Maaneet FF-Marriage at First Sight -Thrd 6 Part 61- pg-17- 29/Aug/20 - Page 13

Created

Last reply

Replies

138

Views

9.9k

Users

22

Likes

216

Frequent Posters

maaneetfavo thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 4 years ago

Image

Image

Edited by maaneetfavo - 4 years ago
maaneetfavo thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 4 years ago

Thanks for liking & comments,if any grammatical error & mistakes,plz ignore Thank you

Part 61

Maan sat on chair which one placed near on bed,his face filled with lot of emotion which emotion died in after separation from his soul,his strong arms cupped tightly in her weak hand,last time he saw her with lot of equipment attached in her slim old lady.his eyes tears drenching in her palms fully but his old lady was not gave up her stubborn nature to her favourvite child.

Maan teary face: dadimaa,I am going to be a father,outside my mishty saying she don’t want me anymore in her life,how she could be able to say that cruel words dadimaa,yes everything because of my stupid decision,I pushed her away from me but I cannot bear seeing her pain nowI am regret my decision why I did it.plz dadimaa,talk with her & say forgive me,I love her more than myself,u knew what is my love to her,I am begging u,talk with her,she never deny ur word,plz dadimaa,stop ur drama,ur maan should have been ur support manofy to my mishty..maan jerked from chairs& tears flowing on his face dadimaa stop ur drama, I cannot bear it anymore with high pitch voice.after long months khurana mansion hearing lion roaring in his own den

Dadimaa sat on bed with casual posture same way every morning everyone waking in their sleep,her casual sitting gesture not like she wake up from coma state after long almost three months & maan eyes complaining to dadi as I am ur favourite child why u did not support me.

Dadimaa step down in bed & patted maan left cheek lightly with light smiling face:timegod u arrived maan beta,otherwise how much days,I am in caged in this room with taken relief breathe.she moved out without answering maan who stand in frown& teary face.Noone say that after seeing her naughty & active face even young girls lost their charm battle infront of her.who could trust that she is the one bed ridden patient from long three months.

Maan behind to dadi whom goes to give heart attack to everyone of family members. Dadi step down stairs with attitude walk asalways she did: what happening here with mixed rude & motherly tone.

Image


(plz ignore ragini traditional dress)

Whole family looked at dadi & maan was coming behind her,their face freezed as may be eyes lashes forgot to blinking.

Already masti gang in shocked hearing outburst of geet& new arrival of baby news.Now one more shock to them.when dadi came out from coma.masti gang shocked after long time seeing their healhty & fit bossy gang leader.whole gang ran to her & hugged her tightly with tears flowing in their eyes.Dadi cocooned her children in her protective arms.she alive only for their happiness.After few minutes everyone parted away from her.

Swara: dadimaa,why u come out from ur room,after come out from coma, u must need to full best rest to recover fully,why u came down with concerned or doctor advise to her patients nope she is her dadi after only her patients.

Dadi smiled: are u not felt as I am fully recovery doctor with teasing face.maan chuckled seeing his pari(swara) frown face.

Maan side hug to swara: she is prefectly alright,shona.Now she wake up from long sleep with full power back to troubling me with all ur help with frown face.

Dadi winked eyes to masti gang.

Vicky: today really happy day,dadi come out from coma,maan interrupt

Maan: she was not recovery today..complaining eyes to dadi who avoiding his accusing eyes looking here & there.

Maan: I am right na,dadimaa..with grinned teeth.

Dadi: I recovered not enough for u,why u bothering when,where,why..why u wasting our precious time in this wh question with dramatic tone & swara beta,ur maan bhai has need to bed rest & few days before only he operated.

Gang confused : how u knew that surgery done to Maan bhai/jiju.

Maan: her ladli(geet) knew everything then surely she also knew afterall they were one team

Dadi ignored maan taunting comment: few days i was in bedridden that this truth was not changes I am ur dadi,elder of khurana,I knew everything what going on my home with attitude voice.

Maan mind: my drama queen back with chuckled face.

Adi & Sanskar looked at maan,he signed I tell u later..others dragging dadimaa to main hall & made her sat on sofa &sat besides with her.

