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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Minhasmansi92

Karna padega menaka ko kill!!! Agar Rishabh margeya na toh Bhai main depression me jazoor chale jaogi!!!! Abhi jeene De use!!!! Prerna ko bhi thoda time spend Karne de us ke Saath!!!! Kukki ko bhi!!!!

Me not killing Menaka. Usko emotionally bhaut kill kar diya hai maine already. Abhi to jeeyega uska tension nahi lene ka. We are talking about 15 sal baad ka scene :)

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

yeh thanos ka finger snap hai..

ya iron man ka??

So you are making RB like Tony stark?? dying while saving the world??

Kaahe....😒

His world is his family. If he dies protecting them to Tony Stark hi ban jayega in a way. Not saying that's how he is going to go.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Mat maaro use please.. 😭atleast let him celebrate his golden jubilee shanti se.. 60 ke baad tapkaao chalega...

50 is good trust me. Thoda feel ayega

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Posted: 5 years ago

I told you what Kukki will do if we get there.. remember?? 😊

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Posted: 5 years ago

Hey there. It's been a while. Hope all is good smiley31

hey good with me, hope you're fine too x

Yess I am.. just a bit tired after a loongg day.

that's good hun, take it a day at a time x

Yeah I did. Slept buy woke up with a horrible dream

first of all thank you for updating, i can understand with KSG's version of RB gone how the inspiration must have dwindled.

Dwindled??? It flat lined. It was on ventilator barely surviving the trauma. It was mercilessly killed. smiley19

smiley37lol

Trust me it was inspiration in the ICU, after what happened. GIFs were prescribed to me for some relief. It helped a little.

i know what you mean smiley19

Thank you 🤗

now for the analysis. it was a good chapter. all that introspect was needed, yes I guess, something before she gets into action. Menaka's flashbacks provide us with a different version of RB. I hope the differenciation was visible because it connects to a conversation how Rishabh turned into Mr. Bajaj. So it will only work if there was a slight differnce visible in his two versions. it really is, it'll be nice to see how he became Mr Bajaj (much needed backstory we NEVER got either smiley7)

Yayyy.. dikha dikha thoda diff dikha. Backstory will open up in parts with all thr FBs. :)

looking forward to it

Lets see how it comes out and when.

Prerna's introspect allow her to progress as a character & realise her growing feelings for RB & provide the reader with the growth she deserved but never got. it'll be interesting to see whether how she realises these feelings & whether she acts upon them. She has to act now before it's too late and not just because of Menaka but Kukki more importantly and the family she came back to Mumbai for. She needs Rishabh for all that. so true, will also be nice to see start of romance? They arr getting.into a friendship mode. So moments honge. But feelings will be one sided. Guess you know whose side that'll be :) can't wait for both. I'm glad feelings will be from P, it's high time. If this was real life anyone married to RB would have already fallen for him. i mean most women get married per families wishes & adjust fine, RB fir bi smiley42

I agree in real.life either a gill would have fallen in love. If not would have taken a stand for herself unlike.Prerna who did nothing in the show.

loved the fact that you give each character their moment to add to the story & portray their emotions well. Thank you sooo very much :)

the icu scene was written very well. Meneka's feelings are relatable, she loves RB soo much but has made a mistake that he can't seem to forgive. it must be heart-breaking to be soo close to someone you love but not be able to actually be close, the phrase 'so close yet so far' comes to mind. I wish I could sum it up so well myself. Thank you. She was closest in that moment yet soo far. She wouldn't even be there if he was awake.smiley38 smiley19

i know that the end game is PreRish & we have more affinity towards P just because we know her but still heart feels sorry for M.

May be because her love at present is unconditional. your talking of Menaka's love right?

Yes I meant Menaka's way of loving.

ah yes makes sense. i think once we know how BIG that mistake was we'll be able to relate to RB's feelings of resentment more.

Another question is if she did anything wrong at all 😃

Prerna has also become more independent & strong, loved the conversation she had with her mum. this is the progression a character realistically goes through (shame KZK never allowed her to do this)

KZK ka yaad bhi nahi karna hai mujhe.

smiley35 mujhe aise wali feelings aati hai, soo glad stopped watching. Even if I watch, I skip Bajaj part. I don't know who he is. i know, KP may be a good actor but doesn't give the same vibe.

