..aur ek Choclate ice-cream!

Maan-aur kuchh???

he asked with that cute smile...

Geet-haan...aur ek Choclate Cone bhi!she added to irritate him...

He nodded and went to get their Ice-cream...and she waited outside.

After few minutes, he came back with ice-creams...they decided to sit at the steps of a closed shop near by.
What surprised her..that he had brought all the three things...she had asked him!!
She never thought that he will actually buy all these for her...she was just teasing him with her demands...but he took it seriously...and actually fulfiled her demands!

Geet-maan...tu tino chijhe kyun laaya??...tune toh do promise ki thi na??

Maan-Per tujhe ye tino chahiye thi naa!

Geet-arre nahi...main to mazak kar rahi thi!

Maan-achha??

he paused for a moment...

Maan-dekh...ice-creams toh main waise bhi laane wala tha na!...aur ye "Cone"...sochle ki ye mera sorry kehne ka naya style hai..."maan special"! and gave his cutest smile to her!

She couldn't stop her own smile at his cute gesture...he is really something...
And then they shared their ice-creams with eachother...snatching the cups from eachothers hand...teasing eachother...sometimes complaining that they didn't get their fair share!

It was the bestest "Ice-cream treat"...she ever had!!

7

maan n geet discussing how they enjoyed full day which is best day of their life

maan offer geet ice cream n fulfill her all demands surprising her

thanks for update...

Part 7

beautiful update....

liked how Maan teases Geet and she jokes with him

sweet of Maan to fulfill her demands.

glad they enjoyed their ice cream

update soon

Part-8

After relishing their favourite Ice-creams, they resumed their walk. And again they got busy in their talks...

Geet-Aaj kitna maza aaya na!

Maan-haan!
Lekin...ye maza double ho jata...agar kal school ki chhuti hoti!
Pata nahi itni-si baat...school walon ke samajh me kyun nahi aati??

Geet-Achha???
Aur aaj jo chhuti mili parhai se...wo??
Aur next week se jo exams start hone wale hai...uska kya??

Maan-arre...itna serious kyun ho rahi hai yaar!
Main toh tere liye hi bol raha hoon, waise bhi...mujhe nahi lagta ke tu kal subh time pe uthegi bhi...you are so lazy!

oh god he can never change! Even at this hour...being so tired...he still has so much energy...specially to irritate her!
But...she cant let him win...never! She didn't wanted to that...but did she had any choice??

She turned facing him...she replied while taking back step...

Geet-ahan...mujh se bada lazy toh tu hai!
Tabhi toh... Aunty ko roz khud tujhe uthana padta hai...
"MUNNA...uth na...der ho jayegi!"

and she got the desired effect on him of her comment. She knew...that she was in trouble now.
So... she turned..and ran for her life.

He was really angry with her this time...he shouted at her...

Maan-geeettt!
Rukk...
I am warning u!

he was so fast...he caught her in next few seconds... And twisted her hand at her back...his hold was firm... but not hurting her!

Maan-ab bol...kya bol rahi thi??

Geet-Sorry!...sorry!

it was the best thing to do at that time...she thought!

Maan-kyun?...ab kya hua?...wo bol na jo pehle bol rahi thi???

and he pressed her hand a littlet harder...

Geet-bola na sorry..yaar!
Plz!!

he left her hand...but didn't accepted her sorry this time...and started walking...ignoring her!

She ran behind him...he was looking really upset...

Geet-maan...sorry na yaar...maaf kar de...next time aisa nahi hoga..plz..plz!
but he didn't even looked at her!

She tried again...
Geet-Plz...if u want...main bhi "special sorry" bolne ko taiyaar hoon...plz..maan ja!

but no use!

She felt bad that after spending such a wonderful day & that yummy Ice-cream treat...she had made him upset.

She was busy...in thinking ways to monify him and make him accept her "Sorry"...she didn't realised when they reached near her home.

She was still going ahead...when felt, that he had stoped walking! She looked at him & then her surroundings...and realised that they were standing near her house.

She kept standing there for few minutes...waiting for him to say something...
when he still didn't said anything...

Geet-itna gussa hai??
Bye bhi nahi bolega??

she didn't wanted to go like that...