*****

Swara & choti looked at maan who measuring whole room with his big steps with tensed face

Image

Swara: bhai,don’t stress ur self, it isn’t good for ur health with worried voice

Maan :ur bhabhi totally avoid me & treat me like I am stranger for her then what would I do..

Choti: jiju,go talk with di,surely she forgive u

Vicky sarcastic tone: yeah go bhai,bhabhi welcome u sweetly with sweet dish.

Maan angry glare to Vicky & Vicky did not bother about his glare

Vicky: bhai,now she is active volcano,its ready to blast anyone through his hot lava with warning tone.better kept quite two or more days then go infront of ur hot wife.maan made a face killer look to Vicky

Vicky: why u killing me through ur big big eyes,bhai.

Maan: shut ur mouth Vicky,I know how to handle my mishty,my wife.

Vicky rolled his eyes: for ur kind information bhai,now she is not ur mishty who madly love u,bear u,accept all ur angry &tantrums, now she changed like u.in our office everyone gossiping as she is lady MSK.better accept my suggestion

Choti: jiju,don’t hear his stupid word.yeah I too accept di changed but she love u the most so she definitely forgive u with hoping voice.

Sanskar & adi enter in room while pinky come behind them with holding glass of juices.

Pinky: maan jiju,have this juice without smiling face like servant serves master did.

Maan hurt notices pinky face: pinky,u too angry with me

Pinky: no jiju, I am not angry with u,very well knew whatever u did, u did everything welfare of our family but I cannot hide too while I hurt seeing my sister suffering due to ur brave act.i want my sister back who wizard of our happiness.you can only do bring her back with little smiling face..she left& never forgot angry glare to Adi.Adi pout looked at everyone.

Sanskar: ur lady love too angry with u.

Vicky : time god,I escaped with chuckling face,choti pinched his arms heavily.

Vicky:ahhh…while rubbing arms with fuming face.

Maan: help me otherwise just leave me alone with angry tone

Vicky:if bhabhi know about once again we r helping u,this time she surely throw out us from mansion with horror face

Maan: don’t tried to scare me through ur scary word against my wife,she is my mishty,she is more sweeter than anyone

Choti:U don’t know jiju,my di changed sweeter to hitler di,not only office staff facing angry lady even our family facing same wrath from her with puppy face.

Maan smiled lightly: yes she strict with u all,she did her duty in my place.so she behave like that & office matters,she has attitude,expecting perfection,never shout anyone without reasons,never ruthless behavior with anyone except if necessary.

Swara hurt voice: bhai,what about singhana incidents& ruthless punishment to our own employee ,our staff gossiping my bhabhi to monster character,I want to rip their head but I cannot because truth never hide right.my angel bhabhi changed totally.

Maan side hug to swara: Pari,ur angel always angel for everyone.u first knew about her intention then decide she changed or notbut I can sure that my mishty never change even she wish to change,she cannot that was my mishty.

GMSK cancelled singhana project that old man begging her don’t cancel the deal but she never allowed his word in her ear.if sheaccept his request we will lose more lives in the world.gang looked at maan with confused face

Singhana sold cheap construction material to KC that sake of our new construct building demolished by heavy thunder,for our good days that building was not opened & workers have not worked that time..if I am in ur bhabhi place, I will kill him with bare hand,she has kind heart so she snatched every contract from him & cancel his company licence too,he cannot further working to anyone & u worry about filthy employee,he hadnot deserve ur concern,baby.he tried to misbehave to girl whom studying under of our education foundation.ur bhabhi got news,without leaking girl name,he arrested & he cannot work anywhere after release atleast 5 yrs.if I am in ur bhabhi place surely,his soul separated from his body.

Vicky: we have created long bridge between bhabhi & us with sad face everything because of u bhai..he left the place with angry mood.

Maan: Vicky..

Choti: jiju,don’t worry he come back..but why di behave rudely with family members mainly pinky di..she is poor soul everytime bearing di angry in office.

Maan smiled lightly: first me too confused now I cleared,ur di trust pinky more than anyone in office.