Jo bhi ho Bajaj isn't Bajaj anymore.

Prerna ko kya progress karte. her characterisation is smiley44ye bandi has become worse. Let me not say more nahi to story.ki prena gadbad ho jayegi. Kya musibat hai...

honestly how hard is it show dekhke it looks bhuat hi hard hai. Unhone to jo tha woh bhi ajeeb kar diya. But yes here she is way more clear in her mind about Rishabh. Now she can take steps in his direction knowing he could be anything but he is not a bad person as everyone back Calcutta projected am so glad she's a fully fledged character in yours, very well written & thinking with her own mind. Thank you so much for this. She is slow but thinking for sure (I hope so) hallelujah

can't wait for the next update. want to hear more of Prerna's conversation with a sleeping RB & her attempts to become friends with him once he awakens.

The conversation where it ends will continue. From a single sided monolgue (that's what i meant lol) yessss.. to proper conversation between two individuals is where we head next.

Thank you soo much for alll your time and for being so patient with me. Appreciate it smiley31

smiley31

p.s loved the 'know your staff' comment smiley2

Hahaa.. so you noticed it too.. soon she will know why Mehra said that :)

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Posted: 5 years ago

Hey, so I have just finished with thread1 and it was amazing. So, the best part about it all was, both pre and rishabh doing what they actually should, having their own lives. Finally, Prerna got to be a self respecting person she always was. And Rishabh, as always was plain amazing. Are you perhaps a management student or smthng? Because those business details flew right over my head!😆

Adhiraj pissed me off tho, over and over. The pace of your story is good, the best part about it being you building it step by step into something very meaningful. That's me after reading thread 1. And that brings me to my query- WHERE IS THREAD2???!!!! I CANT FIND IT! AND I'M WITHERING FROM ANTICIPATION HERE!!!!!.

So, i clicked the link but it looked like you've removed the chapters. Kindly, put them up again or something. Because i really wanna read' em.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Finally you are back, was missing this story so much

Beautiful update, no words for it👏

Meneka's love for Rishabh is unconditional, don't know what went wrong

The flashback was beautiful, Rishabh was so different there

Prerna is shaken from the icu incident, she needed a jolt to introspect herself

Masi and Shivi feels that return of Anurag will change Prerna, let's see how Prerna will react after his return

Waiting for next

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Posted: 5 years ago

Aaahhh ...finally you updated 😍😍❣️

And it's awesome as usual..

I missed RB though ... Please wake him up in the next update🤣🤣🤣🤣

Prerna bilkul sahi ja rahi hai.. I think she will soon realise her love for bajaj...

I wonder when will anurag make his entry.... It will be reaaaally interesting to see prerna's reaction to his return..😄😄

I am glad you could finally connect with this story.❣️ Thank you so much❣️👍👏👏👏👏 I really missed reading your updates.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Hey there. It's been a while. Hope all is good smiley31

hey good with me, hope you're fine too x

Yess I am.. just a bit tired after a loongg day.

that's good hun, take it a day at a time x

Yeah I did. Slept buy woke up with a horrible dream

i hate it when that happens. sometimes dreams are the way we subconciously work out the problems we're facing in real life...or sometimes they're just dreams lol.

first of all thank you for updating, i can understand with KSG's version of RB gone how the inspiration must have dwindled.

Dwindled??? It flat lined. It was on ventilator barely surviving the trauma. It was mercilessly killed. smiley19

smiley37lol

Trust me it was inspiration in the ICU, after what happened. GIFs were prescribed to me for some relief. It helped a little.

i know what you mean smiley19

Thank you 🤗

now for the analysis. it was a good chapter. all that introspect was needed, yes I guess, something before she gets into action. Menaka's flashbacks provide us with a different version of RB. I hope the differenciation was visible because it connects to a conversation how Rishabh turned into Mr. Bajaj. So it will only work if there was a slight differnce visible in his two versions. it really is, it'll be nice to see how he became Mr Bajaj (much needed backstory we NEVER got either smiley7)

Yayyy.. dikha dikha thoda diff dikha. Backstory will open up in parts with all thr FBs. :)

looking forward to it

Lets see how it comes out and when.

