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Posted: 4 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

I agree Kalpana

I dont even know how it became all about Kangna

HOW?

So bizarre the whole thing is. His family is so overcome with grief they are trusting everything and everybody. Who knows, Kangna and Rhea BOTH could be insiders too. All putting on a show. Bollywood is criminal and corrupt beyond anyone's imagination


The truth will never be found


Sorry I just got done with all my nightly calls

I will see if I can write now otherwise I will start now and finish up and post in the morning


Take your time. Should have been a long day for you. Get some sleep and we can all wait for the update

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Posted: 4 years ago
#42

Priceless

He walked out of the study, she did not turn around to look, just consulted her phone as if she had a screen shot of a title name and she was trying to match it to the ones in the Library

He was definitely intrigued

He did not know what to do about that

He wondered if she was employed by one of the many ladies busy giggling at a kitty party

His eyes scanned the expansive kitchen for he did not know what

Inder came out looking for him

"Kya hua?"

"Oh nothing"

"Are you sure?" "You look lost"

"No I am not" he claimed and went back in with his cousin

Without looking up from the ping pong table he casually threw a question out to Harsha

"Lots of people at home today"

"Oh yeah my Mum has this weekly charity kitty thing"

"Ah"

"Sorry, there isnt anyone I can introduce you to dude..." Harsha chuckled

"Jo THI maine le li" Inder back slapped

Raanav rolled his eyes

He muttered to himself "Shes all yours man!!"

Inder heard it and he scowled

When Harsha moved away he asked Raanav

"Do you really mean what you say when you say these things?"

"Umm.. like what?"

"The whole, not my class thingie"

"I never say that"

"You just have your nose in the air generally?"

"What did I say"

"I heard u mutter dude... she's all yours"

"I did" Raanav was defiant

"shes gorgeous... tujhe kabhi date nahi karegi" Inder scoffed in broken Hindi

"Thats fine... I aint holdin my breath" raanav flashed a smile

"Makes you look like an ass"

"Oh yeah?" Raanav tried to be unperturbed

the help brought an array of food and bevis

Rakshit showed up from Bangalore after losing some lucrative Banagalore Nagar Palika roads contract

The brothers were very close

"You should have gone with me" Rakshit smiled

"I doubt it... nobody wants to talk to a lawyer"

"You got that right" Inder insulted him

"Whats goin on"

"He is smitten by some gal he met here two nights ago at the host's wedding anniversary" raanav tried to be flippant

"Niice" Rakshit was kind

"And your brother over here thinks she is going to scam me out of home and business"

Piyush walked in chewing on a snack loudly

"Who met who"

"I met this gorgeous girl here Naina" Inder was like a teenager

"Oh yeah, Mamaji's daughter" Piyush nodded happily

"is she here?" Inder asked longingly

"No dude, she works... unlike deadbeats like u"

"Oh I work in Mauritius" Inder claimed

"U dont need him to hoo... to meet up" Raanav insisted

Inder heard the deflection and just did not answer

Raanav was being deliberately crude and there was no cure

The men played more video games and ping pong and ate together

Savita showed up later towards the end of the evening

"Aap log aate rehna" she spoke kindly

Inder was all smiles

"Sure aunty"

"I only have boys... so the house is always filled with boys" Savita declared

"U should have your friends bring their daughters Ma" Piyush chuckled

"Hain to..." savita waved towards the kitchen indicating Diya Karuna and Viveka were around

But she didnt say their names

"Ma woh bachiyann hai" Harsha laughed thinking of the twins

"Par.. Vi" Savita's phone rang in the opportune moment when she was going to mention Viveka's name but she left them alone

when it was time to go Raanav peeked into the study and did not find her

Inder chose to ride with rakshit, and Raanav walked to his car and lo and behold he found Viveka stacking bags of things in her trunk

"wow... shes here" was his first thought

Viveka did not even look at him

The manuscript was on top of the car this time

It irked him but he didnt say a word

He had to wait for her to pull out as usual as his back wheels were almost wedged near her bumper

The twins were no where to be seen

He wondered if the lady of the house, her employer had asked her to leave

"Bas ek aur bag laana hai" she mumbled running toward the house

"I am sorry, can you pull out" he demanded

"Bas 5 minute lagega" she offered

"i dont care... I already waited"

"OK" she said coolly and unlocked her car

"Aap apne employer ko kaho, aapko theek se gaadi chalana sikhaye" he said haughtily "Jo aap idhar udhar patak rahe ho is keemti book ko meri car aisi nahi hai" he schooled her pointing to the book on top of the car

"Office ki car nahi hai" she said looking at him confused

"Aapke ke maalik ki hai hai na... pehle parallel parking seekhen aap" he said again

"I was here already, aapne galat lagayi" she said coolly

she didnt bother to respond to his insult, it didnt even strike her that she was being insulted

"Stop wasting my time... please pull back" he said irritated

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Posted: 4 years ago
#43

Raanav Shut the F up.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#44

asshole😡.. i dont want them to be together now.. he doesnt deserve her.. POS🤔

on second thoughts.. i think he is goin to yearn nd grovel to be with her in future😛.. this thought brings me peace😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
#45

He is so full of I am better than you attitude. His mother keeps reinforcing it too. Only the rich are good enough for him.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#46

Viveka is holding her own. She doesn't let him bother her. She just ignores him for the most part. Not worth her time.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#47

Just another arrogant snob😏😏

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Posted: 4 years ago
#48

His stuffed and congested nose is not only in the air always but the air quality that he is taking his breath from is also very poor quality. He is disdainful and doesn't know any better and the day is not far off when she will come into his life as a whiff of fresh air and bring him back to ground .