Swara : what..i did not understand bhai

Maan: baby,ur bhabhi is pregnant,so she did not trust anyone after shivaay betrayl.she strictly order to pinky, preparing coffee,juices anything she have in office,prepared by pinky & never allow anyone touch her food except pinky.if anyone harm her so affected her baby to right.she never take outside food in meeting time too.she has more concern to baby.

Choti & swara: yup u r right..

Choti smiling face & hit her forehead: because lot of family drama & confusion,we forgot it

Swara: what..

Choti hugged maan : congrats jiju..you r going to be a papa, I am going to maasi with smiling face.

Swara hug to maan: congrats bhai, I am bua..we have to celebrate

Maan : congrats too guys, we will after my darling angry reduce..ok..i will go check my mishty..

Image

Choti & swara: all the best bhai/jiju with giggling tone.

Maaneet room

Maan stand in door step while hearing his baby mother & baby conversation.

Geet laying her hands in her own tummy protectively and look at flat tummy with love filled eyes : ur mother love you so much..we don’t need anyone..everyone betrayal us,baby.they stabbed me back,baby..little tears flicked in her eyes.

Maan want ran to her & cocoon in his arms but he missed this sweet moments last three months,he want to hear more from her.

Geet rubbing his flat tummy slowly: why my baby very silent today.are u angry to ur mummaa with pout face.

Maan chuckled face seeing pout face & mind thought: our baby never angry to u,baby love u.

Geet:sweety,sona,bujji why u silent..u always troubling me..why u did not talk to ur mummaa today..i understand i did not allow ur papa hug u na..

Baby: ha..with angry baby face of course baby..

Geet sad face: ur papa don’t want us na baby..B

Baby sad face: sachi.. I am bad baby so baby papa don’t want baby with sobbing face

Geet : shhh…my baby is good baby..

Baby: no baby badsmiley13

Geet: no my baby good.

Baby stubborn voice: No baby badsmiley19

Geet saying before one hand waist & other hand rubbing above tummy,she closed her eyes,she don’t want looked at his face even she doesnot want stop him too,she already carving for this moments long days.

Maan kneel down infront of geet & kissed her stomach..his tears drenching his bare belly..

Baby: baby papa kissed baby..with jolly face..why papa crying..papa not love baby with sad face

Geet murmur tone:baby papa love baby but papa hate baby mummaa..

Maan: papa love baby mummaa more..while rubbing his nose to belly

Baby giggled : I feel…twinkling

Maan hissed little pain in his chest side..

Baby worried tone: baby mummaa..look ..baby papa have pain..baby papa hurt..

Geet open eyes & looked at posture mindthought: why satin kneel down position god sake few days before only surgery done,now he doing stunt infront of me.

Geet removes his hand & jerked up from bed & maan stand with help of himself..

Image

Geet angry tone:why u here Mr.Khurana, I thought chandu arranged ur room in downstairs.

Maan:mishty..

Geet show her hand stopped him: there is no mishty here..goto ur room, take rest properly with cold voice..

Baby: don’t angry with baby papa,baby mummaa..baby papa sad sad..with sad face.

geet tried to turn,her saree stucked between her legs,her back to collpased on bed,maan tried to caught her waist..but failed to held her,geet back touched on bed & above maan fallen on her..maan feared seeing geet closed eyes & she taking heavy breathe sake of sudden fallen while his brain remind their baby..maan pull his body above lightly..his hand checking baby ok or not.he worried more if his heavy body pressed more to her stomach..geet opened eyes looked at his fear face.

Geet touch his shoulder : baby ok..with assuring voice.

Maan bend kissed stomach: are u ok baby..with concern voice

Baby: ha..baby ok baby strong like baby papa..smiley16

Geet rolled her eyes: baby & baby papa unite

Baby pout face: baby want sleep baby mumaaa..

Geet yawning face..maan get from her & touched her half hanging body & made her body in correct position on bed

Geet: Mr.khurana,I already said..dont touch me & don’t come near me too..with warning tone..she tried to wake up from bed But maan push her body to bed lightly

Maan placed his fingers her lips: shhh…sleep..sat on near her& caring her hair smoothly..

Geet murmur: his presence always affect me with angry tone.my body already gave up to battle against him.my tired body against my will.my baby too support baby papa

Baby: baby support only baby mumaaa..with pout face

Geet caring her belly: liar..