know it'll be good, have faith in you 👍🏼

Prerna's introspect allow her to progress as a character & realise her growing feelings for RB & provide the reader with the growth she deserved but never got. it'll be interesting to see whether how she realises these feelings & whether she acts upon them. She has to act now before it's too late and not just because of Menaka but Kukki more importantly and the family she came back to Mumbai for. She needs Rishabh for all that. so true, will also be nice to see start of romance? They arr getting.into a friendship mode. So moments honge. But feelings will be one sided. Guess you know whose side that'll be :) can't wait for both. I'm glad feelings will be from P, it's high time. If this was real life anyone married to RB would have already fallen for him. i mean most women get married per families wishes & adjust fine, RB fir bi smiley42

I agree in real.life either a gill would have fallen in love. If not would have taken a stand for herself unlike.Prerna who did nothing in the show.

truer words have never been spoken.

loved the fact that you give each character their moment to add to the story & portray their emotions well. Thank you sooo very much :)

the icu scene was written very well. Meneka's feelings are relatable, she loves RB soo much but has made a mistake that he can't seem to forgive. it must be heart-breaking to be soo close to someone you love but not be able to actually be close, the phrase 'so close yet so far' comes to mind. I wish I could sum it up so well myself. Thank you. She was closest in that moment yet soo far. She wouldn't even be there if he was awake.smiley38 smiley19

i know that the end game is PreRish & we have more affinity towards P just because we know her but still heart feels sorry for M.

May be because her love at present is unconditional. your talking of Menaka's love right?

Yes I meant Menaka's way of loving.

ah yes makes sense. i think once we know how BIG that mistake was we'll be able to relate to RB's feelings of resentment more.

Another question is if she did anything wrong at all 😃

hope it's not just a misunderstanding, otherwise don't know if I'd root for PreRish or PreNekha/MeRish??? is there an official ship name?

Prerna has also become more independent & strong, loved the conversation she had with her mum. this is the progression a character realistically goes through (shame KZK never allowed her to do this)

KZK ka yaad bhi nahi karna hai mujhe.

smiley35 mujhe aise wali feelings aati hai, soo glad stopped watching. Even if I watch, I skip Bajaj part. I don't know who he is. i know, KP may be a good actor but doesn't give the same vibe.

Jo bhi ho Bajaj isn't Bajaj anymore.

😭

Prerna ko kya progress karte. her characterisation is smiley44ye bandi has become worse. Let me not say more nahi to story.ki prena gadbad ho jayegi. Kya musibat hai...

honestly how hard is it show dekhke it looks bhuat hi hard hai. Unhone to jo tha woh bhi ajeeb kar diya. But yes here she is way more clear in her mind about Rishabh. Now she can take steps in his direction knowing he could be anything but he is not a bad person as everyone back Calcutta projected am so glad she's a fully fledged character in yours, very well written & thinking with her own mind. Thank you so much for this. She is slow but thinking for sure (I hope so) hallelujah

can't wait for the next update. want to hear more of Prerna's conversation with a sleeping RB & her attempts to become friends with him once he awakens.

The conversation where it ends will continue. From a single sided monolgue (that's what i meant lol) yessss.. to proper conversation between two individuals is where we head next.

Thank you soo much for alll your time and for being so patient with me. Appreciate it smiley31

smiley31

p.s loved the 'know your staff' comment smiley2

Hahaa.. so you noticed it too.. soon she will know why Mehra said that :)

i think I've got an idea 😉

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Posted: 5 years ago

Naa na .. ye to fun nahi hai. 6 sal mein aisa kya kar lega..

Arey 6 saal mein he can do a lot atleast kukki ko train kar lega to handle BI.


I have to agree its funsmiley36

I know you have too much fun while someone comes to your back with stick..😆

He has done too much wrong with himself. Ab bhugatna pad rha hai smiley44

Abhi kya kare bechara uski life ke lafde hi nahi khatam ho rahe...n upar se...

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Past mein rehke bhi present and future mein reh sakti hai. Lets see kya karti hai.

Abhi usko mazdhaar mein latkaa kar mat rakho let her move on without any guilt...

I meant Prerna and Tanvi help each other get what they want :)

ya yeh dono ek dusre ka sahaara banegi...👍🏼

Light hearted bhi heavy ho jate hain mujhsesmiley13 That bad I am smiley36

Seriously?? you are too good with writing re,,, DW lighthearted scene likhne mein I will help you..🤗

Waise bhi I do lot of faltu ka baat...😆

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