Maaneet ss- pehle pyaar ka pehla gum! Part 22- pg 20 / march 23. - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 1


Lovely Start


Geet is an intelligent student and that is great

Maan has joined her class and he is new there

so teachers has referred him to Geet for notes


waiting to see how they friendship develops further

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Part-2



After that day, they started sharing notes and helping eachother in studies. As time passed, they become good friends. They used to have fun playing pranks on other, they were like a team! They liked each others company... Even in break times, they will be together most of the time. And after school, they will meet at tution class.



Tum jo nahi toh...
Duniyaa humko...
Achhi nahi lagati hai...
Tum jo nahi toh...
Baat koi ho...
Sachhi nahi lagati hai...
Humne dil ko samjhaya..
Humne dil ko samjhaya..
Sau baton se behlaya...
Lekin dil ka dard nahi hota kam...



All this was new for geet. Whenever, she talked to him, she felt some different feelings. She used to like spending time with him. She was not able to understand that what was happening to her.


But she just knew only one thing that she liked it when he would talk to her, when he would tease her, when he would spent his time with her, when he would take her side n team up with her. She just loved the thought that she is the one who is so close to him in the whole class and his best friend!


And he also used to irritate her to get her attention. Like, when she would be lost solving problems if they had any free class...he would hit her with chalks nd when she would turn around, he would pretend to be busy... And if she would catch him aiming at her with that chalk in his hand...he would just smile at her...and would say,

"time pass kar raha tha yaar...bahut bore ho raha hai!"


And when she will be sucessfull to solve some toughest or hard sums n problems...he would tease her by saying..

"arre ab bas kar yaar..pehle hi Computer dimaag hai..aur padh k kya karegi!"


He was always up for his "mission irritate geet" and she just loved it! She loved it when he would try to irritate her...tease her.
She loved it more,when he would snatch her book to get her attention nd then they would fight for that book. It was all normal for them.


She was unaware of all these feelings that time. She was changing..but she didn't even realised it.
She will be so excited to go to school just with the thought that she would meet him n can be with him. And than after school...she would rush to tution a little early to share that walk with him to the class nd then back home!


She even started to hate Sundays...coz that day she couldn't meet or see him. And Monday become her fav...as she would get to see him, meet him nd spent time with him ...after that "one long day" (sunday).
But to her relief ..there would be tutions even on Sundays... In exam times.
And that's why she now love exams so much!



Aaa bhi jao..warna..
Ro denge hum...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 2

amazing update

glad that they became friends.

they enjoy spending time together.

Geet is unaware that she is falling in love with Maan.

she misses him when its the weekend

Edited by khwaishfan - 4 years ago
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Part-3



Present:-


Remembering all those beautiful moments spent with him...a sweet smile appeared on her teary face. She loves all those moments, she had spent with him! That was the best time of her life.


As she recalled each and every moment, they were together...their friendship...the fun & masti they had...their comfort level... She now wonder that how could she not realise all this?? She was such a fool that she never realised her changed behaviour, her own feelings!


She never realised that what they shared was not just friendship only! It was more than just friendship...at least for her! She didn't know about him...but for her...there relation was special. There bonding was special from starting...there was no hesitation in their friendship...how he used to order her to complete his assignments...he even used to warn her not to talk with those boys whom he disliked.

And she always accepted his orders and agreed to his will. Its Strange...she was not the one who will follow someone's orders that easily. Even her mom says that she is so stubborn and always does what she wanted. But when it comes to him...she can never say no. Its simply not in her to deny him.


Its not like, that they never had any fight. Infect they used to have these little and silly fights very often. They always had their nok-jhok, as if it was their favourite time pass!


But it never affected their friendship coz no matter how much they would be angry on eachother...they couldn't stay without talking to eachother for long. So, it wouldn't take much time for them to forget their anger and start their plan " Monify the buddy". And with little bit of monifying and some more 'sharaarat'...they will be back to their masti & fun.


Just as, once she was searching for her Computer book in her bag...as the next class was of Computer. Then she remembered that it was with maan...so she went to him to get that book.


At first, he tried to pretend that he didn't know about any book. And then he said that he had forgot it at home.


From that extra sweet smile of his and that glint in his eyes...she was sure that he was lieing. She was getting irritated, as Teacher may come anytime. So she warned him..


Geet-maan mazak mat kar...meri book wapas de! but he was enjoying her irritation and anger...


Maan-arre..maine kaha na main bhul gaya yaar...infact main apni book bhi nahi laya...sachii!


And before she could say anything more to him... The teacher came and she went back to her seat. She was angry on him, that coz of him.. her book will be incomplete.


After that maan tried a lot to get her attention and to return her book...but she just ignored him all the while as she was really angry. She didn't talk to him for rest of the day.


And then next day she was all ready to finish this so called fight of theirs...as she missed talking to him yesterday, so much. And she entered her class... He was already there. As soon as he saw her, he came to her and returned her book...but with two chocolates..that too her favourite chocolates!
Not only that, he even had completed her book...yesterdays notes and assignments were nicely done in his beautiful handwriting!


Now how can anyone not melt at his sweet monifying? She couldn't help smiling. And she thanked him.


But he was maan na...he replied in his own style...


Maan-ye thank u, tu apne paas rakh...mujhe bas ye chahiye...


and with that he just snatched one chocolate from her hand!
She was not surprised with this. neither she mind it...but she thought of having some fun...so she faked anger and asked...


Geet-per ye toh tu mere liye laya tha naa??


Maan-haan, toh tujhe de toh di..teri wali. Ab kya main apne hisse ki bhi nahi kha sakta?


She didn't know what to say. He was just impossible.


And he went to his seat...as the class was about to start. But all the while that teasing smile was playing on his lips.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 2


Fabulous


Its great that both Maan and Geet became friends

and she is loving the way he teases her and irritates her

she feels special and knows that she is his best friend

she also looks forward for school so she can spend time with him

Edited by taahir004 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 3


Fun Filled Update


I'm enjoying Maan and Geet's friendship

and he seems like such a playful person

always getting his way with Geet

but she enjoys every bit of it

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Hi, lovely part

Teen age love, school time fun sab yad aa raha he

Thanks for lovely ❤️ story 💕

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Part-4



No matter, how much he irritated her...teased her, she never mind it! As if, he had that right on her to treat her the way he wanted...And she has accepted that right of his on her.


At that time, she didn't knew the reason for her acceptance. She actually never thought about it seriously!

But...today she knew that reason...she knew all the answer for those questions which her heart has been asking from her time to time.
She knew the reason that why she had unknowingly accepted his right on her...she now knew that what was all that she has been feeling from the time he entered her life. Today she is very well aware of her feelings and their meaning!


And this thought brought the memorise of that day. That was the most beautiful day of her life, when she got the chance to spent almost the whole day with him...actually not whole day...correctly...16 hours and 35 minutes!
..how they enjoyed each n every moment of that day. They even shared many things about their personal life and families...their likes-dislikes.


That day is more special for her coz that was the day she got the hint of her own feelings. And after that day, she started to realise all those feelings... she had for him. She felt that that day has brought them more close. And she loved that thought of being close to him.


And then the beautiful memories of that most beautiful day started to flash in front of her eyes...

Their school has organized a picnic trip specially for 9th & 10th std. It was a day's trip to a Water park...actually it was a combination of water sports & Mini Esselworld.


They were to start in the morning and will return late at night. She and maan both had given their names for the trip. They had planned so many thing... They both love trips...and this time it was water park...so the excitement was double!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

beautiful prologue

Geet's feelings and thoughts well depicted.

update soon

Thank you for reading again😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: aparna3011

thanks for re-posting

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