Baby: no baby liarsmiley22

Baby: ha baby no liarsmiley22

Geet eyes closing,she went to deep sleep,she never went to deep sleep after their separation.

Maan kissed her forehead : I will bring my old geet back.u pentrating angry with me,I will heal ur heart wound by our love.love u mishty

Baby : love u baby papa..

Baby: love u baby papa…

Baby: baby papa love only baby mummaa..baby papa eyes looked on baby mummaa not baby..with sad tone.. baby mummaa too slept so baby have to sleep na..good night baby papa

Baby: u talk like baby mummaa..chatter box

Baby: baby not chatter box angry tonesmiley7

Baby: chatter box..smiley36

Baby: baby not chatter boxsmiley7

Geet have little uncomfortable, she twisted her body..maan patted geet,her hand placed in her stomach..

Maan come little down to her belly & placed his hand above on belly..: good baby na..dont disturb mummaa..

Baby: shhhh… baby papa saying na don’t disturb baby mummaa..good baby na sleep.

Baby: u too sleep like good baby.. with frown face

Geet face has relief signed from something…maan smiled &maan kissed on her tummy

Maan layed next with geet & few sec geet come placed her head on maan arms..maan held her protectively..both slept peacefully each other arms.

(Note:Most of the pregnancy ladies imagine talk with their womb babies in their pregnancy times so I added babies too talk with their parents..i hope u don’t mind guys.)

****

Early morning

Maan walk up in sleep,his eyes search besides geet,oops she already left but where…his legs move to bathroom, no she was not here too..maan come down quickly,whole mansion have only peace of silence..before marriage he seeking give me piece of silence few minutes from his naughty gang but today whole mansion in silent mode.he just hate this silence.

Swara sipping morning coffee: bhai u wake up..i will tell chandu make ur coffee & send ur room

Maan: where is geet

Swara: u don’t know now time is 9 clock so bhabhi sharply enter in office before 9 clock cross.

Maan: I thought she will change after I arrival with little hurt face

Vicky come behind maan: is it easy bro with accusing voice

Dadi too join them: without knowing reason suffering is itnot horrible one maan beta?

Maan: sorry dadi my mistake I understand but she is pregnant..she need proper rest.

Dadi: she knew she have baby in her womb.how to take care her baby too..

Maan angry voice: my baby too..dadi.

Dadi :yesterday only u know u would to be father but she know that she would be mother when baby formed in her womb

Maan :vicky ready soon,we r going to office.

Dadi: u cannot enter in KC without MD of KC Permission.

Maan: no one guts stop MSK enter his office,dadi…

Dadi chuckled : she has right to stop u.

Maan: dadi don’t irritate me

Dadi:Maan u must to take complete bed rest.

Maan: I want to stay near her & my baby,dadi with stubborn face

Dadi: i wish to same but u should have not go to office until you complete recover from ur surgery with strict tone.

Maan:but dadi..i already pushed her away from me..i have to go..

Dadi: when I said stay away from ur wife with dramatic face..u restricted from office not with ur wife..with chuckled face.

Maan: dadi..with grinned teeth.

Dadi: I already informed geet,I shifted her office in outhouse, now she is in outhouse.

Maan hugged dadi: u r the best.

Dadi patted maan back: afterall I am MSK ‘s dadi.take care my daughter in law..if she hurt once again because of ur behaviour,next time Inever forgive..beware with strict tone.

Maan parted way: I will..but she avoid me.

Image

Dadi:that was ur wife & ur matter, I never interference between husband & wife relationship..she patted his cheeks left inside.

Vicky: bhai I have idea with evil grin face..

Outhouse

Geet : dadi,she always blackmailed me by her emotional dialouge..atleastI dont want to see his face in office time,now I stucked in home.time god dadi arranged my office cabin in outhouse not in mansion.

Geet called KC

Geet: sasha where r u, I said bring sharma project files in outhouse,why u r not arrived yet & today u have select assistant for me.ugot it with angry face..cut the call.

Geet: everyone irritating me..

Baby: baby scared hearing baby mummaa angry voice.

Baby: ha..but baby mummaa why u angry..