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Posted: 4 years ago
#49

Other guys all seem to be mild mannered . It must be a Burden to be living like this.... to this haughty and lofty standards he has set himself up for.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#50

Ek ghante mein Ishq

“I think he came from Bua’s” Vivek dried her hair as sheexplained Raanav’s comment

“BUA keg har mein aisa aadmi?”

“Its fine… I am used to being misunderstood for ajournalist, and a politician, this insult is along those lines” Viveka’s largeeyes twinkled mirthfully

“That’s not right” Naina mumbled

“You know Bua, she had her weekly kitty do thing, she wantedme to stop by and pick up those clothes from her friends for my JNU NGO, Karunaand Diya wanted to eat the Chinese Bua was catering… and I DID TOO” she laughedsitting on the bed by her sister’s feet

“You think he was Bua’s guest?”
“I SAW Inder get in another guy’s car outside the gates, phir Piyush kuchpakdaane aaya” she explained

“You just listened to him insinuate you are a maid”

“Yeah” Viveka shrugged

“I would have slapped him”

“And get my hands dirty? No thank u” Viveka showed off herclean hands

“Tumhe kisi ki koi baat affect nahi karti?”

“Oh I am passionate… but not for such stupid things” Vivekasighed

Maine hoti to chilla chillakar Bua ko bula leti”

“Oh God no” Viveka smiled “And yes, he was Bua’s guest, abyaad aaya, I was in the Library looking for a book I thought I saw once Greatphotos of “Raj” or something, he walks over and goes your smoothie is going tospill on the book”

Viveka looked amused

“I am shocked”

“There are crazies everywhere I tell you” Viveka giggled knotting up her still damp, messy waist length hair

“Hey… u promise you wa”

“What?” Viveka turned to her sister… and then bend down again over the dresser drawer to look for a joora pin

“YOU HAVE TO PROMISE” Naina whispered

“WHATTT?” Viveka hissed with a pin in her mouth

“Inder wants me to go to Jaipur” she giggled and blushed joyously

“You are MAD” Viveka froze

“I know… I JUST want to be with him”

“Tumhe EK din mein ho gaya ishq?”

“EK Ghante mein” Naina smiled

“You are MAD” Viveka looked at her thoughtfully

“Not all of us have our data and statistics and causes”Naina smiled

“Cause to tum bhi koi pakad sakti ho” Viveka spoke somberly

“I know” Naina lowered her gaze in shame

“I know I wont make any difference but I have this rage inside me to fix something… if not in someone’s life then at least with my work”

“You are amazing”

“You are so fake” Viveka giggled with child like happiness

“PLEEZ mat kehan, I will be back in THREE days… Ma to Istanbul ja rahin hai… Papa has to go to his Regional conference in Mumbai fora week… BOTH will be gone na… pata nahi chalega”

“If they want to, they can track us u know” Viveka smiled

“they have never done that”

“Are u in love or are you attracted to him and just want aroll in the hay?”

“Umm.. lo.. BOTH” Naina’s eyes sparkled with desire

“Roll in the hay first”

“Sushhhhh pleez yaar”

“OK fine…. Only if u let me borrow that fine yellow linen kurta you have”

“YOU CAN KEEP IT” Naina jumped off Viveka’s bed, ran to herroom and brought it back on a hanger

Naina splurged way too much in clothes, Viveka’s social justice principles didn’t usually allow her

Twas beautiful but thankfully was not Anamika Khanna or Ritu Kumar or Anita Dongre Naina loved to buy

It was some hand crafted thing one of her interior design clients had made in her home boutique

“I don’t want to keep it silly’

“Nahi RAKHO… I am marrying Inder and moving to London and Mauritius so I can buy what I want” Naina was very sure

The girls laughed uncontrollably on the bed

“Don’t u miss having s---” Naina whispered

Viveka jumped up and ran and shut the door and and leaned onit and nodded in affirmative

“I miss it SO much” Naina shut her eyes and placed a hand on her chest

“Please don’t break the rule, come back in two days” “But I think we have to be partially truthful”

Naina began to argue, they argued for a half hour

Finally Naina relented

“Pakka pakka” Naina nodded

A week or so later, Anubha left for Turkey, Akash for his yearly conference

Naina told her parents she was going to go look at a client’s house “ two day trip to Jaipur”

The 3rd morning, around 9 AM Viveka texted her frantically, you ARE coming back right?

We have to face time Ma tonight

There was no response

After a few hours around Noon

She got a text

“Hello, is this Viveka?”

“Who is this?” Viveka immediately called suspecting something

“Hi! This is Inder” he said in a Brit accent

“Oh hi… Viveka ka phone dead hai?”

“Umm.. no… I think… we think, she might have the flu” he said nervously

“Oh NOOO!” Viveka felt a knot in the pit of her stomach

“Umm.. she is coming home right?”

“Umm.. no.. actually she is asleep now”

“S---!!” Viveka cursed

Edited by Nisha0604 - 4 years ago

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