Maan-bye!...good night!

she felt some relief...that atleast...he talked to her...

Geet-good night!
Bye!

She was going towards her house...when heard him calling her...
She stoped & turned facing him...
he came to her...said with in a serious tone...

Maan-mera "special sorry" bhulna mat!...aur haan...main soch ke bataaunga ke mujhe kya chahiye...
Waise bhi, tujh jaisi Kanjus se roj-roj thodi aise "gifts aur treats" milti hai!

with that he smiled at her...

And She just loved that smile so much...
She thanked god thousand times...that he was back to his teasing & mischief mood..once again.

For the first time...instead of getting irritated with his taunt... She was so happy...and she didn't mind him calling her KANJUS.

She just smiled at him sweetly...

Geet-pakka promise!
I will do watever u say!

she couldn't stop her smile & ran to her house...shouting...

Geet-Bye..bye...MAANU..you are so CUTE!

she didn't looked back...stoped only at her house door.

She rang the bell...her sister opened the door.

When she turned to close the door...she saw him...he was still standing there...waiting for her to go inside.

She smiled and waved at him...he waved back...smiling...mouthing a good night!

And then, he went towards his home...she kept looking at him...untill he turned at the corner.

8

cute teasing time between maan n geet

both can take teasing from other but not able to take sad n upsate mood of other

Nice story

Geet and Maan become friendship started with sharing notes and then they become best friends and now Geet get bore without him she like what he like and listen his order she given him too much right on her Maan too like tp spend his time with her and they talk non-stop

Part-9

That night...she felt something different..something special about her friendship with him. Their bonding...their masti..their nok-jhok...their teasing & taunting..their fights...and most important..their care for each other! It was all so different & special!

Though he teased her like anything and never leave any chance to taunt her...to irritate her...
..but at the same time, he cared for her! He was the one who thought about her and brought those snacks & chocolates for her...without even her asking! And just to monify her faked anger...he fulfilled her demands & brought that "ice-creams" for her...and offcorse that "chocolate cone"...his special sorry!

She really didn't expected him to take her seriously...but he did & fulfiled her every wish!

She never felt like this before...nor she had behaved like this with any other of her friends!

Then, why it was so much different with him only?? Why she behaved like that only with him??
Demanding things, showing fake anger, teasing him with those "nicknames"...when she knew that he didn't like it!

And when he got angry & was not talking to her...she felt a strange kind of restlessness in her heart. She didn't liked that feeling of hurting him...making him upset!

She felt that whole days fun & enjoyment doesn't matters to her...if he was upset with her...when he was not talking to her!

Those 15 minutes when he was not responding to her...she had only one thought in her mind...just wanted to monify him anyhow!

She would have agreed for anything...just to get him talked to her again!
But why???
Why she couldn't bear him not talking to her?? Why was she so restless??

And when he talked to her after that silent treatment... All her restlessness was gone. Just that "bye" & "good night" from him was enough for her restless heart to get some peace!
When he remind her about his "special sorry" and teased her...calling her "kanjus"...she felt so happy. She wanted to shout & dance in happiness that he was talking to her again...that he was not angry with her anymore!

...
Is that normal??
To feel like that for a friend??...just a friend??

And then his care & concern for her. It had touched her heart deeply!

His that caring gesture has made her feel so special!...her heart felt special!
.. Why? She didn't know!

So many questions were there in her heart... But she didn't had any answers...
She just knew one thing that she felt something different & Special for him!

He was not just only a friend for her anymore...
But...if not just a friend...then what?? What he is to her then??
Again.. she didn't have the answer!

Even after being so tired...she was not able to sleep. Her heart & mind were busy thinking about him, him & only him!
She just couldn't stop thinking about him!

That night...that was the start of the realisation of her feelings...from that night she started to notice that change in her behaviour...and her new feelings & emotions for him!
Even after spending the whole day with him...she was still missing him... And wanted to meet him again!

Part 8

marvelous update... well written

liked how she teases him

of cos he is angry

she tries to pacify him

he was upset but he still cares for her

Part 9

Fabulous update....

Geet's thoughts well portrayed.

She was restless when Maan was not talking to her and wanted to manofy him

her dilemma is understandable

she realises her feelings