Geet little calm face: sorry baby mummaa not take careu..where is ur pinky maasi, she only take care my every food where she went..mybaby hungry na

Baby: yes baby hungry,baby mummaa angry with giggled tone

Geet called pinky: pinky bring my breakfast in outhouse

Pinky: yes, geet..few minutes..i am coming

Geet: black coffee too.

Baby: baby black coffee..yummy..

Baby: black coffee for baby..yuck..

Baby: don’t say baby black coffee too yuck..

Baby baby don’t want black coffee..baby want yummy yummy chocolate drink.

Baby: but baby maasi bring black coffee..

Baby pout face: no one love baby..smiley19

Baby: baby love baby

Baby:choco drink

Baby: next time baby get choco drink..

Baby: hmmmm

*****

Pinky placed breakfast plate on table

Geet: pinky why u take more time while tasting yummy breakfast.

Pinky: sorry geet,first have ur breakfast.next time I will be careful ur daily schedule.

Geet : sorry pinky..i rudely behaviour with u many times.

Pinky touch her shoulder: I don’t mind,we r sisters,we have right to scold,ha eat my baby waiting for his breakfast.

Geet eating her breakfast: his means u want boy

Pinky: yes like my jiju..if my baby enter in KC na every girls flatten seeing his charm face as every girls did jiju with dreaming face.

Geet chuckled: if baby is girl na ..

Pinky pout face: girl also ok.i want baby

Baby: baby maasi asking boy. .hey boy kya hai..smiley44confused face

Baby: baby mummaa saying girl too smiley17

Baby: baby too want boy smiley13

Baby: baby too want girlsmiley13

Baby: boysmiley7

Baby: girl..smiley7

Geet have little painin her stomach: hoo-foo few minutes takea break Na atleast in my breakfast time.

Pinky giggled : why u shouting my pyaari pyaari baby.

Geet: ur baby pyaari don’t say once again..daily ur baby doing more variety of dance in my stomach.

Geet sipping her drink: pinky who prepared it..

Pinky: oh..

Geet : Mr.khurana right..placed coffee mug in table.i don’t need anyone pity.

Pinky: it was not pity.it is love, geet.

Geet sarcastic smile: what love u talking pinky,that love left me long ago..

Maan heared their conversation hide behind pillar he know its was very difficult break her shell.

KM

Geet sat on garden bench while taking in fresh air From green surrounding & reply office mail through laptop..

Vicky: bhabhi…puppy face

Geet did not remove her glances from laptop nor replied him

Vicky: plz talk with me..with sad tone.i am ur favorite devar na..shout me & beat me but talk to me, bhabhi..u give any punishment I will accept.vicky kneel down infront of her & held her hand which one type pressed in laptop button.she stiffened..his tears drop fallen to her palm..her Skin sensing droplet in her hand automatically her eyes closed..vicky placed her palm in his wet cheek..u always said me bhabhi also another mother of husband’s siblings.u r my mother.

Geet closed eyes remind mind thought : vicky never gave upany chance mentioning her to his mother even he did with his own mother too.he supported me rather stand with mother when pammi tried to take over KC.

Vicky: I did mistake hidden from u but you r my mother na heis my father too, bhabhi with puppy face.

Geet opened eyes : u have ur bhai & then why u need me..with cold voice.

Vicky frown face: bhai such a khadoos( rude), fudu(stupid,moron,idiot )..geet angry glare to vicky..he gulped his saliva.i means not my type..if I am team up with bhai na, me too change like him..i am ur sweet devar..imagine my face like when bhai got angry ,he looked two red angry horn scorned in his head, fuming like hot angry bull with dramatic tone..no bhabhi…I don’t want plz..vicky held her legs & his whole body merged to grassland as fully surrender to her..

Geet: what r u doing,leave me legs..if anyone seems that itwill be embarassing..with grinned teeth..

Vicky: no until u forgive me..i never leave ur legs..plz…

Baby: baby mummaa.. chachu funny guy

Geet : oh chachu not funny,he such drama king..

Baby:baby chachu drama king..hey why u went to angry mode.

Baby: baby chachu said baby papa khadoos..fudu wit angry tone

Geet murmur : he said true word

Baby: no baby mummaa , baby papa very very good

Vicky raised his head looked at geet: talk with baby later forgive ur sweet devar first.

Geet irritate face: vicky get up from floor..

Vicky get up from floor with baby puppy face & did sit up infront of geet with holding both ears through his hands.

Geet lightly smiled vicky noticed tried to remove his hand from his ears..her little smile vanished in her lip..vicky doing situp continously..

Vicky :bhabhi..plz..

Geet: stop..i need some time..is it ok for u..

Vicky hugged geet: thanks bhabhi..take big diary milk chocolate from his pant packet..if u forgive me plz take this chocolate..geet nods her head..signed placed on table.vicky did same as she gestured.

Geet: today u have to attend ur college right..why u here..with bossy voice

Vicky gulped face: oh..i am going to college only..vicky little bend, his hand waving infront of geet stomach..

Vicky: hi baby I am ur chachu..i need go to urgent..evening we will talk more. Bye baby..vicky left with happy face.

Baby: baby funny chachu go way..now baby mummaa doing her boring boring work..

Baby: good baby chachu left..said baby papa khadoos..smiley7

Baby: hoo-foo..leave that topic baby..baby chachu aachi hai.

Baby: baby papa bohut aachi hai..smiley9

Geet: mummaa has more work..so keep quiet don’t disturb,..

Baby frown face: ok baby mummaa..

**********

Champaa: geet di..geet di..

Geet: why u shouting my name champaa..i am here..

Champaa: plz come with me..plz…geet signed..geet followed champaa

Champaa stopped infront of room which one next of maaneet room..

Champaa: one sec di..i come back..u go inside..geet pushed door ..room already caught in dark shade..geet switch on light..she surprised..

Baby mummaa like baby papa surprise..

Image

Image


Image

Room decorated fully baby toys,cute bed centre of room & craddle placed near bed,whole room resemble like little baby shop as well royal princess room..every baby products arranged neatly,little bath tub,little punch bag for baby,little volley ball court..geet smiled seeing decorated & baby items..

Maan placed his chin in her shoulder & hugged her back: u like it mishty..with husky tone..geet closed her eyes,his hot breathe touching her bare nape..

Maan: mummaa sleep in cute bed with baby whenever baby papa away from them..geet open her eyes..her parted away from him..

Geet: he already left us,mr.khurana with taunting tone..

Maan hurt & not gave up & kneel down infront of geet:baby u love ur papa surprise

Baby: ummah..baby love baby room baby papa

Baby: par I want blue baby roomsmiley5

Baby: no pink roomsmiley9

Baby: bluesmiley7

Baby: pink..smiley7

Maan kissed stomach: papa love u & love ur mummaa..more..geet fist her saree whenever maan kissed her..geet left the room..maan smiled..

Maan: this is only starting jaan.

********

Next morning

Geet shouting sasha: where is my assistant..u selected anyone or not

Sasha: yes mam..few minutes ur assistant will be arrived.

Geet:if not, you will be fired from ur job..hang on phone with angry face.

Geet sincerely reading files someone placed her coffee mug on table..her hand taken coffee mug without looked at person face

Geet: u r late in ur first day itself while sipping her coffee..

Sorry mishty..

Geet angry glare to person: what r u doing in my office,Mr.khurana…you have any work with me..

Maan: I am coming to doing my work only mishty..

Geet:what work mr.khurana..making coffee for me..that was my assistant job.

Maan smirked face geet closed her eyes: no..

Maan : yes..i am ur new assistant..

Geet glare eyes: will u please wait outside for few minutes.

Maan : sure..he left outside

Geet called sasha, she attend single ring

Sasha: yes mam..

Geet: how could select him to my assistant

Sasha: why mam,he has good profile,eductaion even he has over qualify too & accept whatever amount he pay for his job. No one accept low salary..it is good na

Geet: hell ur concerned about my money,I never bankrupt give high pay to any of my employees.u know whom u r selected..wait how u did it interview..

Sasha: by phone mam

Geet: phone..u didnot interview personally, u don’t know how to take interview,sasha fuming face

Sasha: u have personal assistant today morning,how is it possible, single day I will arrange assistant for u..time god adi suggested his name & send profile too, he did interview personally even I had taken interview by phone too,why u blaming me..go ask ur adi jiju.

Geet: sasha..

Sasha fear face: oh sorry mam..

Geet:I am wasting my time with u..go search new assistant & replace him soon

Sasha: I cannot, he already signed contract..signed document with adi ..we cannot dismissed without pre notice so we cannot throw out from office.

Geet taken long breathe: notice time

Sasha: one month

Geet: great..cut the call..

Sasha: afterall this geet too ordering me.if MK is alive this geet never treat me this way.

(poor sasha don’t know she already treating great MSK same way)

*****

Geet: so today onwards u r my secretary..

Maan: yes mishty..geet cut off his word..

Geet: not mishty..mam..call me mam with bossy tone

Maan:yes mi..geet glare to maan..i mean Mam

Geet : good…prepare my meeting schedule & arrange sharma meeting tomorrow in outhouse. Why u starring me..go do ur work..

Maan : yes mam.

Maan thought: what is this babaji, I am calling my hot hot wife to mam..this is really ridiculous

*******

Image

Maan: hello..while holding phone recevier

Geet : come to my cabin..

Maan imitate voice:..atleast call by name na..Maan how sweet name whenever hearing my name from her mouth..i felt like blessed & flying in air but today come to my cabin bossy (imitate like geet)

Maan enter geet cabin & geet raised one eye brow: ask permission before enter my cabin.

Maan: my previous secretary never knock the door nor seeking permission enter my cabin, mam..while indirectly taunting to geet.

Geet : ok..where is ur notepad..

Maan: u did not said right..

Geet fuming face: u r my secretary..are u thinking I am calling u play volley ball with u.

Maan: No volley ball play is not good for u in pregnancy time..we will play chess. Chess games make active in our brain..its is good for baby too..our baby will become like chess master viswanathan anand..our baby learn chess in ur womb itself..what u say mishty

Geet get up from chair & banged her hand infront table:enough..i don’t want play any games with u & I don’t want my baby learn chess games too

Maan: why mishty chess games really brain active game..u know queen have more power ..the strength of empire its come from king but strength of king its come from queen..without queen king was nothing..

Geet smirked: queen doing everything protect to king without king trust what is that use of queen power.

Maan:its doesnot mean king not trust queen love,its was king fear, king always afraid losing his queen.without queen,king have less chance to survives indeeds.

Geet:queen do anything protect to her king why king throw out from his life.

Maan:if king will die..then game will be come to end..king don’t want his queen life come to end.

Geet: without king,queen never wish alive in battle field.

Maan touched his forehead to her head: my queen ‘s king never left her side..her king always follow her like her shadow…geet closed her eyes to control her tears.while maan rubbing her cheeks..

Maan kissed her closed eyes: love u mishty..ur king head only bow down infront of his queen..& I need u to cross my every obstacles in my thorn lifes..

In chess games not only king & queen only..elephants,horses,minister & pawn there..like us..

Maaneet separated from away & maan angry glare to gang..

Maan mind: always enter in wrong time..

Baby: baby mummaa..queen

Baby:then baby papa king..

Baby:baby chachu,mamu,mami,chachi,maasi role of elephants,horses,minister

Baby: ha..pawn role on champaa & chandu..

Baby:..wowooo..smiley19

Baby: why u crying babysmiley44

Baby: then baby what role play on chess..smiley19

Baby:hmmmm.

Geet: baby play role on soul of king & queen

Part end

Precap

Choti: jiju..Maa coming with giggling face

Maan: oh no…janu maa come back..with horror face..smiley36 she will give me best lecture no one best university scholar cannot give me as like janumaa smiley36

*******

Vicky: bhai really wasting spending his money to ur study..

Swara angry glare : bhai..

Choti: this time I accept vicky..

Vicky: everytime who against my every word that person too accept I am right..

Choti: u r studying MBBS then why u cannot assurely say that baby is boy or girl seeing di sonar scan report.

Vicky: knowing baby gender before child birth it was against rule..but we never harm our baby na..why u did not say baby is girl or boy..i don’t want lose my bet surely baby is girl

Choti: no baby is boy

Swara confused mindthought: how could I convey them..even I did not understand one sonar photo images shown as baby is girl child other sonar photo images as baby is boy child..how is it possible..i already confused state..smiley37

***************

Sharmi: its only good for geet life..choice is urs only..if u want geet or baby..think quick already she is three months pregnant.smiley13

Abortion..smiley19

Anyone want evil gang back to mansion smiley15

Maan pov..i hold that part..after I will update after one or two part..

More masti & baby talk.. smiley42

If u likes it..plz do likes & comments smiley42


If u want weekly once MFS update i will but short update only possible.is it ok for u guys ?smiley42smiley42smiley42



Edited by maaneetfavo - 4 years ago
maaneetfavo thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 4 years ago

PM LATER


I will update one or two stories too..

👍🏼

Edited by maaneetfavo - 4 years ago
natashathakur thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome update n maan regret his decision of leaving her n geet love's him but can't forget that he left her n hide about his illness n so she is not ready to forgive him n maan understand her feeling n he knows he did wrong while hiding about his condition n bcoz of him everything on suffering bcoz geet is not talking with anyone bcoz all know about maan except her so she feels everyone betrayal her n dadi recover from coma n maan become geet assistant n thnxx for pm me

aparna3011 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 4 years ago

61

geet is not accepting maan's sorry n giving her cold behavior to every on in family including maan

jasika08 thumbnail
Visit Streak 1000 Thumbnail Visit Streak 750 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 4 years ago

Lovely update

Love it

Waiting for next update

janu2006 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful part

Maan trying to manofy Geet

Hope he is able to now

Also Shasha not knowing maan is the assistant to Geet

Cont soon

swapna.p thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update..

Waiting for next update...

khwaishfan thumbnail
Visit Streak 1000 Thumbnail Visit Streak 750 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 4 years ago

Part 61

exceptional update... well written

glad that dadi is fine

Maan has a long road ahead of him.

he knows what he did.

Geet's anger is understandable.

liked Geet talking to the baby.

Maan also speaks to the baby

Maan now Geet's asssitant

hope he manages to appease Geet

update soon

jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

maan's dialogues to Dadi were painful.everyone hugging dadi was nice.maaneet baby conversation was emotional n cute.wow Dadi shifted geet to outhouse for maan.loved choti saying that though geet changed her love for maan hasn't changed.loved maan saying that geet cant change even if she wants to.loved maan defending geet for being an angry employer.pinky baby part was nice.Vicky geet scene was hilarious.baby saying chachu is funny was funny.the room looks so cute .maan kissing geet's stomach n she walking away angrily was a cute scene.maan saying that he is her new assistant n geet yelling at him was hilarious.sasha thinking that if maan was alive geet wouldn't have treated her like this was funny.maaneet king queen conversation was nice.geet saying about baby's role in chess was nice.perfect pics. missed geet's pics

Edited by jasminerahul - 4 years ago

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: NilzStorywriter

1 years ago

Something About You- MG || (Part 92|Page 111)- Last Part

Something About You Hi all Lovelies, I am starting to post a new wonderful story called 'Something About Love'. The credit for writing concept...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme

1 years ago

Maaneet FF- Love Echoes Beyond Dimensions -Chapter 2 Pg 10 Jun 25

Dear All, No, no no... No idea of starting it in near future. Just wanted to book this title as I have an overall idea of the story. These days...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pumpkinseed

5 months ago

Maaneet Stories Updates~ New Part Updated~pg 44~31.07.25

You can stay updated with all the latest updates in my stories right here in this thread. I will be updating the stories almost every day. Feel...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: SillySoni

1 years ago

Ineffable - Maaneet FF - Chapter 22 page 28 - 9/12/24 Ineffable - Maaneet FF - Chapter 22 page 28 - 9/12/24

Hi, so I'm bringing you all a new story because Bekhudi is nearing its end. Thank you my loyal readers for giving love to my previous ffs. I...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m

3 years ago

Maaneet New SS -Dosti ya Pyaar Thread 2-Part 62 page 40 24/6/25

Prologue Zindagi ke kuch faisle hum lete hai or kuch yeh zindagi humse karvati hai.. kabhi hass ke to kabhi is dil pe pathar rakh kar!! but is...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".